Kuch Alfaz______________Baadal

by baadal102 on January 04, 2010, 07:33:34 AM
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Chand ke kaabil khud ko na samaj,
Hum sitaron ke sehar mai aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum apne sapne sajane aa gaye,

Dekh ke itlata hua ek taara,
Hum us ke bahut kareeb aa gaye,

Baya kar dil ka haal apna,
Hum us ke sapne le ke aa gaye,

Roshan kiya ghar baar ko apne,
Hum us ki roshni le ke aa gaye,

Hue jo subeh to sab jhoot nikla,
Hum farabi se dhokha kha ke aa gaye,

Nahi thi koi roshni or na thi chamak,
Hum jis patther ko apna samaj ke aa gaye,

Suraj se hi tha jis ka wajood,
Hum kyo us se dil laga ke aa gaye,

Khel hai jis ke liye kisi ka jiwan,
Hum us ke liye khud ko luta ke aa gaye,

Suna.ne dil ka haal apna yaaro,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye..........

Baadal
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2010, 07:45:04 AM »
wow badal ji it's awesome....
keep it up. Thumbs UP
 Clapping Smiley  Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2010, 08:25:42 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Baadal Ji
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2010, 08:34:41 AM »
thanx a lot

DC ji

N

RH ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2010, 09:49:13 AM »
Bahoot khoob Baadalji badi achhi kavita hai aap ki... Applause Applause Applause Applause


Loot k taaro ki roshni aur sapne tum aa gaye
Sapne apna ghar sajaane kay tum ko bhaa gaye

Lootna he tha tumko bhee,Neeyat jo aysi pa gaye
Khchh alfaaz sunn k aapke,hum bhi dhokha kha gaye


Quote from: baadal102 on January 04, 2010, 07:33:34 AM


Chand ke kaabil khud ko na samaj,
Hum sitaron ke sehar mai aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum apne sapne sajane aa gaye,

Dekh ke itlata hua ek taara,
Hum us ke bahut kareeb aa gaye,

Baya kar dil ka haal apna,
Hum us ke sapne le ke aa gaye,

Roshan kiya ghar baar ko apne,
Hum us ki roshni le ke aa gaye,

Hue jo subeh to sab jhoot nikla,
Hum farabi se dhokha kha ke aa gaye,

Nahi thi koi roshni or na thi chamak,
Hum jis patther ko apna samaj ke aa gaye,

Suraj se hi tha jis ka wajood,
Hum kyo us se dil laga ke aa gaye,

Khel hai jis ke liye kisi ka jiwan,
Hum us ke liye khud ko luta ke aa gaye,

Suna.ne dil ka haal apna yaaro,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye..........

Baadal
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riyaz106
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2010, 11:58:16 AM »
Wah wah Badal Ji bahut umdah creation hai. Nice creation. Ek shere arz hai

Ek Bar Hi Jee Bhar Ke Saza Kyun Nahi Detey
Main Harf-E-Ghalat Hon To Mita Kyun Nahi Detey
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baadal102
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2010, 12:44:00 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 04, 2010, 09:49:13 AM
Bahoot khoob Baadalji badi achhi kavita hai aap ki... Applause Applause Applause Applause


Loot k taaro ki roshni aur sapne tum aa gaye
Sapne apna ghar sajaane kay tum ko bhaa gaye

Lootna he tha tumko bhee,Neeyat jo aysi pa gaye
Khchh alfaaz sunn k aapke,hum bhi dhokha kha gaye



Applause koyal ji bahut aacha likha aap ne
       daad kabool farmayen
       yakinan inn lines ka jawab to jaroor
       dena hoga hume,
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2010, 12:45:59 PM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on January 04, 2010, 11:58:16 AM
Wah wah Badal Ji bahut umdah creation hai. Nice creation. Ek shere arz hai

Ek Bar Hi Jee Bhar Ke Saza Kyun Nahi Detey
Main Harf-E-Ghalat Hon To Mita Kyun Nahi Detey


bahut khoob riyaz ji or bahut bahut sukria aap ka jo aap ne hume padha
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cara
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2010, 02:00:14 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI    BADAL JI.....

KUCH ALFAZ LIYE JUBAN PE APNI
APNI BARBADI KA KISSA SUNANE AAGAYE
JISKO DIL DE BAETHE THEY APNA SAMAJH KAR
USI SEY DIL KI CHOT KHAAKAR AAGAYE...
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poppoetry
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2010, 05:23:16 PM »
kya likha hai aapne baadal ji.....aapke khuch alfaaz toh khuch zyada hi dard samete hue hai......bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut acche koyal....good reply

Aapne chand alfaazon mein sab khuc keh diya cara ji....bahut acche
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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2010, 09:20:35 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Baadal ji.mindblowing creation,great lines by Koyal ji,Riyaz ji,Cara ji. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2010, 05:45:36 AM »
Quote from: cara on January 04, 2010, 02:00:14 PM
KYA BAAT HAI    BADAL JI.....

KUCH ALFAZ LIYE JUBAN PE APNI
APNI BARBADI KA KISSA SUNANE AAGAYE
JISKO DIL DE BAETHE THEY APNA SAMAJH KAR
USI SEY DIL KI CHOT KHAAKAR AAGAYE...



bahut aacha likha hai cara ji  Applause  N sukria jo mere lines ko saraha
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baadal102
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2010, 05:53:20 AM »
 notworthy notworthy notworthy

bahut bahut sukria Nikhar ji

N

Madhu ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2010, 06:49:47 AM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on January 04, 2010, 11:58:16 AM
Wah wah Badal Ji bahut umdah creation hai. Nice creation. Ek shere arz hai

Ek Bar Hi Jee Bhar Ke Saza Kyun Nahi Detey
Main Harf-E-Ghalat Hon To Mita Kyun Nahi Detey

sher laajawaab hai...riyaz ji...maza aa gaya.
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guhar
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2010, 06:55:16 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on January 04, 2010, 07:33:34 AM


Chand ke kaabil khud ko na samaj,
Hum sitaron ke sehar mai aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum apne sapne sajane aa gaye,

Dekh ke itlata hua ek taara,
Hum us ke bahut kareeb aa gaye,

Baya kar dil ka haal apna,
Hum us ke sapne le ke aa gaye,

Roshan kiya ghar baar ko apne,
Hum us ki roshni le ke aa gaye,

Hue jo subeh to sab jhoot nikla,
Hum farabi se dhokha kha ke aa gaye,

Nahi thi koi roshni or na thi chamak,
Hum jis patther ko apna samaj ke aa gaye,

Suraj se hi tha jis ka wajood,
Hum kyo us se dil laga ke aa gaye,

Khel hai jis ke liye kisi ka jiwan,
Hum us ke liye khud ko luta ke aa gaye,

Suna.ne dil ka haal apna yaaro,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye..........

Baadal
bahot umda ...bahot bhadiya..

sambhle alfaaz, sambhle falsafe,,,,aap ne ye bhi bataaya ki chaand taare suraj ke reflection kee wajah se dikhaayi dete hein...

vigyaan aur saahitye ka bejod milan.

chaand ko bhi thaam loon,
taaron ka bhi naam loon,
suraj se bhi salaam doon,
pr jalte bujhte rehte hein,
kese jeevan ka humdum maan loon.
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