Kuch Alfaz______________Baadal -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Rishi Agarwal

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«Reply #15 on: January 06, 2010, 09:18:33 AM »

Bahut Khub Badal Ji Nice Creation


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baadal102

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Re: Kuch Alfaz______________Baadal

«Reply #16 on: January 06, 2010, 10:22:24 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 04, 2010, 09:49:13 AM

Bahoot khoob Baadalji badi achhi kavita hai aap ki... Applause

Loot k taaro ki roshni aur sapne tum aa gaye
Sapne apna ghar sajaane kay tum ko bhaa gaye

Lootna he tha tumko bhee,Neeyat jo aysi pa gaye
Khchh alfaaz sunn k aapke,hum bhi dhokha kha gaye

koyal ji aap ke likhe hua ka jawab dene ki koshish ki hai umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega

Lootna niyat hoti to lut ke na aate hum,
Fir yu sitaro se ghar apna na sajate hum,

Sitara samaj jise jeewan mai laaye the,
Us bewafa se yu apna janaja na sajwate hum......

Baadal


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diya786

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«Reply #17 on: January 06, 2010, 10:35:30 AM »

bahut accha likha hai Baadal ji
great lines...... Applause


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #18 on: January 06, 2010, 10:59:37 AM »

Thanks Nikhaar-di....

Quote from: Nikhaar on January 04, 2010, 05:23:16 PM

kya likha hai aapne baadal ji.....aapke khuch alfaaz toh khuch zyada hi dard samete hue hai......bahut khoob Applause

Bahut acche koyal....good reply

Aapne chand alfaazon mein sab khuc keh diya cara ji....bahut acche


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #19 on: January 06, 2010, 11:13:47 AM »

Thanks Madhu-di......

Quote from: madhuwesh on January 05, 2010, 09:20:35 AM

Wah bahut khoob Baadal ji.mindblowing creation,great lines by Koyal ji,Riyaz ji,Cara ji.


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #20 on: January 06, 2010, 11:31:49 AM »

Kalaam aapka padh kar hum tou yeh he samjhe they.....

Loota tha aasmaan ko aapne,sajane ko ghar-bar apna
Lute aap apne ghar mai,patther ko hira jo samajhe

Quote from: baadal102 on January 06, 2010, 10:22:24 AM


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #21 on: January 06, 2010, 11:54:59 AM »

Aapne likha hai.....
Hum us ke sapne le ke aa gaye,
Hum us ki roshni le ke aa gaye,

Aap use wahaan se nahi laye...uske sapne aur Roshni le aaye....loot liya usko

Baadalji Aasmaan mai vicharte ho......aur wahin se..... tongue3

Quote from: baadal102 on January 04, 2010, 07:33:34 AM

Chand ke kaabil khud ko na samaj,
Hum sitaron ke sehar mai aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum apne sapne sajane aa gaye,

Dekh ke itlata hua ek taara,
Hum us ke bahut kareeb aa gaye,

Baya kar dil ka haal apna,
Hum us ke sapne le ke aa gaye,

Roshan kiya ghar baar ko apne,
Hum us ki roshni le ke aa gaye,

Hue jo subeh to sab jhoot nikla,
Hum farabi se dhokha kha ke aa gaye,

Nahi thi koi roshni or na thi chamak,
Hum jis patther ko apna samaj ke aa gaye,

Suraj se hi tha jis ka wajood,
Hum kyo us se dil laga ke aa gaye,

Khel hai jis ke liye kisi ka jiwan,
Hum us ke liye khud ko luta ke aa gaye,

Suna.ne dil ka haal apna yaaro,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye,

Kuch alfaz liye juba pe apni,
Hum aaj tumhare pass aa gaye..........

Baadal


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baadal102

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«Reply #22 on: January 06, 2010, 03:22:44 PM »

Quote from: guhar on January 06, 2010, 06:55:16 AM

bahot umda ...bahot bhadiya..

sambhle alfaaz, sambhle falsafe,,,,aap ne ye bhi bataaya ki chaand taare suraj ke reflection kee wajah se dikhaayi dete hein...

vigyaan aur saahitye ka bejod milan.

chaand ko bhi thaam loon,
taaron ka bhi naam loon,
suraj se bhi salaam doon,
pr jalte bujhte rehte hein,
kese jeevan ka humdum maan loon.

bahut khoob guhar ji wah
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thanx a lot jo aap ne hume padha or jawab bhi diya


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baadal102

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«Reply #23 on: January 06, 2010, 03:25:54 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 06, 2010, 09:18:33 AM

Bahut Khub Badal Ji Nice Creation

bahut bahut sukria rishi bhai


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baadal102

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«Reply #24 on: January 06, 2010, 03:27:10 PM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on January 06, 2010, 10:35:30 AM

bahut accha likha hai Baadal ji
great lines...... Applause

sukria kashish ji


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baadal102

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«Reply #25 on: January 07, 2010, 05:43:27 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 06, 2010, 11:31:49 AM

Kalaam aapka padh kar hum tou yeh he samjhe they.....

Loota tha aasmaan ko aapne,sajane ko ghar-bar apna
Lute aap apne ghar mai,patther ko hira jo samajhe

ye to apne apne samajne ka najaria hai koyal ji, waise daad kabool kare aap ke najariye or lines pe

waise koyal ji lines poori aise thi

Baya kar dil ka haal apna,
Hum us ke sapne le ke aa gaye,


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baadal102

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«Reply #26 on: January 07, 2010, 06:02:43 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 06, 2010, 11:31:49 AM

Kalaam aapka padh kar hum tou yeh he samjhe they.....

Loota tha aasmaan ko aapne,sajane ko ghar-bar apna
Lute aap apne ghar mai,patther ko hira jo samajhe

Koyal ji aap ke sawalo ka thora jawab dene ki koshish ki hai umeed hai mai aap ki umeedo pe khara uterunga

Haal-e-dil baya ker kisi ko loota nahi jaata,
Sachi ibaadat ko kabhi jhuta samjha nahi jaata,

Dete hai wahi dhokha jo patthar ke hote hai,
Warna Baadal yu bhari mehfil mai ruswa na kiya jaata.......

Baadal


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