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-----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 04, 2012, 05:26:21 PM

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mere geeton me aajkal wazan kuch kam sa lagta hai,
muskuraata to hoon par har taraf gham sa lagta hai,

kitaab ke panno ke bich kuch sukhe huwe gulaab mile,
mila bahut mujhe par mohabbat kuch kam sa lagta hai,

kisi ne chaaha tha kabhi, chaah ke thukraaya mujhe,
aajkal har chehra mujhe mere us humdum sa lagta hai,

bhulaana chaahta bahut hoon main par bhulaaun kaise,
bhulaane se yaad karna mushkil kuch kam sa lagta hai,

aasaan nahi hai muskuraana dil ke toot jaane ke baad,
muskuraata to hoon par muskaan kuch kam sa lagta hai...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 05:49:25 PM »

wah wah hriday ji...... icon_salut

bahut bahut khoob... Usual Smile


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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 05:50:57 PM »

Beautifull


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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 06:22:00 PM »

baht baht khoob Hriday ji--
naam Hriday aur baat dil ki--
waah
kuch apna sa laga ye post Usual Smile

daad daad
khus rahie
muskurate rahie--
!


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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2012, 02:02:33 AM »

Hriday ji namaskaar,
hai to chhota munh badee baat par darte darte kah rahaa hoon ki muhabat ,mushkil aur muskaan teeno he lafz feminine hai aapne inhe masculine use kiyaaa hai muaafee ke saath arz hai ki in par dubaaraa gaur kar len to achhaa hai peshkash aapkee beshaq laajwaab hai


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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 06:12:41 AM »

wowwww hamesha ki tarah bahut sundar hridayji....


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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 08:44:36 AM »

nice!


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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 03:22:40 PM »

bahut bahut shukriyaa Touhid ji...!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on April 04, 2012, 05:49:25 PM

wah wah hriday ji...... icon_salut

bahut bahut khoob... Usual Smile


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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 05:18:20 PM »

Good one Hriday jee

Bahut khoob Applause


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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2012, 07:35:15 PM »

thanks a lot...!!!

Quote from: Parvana shan on April 04, 2012, 05:50:57 PM

Beautifull


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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2012, 07:43:02 AM »

:clap


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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2012, 03:02:10 PM »

bahut bahut shukriyaa Sarfira ji... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaaa karta hoon....!!!

Quote from: sarfira on April 04, 2012, 06:22:00 PM

baht baht khoob Hriday ji--
naam Hriday aur baat dil ki--
waah
kuch apna sa laga ye post Usual Smile

daad daad
khus rahie
muskurate rahie--
!


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~Hriday~

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Re: -----/// Kuch kam saa lagta hai /// ----- Hriday

«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2012, 08:44:39 PM »

namaskaar Saini ji,

Pehle to main aapka dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne meri is rachna ko apna keemti waqt diya... bahut achcha laga jo apne mujhe isme huye galti k baare me bataayaa... main aage se dhyan rakhunga in shabdon ke istemaal me... isme main kuch change nahi kar raha nahi to poem ki rhyming kharaab ho jaayegi... par aapki is baat ka hameshaa dhyaan rakhunga... aur future me correct way me use karunga... thanks again....!!!

regards
Hriday

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 05, 2012, 02:02:33 AM