KUCH KEHNA HAI AAP SABSE...READ PLZ AND GIVE UR COMMENTS

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kuch kehna hai mujhe aap sabse aaj
keh do har baat dil ki aaj aap sabse,

zindagi ke har pehlu
har wo jazbaat keh do
aaj aap sabse,

dil mein chupayiii
har wo baat ju kisi ne na jani ab tak
keh do aaj aap sabse,

buhut dard samete
baithi hoon bhari mehfil mein tanha  :cry:  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

apne bhi gair bane har mod
pe dhoka mila duniya mein :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zakham diye buhut loogo ne
aaj take wo bhare nahi :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zindagi se ju manga wo mila nahi
jisse pyarr kiya wo bhi chod ke
chale gaye darr lagta hai ki kahi kisi se pyarr
hua tu kahi wo bhi naa chala jaye  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

jazbaat,dil,khushi,dost,mohabbat inn cheezu ka meri
zindagi mein basera hi nahi shayad sad5
keh do aaj aap sabse,

gum,ruswaii,dushmani,judaii,nafrat yehi hai
meri zindagi ka hissa aaj tak
keh do aaj aap sabse, sad5

sab kehte hai ashk anmol hote hai
magar mere ye ashk befizul haikeh do aaj aap sabse sad5

YE SAB AAP SAB SE ISLIYE KAHA KYUKI AAP SAB KO KHONE SE DARR LAGTA HAI AB ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSHIYAA SABKO MILTI HAI AUR WO USS PAL KO JEE LETE HAI MAGAR MUJHE KHUSHIYAA AAJ TAK NAHI MILI,AAP SAB KE SAATH BITAYA HAR WO PAL BUHUT ANMOL HAI AUR KYA KAHOO BAS KHOO NAA JANA MITT NA JANA MERI ZINDAGI SE.......BAS YEHI ARMAAN HAI MERA.....

GIVE UR COMMENTS PLZ.
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2005, 06:25:00 PM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
kuch kehna hai mujhe aap sabse aaj
keh do har baat dil ki aaj aap sabse,

zindagi ke har pehlu
har wo jazbaat keh do
aaj aap sabse,

dil mein chupayiii
har wo baat ju kisi ne na jani ab tak
keh do aaj aap sabse,

buhut dard samete
baithi hoon bhari mehfil mein tanha  :cry:  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

apne bhi gair bane har mod
pe dhoka mila duniya mein :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zakham diye buhut loogo ne
aaj take wo bhare nahi :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zindagi se ju manga wo mila nahi
jisse pyarr kiya wo bhi chod ke
chale gaye darr lagta hai ki kahi kisi se pyarr
hua tu kahi wo bhi naa chala jaye  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

jazbaat,dil,khushi,dost,mohabbat inn cheezu ka meri
zindagi mein basera hi nahi shayad sad5
keh do aaj aap sabse,

gum,ruswaii,dushmani,judaii,nafrat yehi hai
meri zindagi ka hissa aaj tak
keh do aaj aap sabse, sad5

sab kehte hai ashk anmol hote hai
magar mere ye ashk befizul haikeh do aaj aap sabse sad5

YE SAB AAP SAB SE ISLIYE KAHA KYUKI AAP SAB KO KHONE SE DARR LAGTA HAI AB ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSHIYAA SABKO MILTI HAI AUR WO USS PAL KO JEE LETE HAI MAGAR MUJHE KHUSHIYAA AAJ TAK NAHI MILI,AAP SAB KE SAATH BITAYA HAR WO PAL BUHUT ANMOL HAI AUR KYA KAHOO BAS KHOO NAA JANA MITT NA JANA MERI ZINDAGI SE.......BAS YEHI ARMAAN HAI MERA.....

GIVE UR COMMENTS PLZ.
simran sis,kya kahoon,bohat dard hai,ek ek lafz me,iska reply main zaroor doongi,kuch accha sa likh ke.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2005, 06:25:02 PM »
It's Beautiful Simran.....Bohat khoob......
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2005, 06:26:48 PM »
Its really really a good one Nice ...me ...
Mujhe bas pani kahani yaad aa gayi ...
Hum to iska reply bhi nahi likh paayenge ...
Good going ...
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2005, 07:53:40 PM »
Buhat khoob kudiye........................................... .............


Tu Bhi Buhat Tez Ho gi hai

Ia ka reply kroon ga kabhi tum ko
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2005, 04:54:42 AM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
kuch kehna hai mujhe aap sabse aaj
keh do har baat dil ki aaj aap sabse,

zindagi ke har pehlu
har wo jazbaat keh do
aaj aap sabse,

dil mein chupayiii
har wo baat ju kisi ne na jani ab tak
keh do aaj aap sabse,

buhut dard samete
baithi hoon bhari mehfil mein tanha  :cry:  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

apne bhi gair bane har mod
pe dhoka mila duniya mein :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zakham diye buhut loogo ne
aaj take wo bhare nahi :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zindagi se ju manga wo mila nahi
jisse pyarr kiya wo bhi chod ke
chale gaye darr lagta hai ki kahi kisi se pyarr
hua tu kahi wo bhi naa chala jaye  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

jazbaat,dil,khushi,dost,mohabbat inn cheezu ka meri
zindagi mein basera hi nahi shayad sad5
keh do aaj aap sabse,

gum,ruswaii,dushmani,judaii,nafrat yehi hai
meri zindagi ka hissa aaj tak
keh do aaj aap sabse, sad5

sab kehte hai ashk anmol hote hai
magar mere ye ashk befizul haikeh do aaj aap sabse sad5

YE SAB AAP SAB SE ISLIYE KAHA KYUKI AAP SAB KO KHONE SE DARR LAGTA HAI AB ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSHIYAA SABKO MILTI HAI AUR WO USS PAL KO JEE LETE HAI MAGAR MUJHE KHUSHIYAA AAJ TAK NAHI MILI,AAP SAB KE SAATH BITAYA HAR WO PAL BUHUT ANMOL HAI AUR KYA KAHOO BAS KHOO NAA JANA MITT NA JANA MERI ZINDAGI SE.......BAS YEHI ARMAAN HAI MERA.....

GIVE UR COMMENTS PLZ.


bahut khoob..............simran.......... har lafz mein bada dard hai..........nice one...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2005, 04:59:45 AM »
Its really Nice "NOM"........lekin bahut dard hai iss main.......very sad
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2005, 07:42:25 AM »
thanx nidhi sis  ab kya kaho nidhi jab dard saha nahi gaya tu shayri ke raaste likh diya tumhare reply ka intezaar rahenga........
thanx aryaan for liking it.....thanx just hate love ji for replying.....
thank yoy very much faree intezaar rahega jawab ka......khushi ji dard tu ye kuch bhi nahi buhut dard samete baithey hai hum  kisi din muka mila tu shayri ke lafzu mein likh denge.....thanx for reply and isha ji thank you
haa dard tu hoga jab dard halka karne ke liye hi tu ye nazm  likhi thi halka tu huaa lakin utna bhi nahi jitna socha tha.........

har kisi ki zindagi mein koi pyarr karne wala hota hai
dekho meri kismat ko yaha dekhne wale kya pyarr karne wale bhi nahi hai,
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Tosha
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2005, 08:42:22 AM »
hmmm...
...
Nicy.. Honey!!! good one!
...
darr lagta hai daard bhi hota hai
is zamane main jab koi aapna khota hai
jahan bewafa sa lagta hai
yeh ruh aapni bhi paraye lagti hai
jab aapna koi paraya ho jata hai

jaana hai tere is daard ko
mahesus khud bhi kiya hai
maante hai tere har lafz ko
zakham humme bhi mila hai

sang hai aaj hum is mahefil main
aap yeh mahefil hi ghar aapna hai
sang hai saath sabhi lakin akale hun main
anjan is dagri main anjana har chera hai

do baat kahe de do baat sun le
na jane ho na ho kal subera
in zakhmo ka maza aaj tu le le
na jane ho na ho kal subera
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2005, 09:04:05 AM »
very nice simi sis!! par kisne kaha ke apke askh befizul hai, apno ke liye ashk humesha anmol hote hai aur yoindia pe sab hi apne hai na!!!

hum bhi gum bhul jate hai apne jab aate hai is mehefil,
ashkon ko behene se bacha lete hai, itna kya kam hai hasil!
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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2005, 10:58:55 AM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
kuch kehna hai mujhe aap sabse aaj
keh do har baat dil ki aaj aap sabse,

zindagi ke har pehlu
har wo jazbaat keh do
aaj aap sabse,

dil mein chupayiii
har wo baat ju kisi ne na jani ab tak
keh do aaj aap sabse,

buhut dard samete
baithi hoon bhari mehfil mein tanha  :cry:  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

apne bhi gair bane har mod
pe dhoka mila duniya mein :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zakham diye buhut loogo ne
aaj take wo bhare nahi :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zindagi se ju manga wo mila nahi
jisse pyarr kiya wo bhi chod ke
chale gaye darr lagta hai ki kahi kisi se pyarr
hua tu kahi wo bhi naa chala jaye  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

jazbaat,dil,khushi,dost,mohabbat inn cheezu ka meri
zindagi mein basera hi nahi shayad sad5
keh do aaj aap sabse,

gum,ruswaii,dushmani,judaii,nafrat yehi hai
meri zindagi ka hissa aaj tak
keh do aaj aap sabse, sad5

sab kehte hai ashk anmol hote hai
magar mere ye ashk befizul haikeh do aaj aap sabse sad5

YE SAB AAP SAB SE ISLIYE KAHA KYUKI AAP SAB KO KHONE SE DARR LAGTA HAI AB ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSHIYAA SABKO MILTI HAI AUR WO USS PAL KO JEE LETE HAI MAGAR MUJHE KHUSHIYAA AAJ TAK NAHI MILI,AAP SAB KE SAATH BITAYA HAR WO PAL BUHUT ANMOL HAI AUR KYA KAHOO BAS KHOO NAA JANA MITT NA JANA MERI ZINDAGI SE.......BAS YEHI ARMAAN HAI MERA.....

GIVE UR COMMENTS PLZ.


bahut achha likha hai simran......................
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2005, 04:21:54 PM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
kuch kehna hai mujhe aap sabse aaj
keh do har baat dil ki aaj aap sabse,

zindagi ke har pehlu
har wo jazbaat keh do
aaj aap sabse,

dil mein chupayiii
har wo baat ju kisi ne na jani ab tak
keh do aaj aap sabse,

buhut dard samete
baithi hoon bhari mehfil mein tanha  :cry:  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

apne bhi gair bane har mod
pe dhoka mila duniya mein :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zakham diye buhut loogo ne
aaj take wo bhare nahi :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

zindagi se ju manga wo mila nahi
jisse pyarr kiya wo bhi chod ke
chale gaye darr lagta hai ki kahi kisi se pyarr
hua tu kahi wo bhi naa chala jaye  :cry:
keh do aaj aap sabse,

jazbaat,dil,khushi,dost,mohabbat inn cheezu ka meri
zindagi mein basera hi nahi shayad sad5
keh do aaj aap sabse,

gum,ruswaii,dushmani,judaii,nafrat yehi hai
meri zindagi ka hissa aaj tak
keh do aaj aap sabse, sad5

sab kehte hai ashk anmol hote hai
magar mere ye ashk befizul haikeh do aaj aap sabse sad5

YE SAB AAP SAB SE ISLIYE KAHA KYUKI AAP SAB KO KHONE SE DARR LAGTA HAI AB ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSHIYAA SABKO MILTI HAI AUR WO USS PAL KO JEE LETE HAI MAGAR MUJHE KHUSHIYAA AAJ TAK NAHI MILI,AAP SAB KE SAATH BITAYA HAR WO PAL BUHUT ANMOL HAI AUR KYA KAHOO BAS KHOO NAA JANA MITT NA JANA MERI ZINDAGI SE.......BAS YEHI ARMAAN HAI MERA.....

GIVE UR COMMENTS PLZ.


wah wah  wah  simmi..............superbsssssssss  .........bahot  pyara likha ......tongue3  .............superbbbbbbsssss  tosha...........meena.........

hum  tumhein  chod  kar duniya mein kahin  bhi na rah  payenge
jab jaayenge  is  jahan se teri  yaadon ko  bhi saath  le jaayenge
tum  ghum  na kiya karo  kisi  baat ko  lekar  "Simaran"
teri  galiyon  se mere rooh ko Wabasta hai hum kaise bhool paayenge...

wabasta =  relation  / ta-alluk...........
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sanya310
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2005, 04:30:06 PM »
wahh simran, bohot hi achha likha hai, ekdum touching. Hum tumhe chhodke kahin nai jaenge!
bohot hi achhe tosha, meena aur waheed kya likha hai!!!

tu na darr simran, dost hamesha ke liye hain hum
tu na darr simran, tere bin nahi jiyenge hum!
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2005, 06:26:21 PM »
Phir aapne dekha hai mohabbat ki nazar se,
Guzre na kahi gardish daura bhi idhar se,

Shaayad kahi suraj ki kiran shaam ko fute,
Hum shamaa jalaaye hue baithe hai safar se,

Taare to chamak apni dikhate hai safar tak,
Dil dubne lagta hai magar pichhle pahar se,

Gairo ke jahaa teri inaayat se hai sairaab,
Eh kaash! ye baadal meri duniyaa pe bhi barse ...

For you Nice Of Me ......
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