~*~ Kuch khamosh jazbaat ~*~ by Rahim

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Woh roothon ko ankhon se mana leta hai,
Yahan lavzon ki nadiyan kam parrti hai..

Woh pyaason ko labon se pila deta hai,
Yahan mohobat ki barishein kam parrti hai..

Woh baaton se apna kaam nikalwa leta hai,
Yahan toh shifarishein kam parrti hai..

Woh do bol bolke bayan karta hai dard apna,
Yahan ‘Khamosh’ ki nazmein kam parrti hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 09:32:55 PM »
Bohat Khoob Rahim Ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 09:41:54 PM »
Quote from: HUM_DUM on February 01, 2011, 09:32:55 PM
Bohat Khoob Rahim Ji...
Teh teh dil se shukriya HumDum jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 11:26:42 PM »
Wah Rahim bhai kya kahen aapke tareef mein,dard bhar peshkash.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 05:01:48 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on February 01, 2011, 09:16:55 PM
Woh roothon ko ankhon se mana leta hai,
Yahan lavzon ki nadiyan kam parrti hai..

Woh pyaason ko labon se pila deta hai,
Yahan mohobat ki barishein kam parrti hai..

Woh baaton se apna kaam nikalwa leta hai,
Yahan toh shifarishein kam parrti hai..

Woh do bol bolke bayan karta hai dard apna,
Yahan ‘Khamosh’ ki nazmein kam parrti hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Very Impressive ... Good One .... Rahim Ji  !

dil se daad !!!!!!!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 05:13:14 AM »
ah rahimji...bahut khubsurat....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 06:32:20 AM »
waaaaahhhhhh kya bat kahi dost,...


ham jo zindagi bhar unpe marte rahe to kuchh nahi "Abhi",
zulm magar ek bar hi unka palatkar dekh lena ho gaya~
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 08:12:20 AM »
kamaal hai bas.
""
dhundli tasveeron se bhi wo muskurate lete hain
---yahan haste zakhm kam padte hain---
""
daad hai ji
"
thanx
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 08:36:00 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 01:27:37 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on February 01, 2011, 11:26:42 PM
Wah Rahim bhai kya kahen aapke tareef mein,dard bhar peshkash.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya shukriya Madhu di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2011, 01:28:22 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on February 02, 2011, 05:01:48 AM
Very Impressive ... Good One .... Rahim Ji  !

dil se daad !!!!!!!!!! Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Naresh jee
khush rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2011, 01:29:25 PM »
Quote from: manjum on February 02, 2011, 05:13:14 AM
ah rahimji...bahut khubsurat....

 Applause Applause Applause
Jee teh dil se shukriya Manjum jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2011, 01:35:58 PM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on February 02, 2011, 06:32:20 AM
waaaaahhhhhh kya bat kahi dost,...


ham jo zindagi bhar unpe marte rahe to kuchh nahi "Abhi",
zulm magar ek bar hi unka palatkar dekh lena ho gaya~
Oyee dino baad nazar aye Abhi bhai..
teh dil se shukriya bhai..
Aur kya achi lines hai..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 01:37:50 PM »
Quote from: nirala on February 02, 2011, 08:12:20 AM
kamaal hai bas.
""
dhundli tasveeron se bhi wo muskurate lete hain
---yahan haste zakhm kam padte hain---
""
daad hai ji
"
thanx
"
Teh teh dil se shukriya Nirala jee..
aur achi lines jee..
Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2011, 01:38:29 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2011, 08:36:00 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye sada..!
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