kuch khwahish thi

by salil2002 on January 10, 2009, 07:38:19 AM
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chahat thi mujhe ek baar tera deedaar ho jaata
marne se pehle teri baahon k aagosh mein aata

chahat thi kii dekhta tujhe ji bhar kar
jab thakta toh teri aankhon main kaahin so jaata

chahat thi suljhata teri laton ko apne haathon se
aur oonki qaid mein tere paas mein thehar jaata

afsos hain mujhe mein tere pehloon main aaa na saka
apni chahton ko tujhe main bata na saka

tu royi toh bahut hogi dekh kar meri mitti ko
gila is baat ka kii apne haathon se aansuon ko hata na saka

tujhe dekh kar achcha toh nahin lagta safed libaas mein
par kya karoon mein apni bebasi par aansu bhi baha na saka

khuda gar bakhs deta chand saansein mujh garib ko
toh phir kucch chen aaj meri roh ko bhi aa jaata
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2009, 09:25:57 AM »
Nice One Salil Bhai..
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2009, 10:29:02 AM »
 Applause Applause

Wonderfull lines salil bro...
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2009, 02:22:13 PM »
Achcha hua salil jo tune likhi yeh Ghazal
Jo tu na kar saka Ghayel karta hain aajkal

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Bohat umda kalam tha salail bohat ahchci pakad banaye rakhi tumne too good maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2009, 02:34:43 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on January 10, 2009, 10:29:02 AM
Applause Applause

Wonderfull lines salil bro...
thanks honey di

shukriya janasheen
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2009, 02:35:34 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 10, 2009, 02:22:13 PM
Achcha hua salil jo tune likhi yeh Ghazal
Jo tu na kar saka Ghayel karta hain aajkal

                             -SG_


Bohat umda kalam tha salil bohat ahchci pakad banaye rakhi tumne too good maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thnks bade bhai
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2009, 05:07:17 PM »
Nice one salil...

beautifully expressed..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2009, 05:23:06 PM »
Really nice Salil Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2009, 11:12:58 PM »
good work salil ji... bahoot khoob!!
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2009, 04:50:22 AM »
thnks rajesh , angel and pooja
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