~*~kuch mukaam aise bhi aaye hain~*~

by kaushikbhawna008 on February 11, 2009, 09:26:43 AM
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zindgi k safar mei kuch mukam aise aaye hain

jaha jaan gaye ham k kaun apne kaun paraye hain

 

preet aisi ki thi kabhi hamne jiski tis ab tak hai

kaise samjha pau khud ko ki wo hamei bhul aaye hain

 

raahein alag na thi par manzilein badal hi gayii

un raahon par kuch yaadein bas ham chod aayei hain

 

uthe us par koi ungli to dard hota hai mujhko ab talak

jabki daag daaman par mere bhi hai jo ab tak dhul na paye hain

 

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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2009, 10:04:11 AM »


zindgi k safar mei kuch mukam aise aaye hain

jaha jaan gaye ham k kaun apne kaun paraye hain

 

preet aisi ki thi kabhi hamne jiski tis ab tak hai

kaise samjha pau khud ko ki wo hamei bhul aaye hain

 

raahein alag na thi par manzilein badal hi gayii

un raahon par kuch yaadein bas ham chod aayei hain

 

uthe us par koi ungli to dard hota hai mujhko ab talak

jabki daag daaman par mere bhi hai jo ab tak dhul na paye hain

 


bhawna kamaal ka likha hai .............ek alag andaaz mein bayaan kiya hai tumne dard ko waqai bahut ummda likha hai

mohabbat kii aas toh hai
par is khel se hum darte hain
kehte hai yeh maut ka dariya hai
isme doob k paar ootarte hain
khud ko hone ka gham toh nahin hoga mujhko
oonpe aanch aane k khayal se darte hain
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2009, 10:06:17 AM »
thnks salil to undestand my feelings
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2009, 11:31:16 AM »
Wow very nice Bhawna & salil
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2009, 11:49:54 AM »
Bohat Achche Kaushik Ji,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2009, 05:12:23 PM »
bahaut khoob Bhawna & Salil


inn pyaar ki juthon galiyon main hum apne aap ko bhul aye hai,
hum ek bewaffa se pyar karne ka bada gunaah kar aye hai...

jab thukraya tha usne hume toh roya nahin bas margaya mera dil,
badnaseeb hoon jo apni hi rooh main apne dil ko dafan kar aye hai...
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2009, 05:13:59 PM »
bahaut khoob Bhawna & Salil


inn pyaar ki juthon galiyon main hum apne aap ko bhul aye hai,
hum ek bewaffa se pyar karne ka bada gunaah kar aye hai...

jab thukraya tha usne hume toh roya nahin bas margaya mera dil,
badnaseeb hoon jo apni hi rooh main apne dil ko dafan kar aye hai...

Bohat Achche Mere Bhai,
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2009, 05:17:15 PM »
shukriya Bhai...aap jaise tariff karte hai toh bahaut acha lagta hai...
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 06:08:04 PM »
Good work Bhawna, Salil and DH!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2009, 10:58:18 AM »
thnks u all of you for ur lovely comments
thnks a lot
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2009, 11:36:08 AM »
Bohot Khoob Bhawna, Salil, Heart
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2009, 05:25:15 AM »
Shukriya Talat jee aur Pooja jee
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2009, 10:20:19 AM »
shukriya celmira ji
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