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by diya786 on May 14, 2009, 09:21:49 AM
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Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne
ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...

Kuch paane ke liye
na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye
ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah par nikal aaye

Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar
nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil
ab tak humne jo kuch kiya
nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil
ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar
lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye

Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan
na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya
palat kar jo humne dekha zara
khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya
phir jo dekha humne aaina
khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2009, 09:55:42 AM »
Wah Diya bohat khoob....Very Good work.
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diya786
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2009, 10:24:22 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 14, 2009, 09:52:25 AM
Behtareen Peshkash Hai Gudiya
Bohat Khoob Keep It Up.
Kuch Bana To Baad Main Jarur Likhunga
Khush Raho..

Bahut bahut shukriya Majid Bhai notworthy
jo aapne saraha
intezaar rahega mujhe aapke jawaab ka
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diya786
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2009, 10:28:59 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 14, 2009, 09:55:42 AM
Wah Diya bohat khoob....Very Good work.

Shukriya Sajid Sahab
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diya786
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2009, 10:31:57 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on May 14, 2009, 09:57:35 AM
Waah Diya ji behad acha likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahot mahsus kar likha aapne..  a gud poem..                                                                                                        tu to ek pyara sa dost hai jo khafa hoke bhi nahi hota hai,hamesha apne kalaam se dher saari baat karta hai,har nagma har nazm dil se likhti hain aap,hamesha padhne ko jee karta hai

Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash ji notworthy
jo aapne is kadar saraha meri nazm ko
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2009, 10:43:49 AM »
Kashish Dear... aapki Qalam ke to Hum Pahale se hi Kaayal hain..!! aur Yeh Poem to waqai dil ko chhoo gai.. Ek Succhaai Ko Lafzon me Dhaal kar aapne Behad Khubsoorat Poem Likhi hai..!! Applause Applause

Jo Bhi Is Rachna Ko padega use Yahi lagega ki Shayad yeh Uski Zindgi se Juda koi such hai.. aur Asli shayar wahi kahalaata hai jo Ha Padhne wale ko yeh Mehsoos kara de.. aur aap isme Kaamyaab hui hain.... Daad Kubool karen is MANN Ki...!!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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diya786
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2009, 10:47:56 AM »
Quote from: Mann on May 14, 2009, 10:43:49 AM
Kashish Dear... aapki Qalam ke to Hum Pahale se hi Kaayal hain..!! aur Yeh Poem to waqai dil ko chhoo gai.. Ek Succhaai Ko Lafzon me Dhaal kar aapne Behad Khubsoorat Poem Likhi hai..!! Applause Applause

Jo Bhi Is Rachna Ko padega use Yahi lagega ki Shayad yeh Uski Zindgi se Juda koi such hai.. aur Asli shayar wahi kahalaata hai jo Ha Padhne wale ko yeh Mehsoos kara de.. aur aap isme Kaamyaab hui hain.... Daad Kubool karen is MANN Ki...!!!


[/b] Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Bahut bahut shukriya dear itni gehraai se padhne ke liye... notworthy
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2009, 10:52:36 AM »
Waah Kahish...Bohot hi khoob...bohot achcha likha hai  Applause Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2009, 06:44:19 PM »
Quote from: diya786 on May 14, 2009, 09:21:49 AM
Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne
ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...

Kuch paane ke liye
na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye
ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah par nikal aaye

Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar
nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil
ab tak humne jo kuch kiya
nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil
ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar
lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye

Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan
na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya
palat kar jo humne dekha zara
khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya
phir jo dekha humne aaina
khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...
Bahaut acha likha hai Kashish di... Applause
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2009, 01:09:09 AM »
WAH WAH DIYA JI
SARVESH RASTOGI
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2009, 09:01:18 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on May 14, 2009, 09:21:49 AM
Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne
ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...

Kuch paane ke liye
na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye
ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah par nikal aaye

Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar
nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil
ab tak humne jo kuch kiya
nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil
ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar
lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye

Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan
na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya
palat kar jo humne dekha zara
khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya
phir jo dekha humne aaina
khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...

Wah Wah Bhoot bahoot khoob Kashish Dear.. bahoot hi Umda Likha hai.. bahoot khoob! Applause Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2009, 09:02:17 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 16, 2009, 08:50:54 AM

Kuch Pane Ki Chaah Mein Hum Sab Khote Gaye
Bas Khud Apne Liye Hi Jaise Kaante Bote Gaye.

Is Berang Duniya Ke Kuch Rang Mujhpe Yun Chade
Ki Phir Charon Aur Bas Jaise Andhere Hote Gaye

Khwahishon Ka Suraj Hijr K Badal Me Kya Chupa
Phir To Zindagi Ke Sare Maayne Hi Badalte Gaye.

Kuch Yun Chali Tere Intazar Ki Thandi Hawaae,n
Ki Kuch Ashq Meri Aankhon Mein Hi Jhamte Gaye.

Aur Kya Karta Bhala Main Tujhse Koi Shiqwa Gila
Bas Bewafaai Tune Ki Aur Sharminda Hum Hote Gaye.



Wah Wah Majid ji.. Bahoot bahoot khoob. Well written.  Applause Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2009, 11:45:02 AM »
bhut hi khoobsurat koshish diya ji
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Muhammed
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2009, 11:51:22 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on May 14, 2009, 09:21:49 AM
Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne
ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...

Kuch paane ke liye
na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye
ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah par nikal aaye

Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar
nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil
ab tak humne jo kuch kiya
nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil
ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar
lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye

Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan
na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya
palat kar jo humne dekha zara
khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya
phir jo dekha humne aaina
khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye
Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar
yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...

Kashish ki Koshish...bekaar Lagi Mujhe !!!
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diya786
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2009, 11:01:49 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 16, 2009, 08:50:54 AM
Lo Gudiya Koshis Karta Hun
I Hope Aapko Pasand Aaye
Aue Galti Maaf Ho Behna....


Kuch Pane Ki Chaah Mein Hum Sab Khote Gaye
Bas Khud Apne Liye Hi Jaise Kaante Bote Gaye.

Is Berang Duniya Ke Kuch Rang Mujhpe Yun Chade
Ki Phir Charon Aur Bas Jaise Andhere Hote Gaye

Khwahishon Ka Suraj Hijr K Badal Me Kya Chupa
Phir To Zindagi Ke Sare Maayne Hi Badalte Gaye.

Kuch Yun Chali Tere Intazar Ki Thandi Hawaae,n
Ki Kuch Ashq Meri Aankhon Mein Hi Jhamte Gaye.

Aur Kya Karta Bhala Main Tujhse Koi Shiqwa Gila
Bas Bewafaai Tune Ki Aur Sharminda Hum Hote Gaye.


Bahut khoob Majid Bhai
kamaal likha hai
too good Applause Applause Applause
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