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Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...
Kuch paane ke liye na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah par nikal aaye
Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil ab tak humne jo kuch kiya nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye
Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya palat kar jo humne dekha zara khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya phir jo dekha humne aaina khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2009, 09:55:42 AM » |
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Wah Diya bohat khoob....Very Good work.
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diya786
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2009, 10:24:22 AM » |
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Behtareen Peshkash Hai Gudiya Bohat Khoob Keep It Up. Kuch Bana To Baad Main Jarur Likhunga Khush Raho..
Bahut bahut shukriya Majid Bhai jo aapne saraha intezaar rahega mujhe aapke jawaab ka
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2009, 10:28:59 AM » |
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Wah Diya bohat khoob....Very Good work.
Shukriya Sajid Sahab
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2009, 10:31:57 AM » |
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Waah Diya ji behad acha likha hai aapne bahot mahsus kar likha aapne.. a gud poem.. tu to ek pyara sa dost hai jo khafa hoke bhi nahi hota hai,hamesha apne kalaam se dher saari baat karta hai,har nagma har nazm dil se likhti hain aap,hamesha padhne ko jee karta hai Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash ji jo aapne is kadar saraha meri nazm ko
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2009, 10:43:49 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2009, 10:47:56 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya dear itni gehraai se padhne ke liye...
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2009, 10:52:36 AM » |
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Waah Kahish...Bohot hi khoob...bohot achcha likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2009, 06:44:19 PM » |
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Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...
Kuch paane ke liye na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah par nikal aaye
Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil ab tak humne jo kuch kiya nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye
Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya palat kar jo humne dekha zara khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya phir jo dekha humne aaina khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...
Bahaut acha likha hai Kashish di...
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2009, 01:09:09 AM » |
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WAH WAH DIYA JI SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2009, 09:01:18 AM » |
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Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...
Kuch paane ke liye na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah par nikal aaye
Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil ab tak humne jo kuch kiya nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye
Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya palat kar jo humne dekha zara khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya phir jo dekha humne aaina khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...
Wah Wah Bhoot bahoot khoob Kashish Dear.. bahoot hi Umda Likha hai.. bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2009, 09:02:17 AM » |
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Kuch Pane Ki Chaah Mein Hum Sab Khote Gaye Bas Khud Apne Liye Hi Jaise Kaante Bote Gaye.
Is Berang Duniya Ke Kuch Rang Mujhpe Yun Chade Ki Phir Charon Aur Bas Jaise Andhere Hote Gaye
Khwahishon Ka Suraj Hijr K Badal Me Kya Chupa Phir To Zindagi Ke Sare Maayne Hi Badalte Gaye.
Kuch Yun Chali Tere Intazar Ki Thandi Hawaae,n Ki Kuch Ashq Meri Aankhon Mein Hi Jhamte Gaye.
Aur Kya Karta Bhala Main Tujhse Koi Shiqwa Gila Bas Bewafaai Tune Ki Aur Sharminda Hum Hote Gaye.
Wah Wah Majid ji.. Bahoot bahoot khoob. Well written.
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2009, 11:45:02 AM » |
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bhut hi khoobsurat koshish diya ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2009, 11:51:22 AM » |
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Sabhi ki zindagi mein ek waqt aisa bhi zaroor aata hai jab woh yeh sochne par majboor ho jaata hai ki kuch paane ki chah mein kya kuch kho diya usne ek choti si koshish ki hai ki jab wohi shaks peeche mudkar dekhta hai to use kaisa lagta hai...
Kuch paane ke liye na jaane kitna kuch kho aaye ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah par nikal aaye
Kaisa hai yeh zindagi ka safar nahin hai jiski koi bhi manzil ab tak humne jo kuch kiya nahin hai uska koi bhi haasil ek khushi hi talashti thi nazar lekin kitne hi gham ab hain aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye
Tum bhi soch lo meri majbooriyaan na chah kar bhi jo humne kiya palat kar jo humne dekha zara khud apne haalat pe ashkon ko baha diya phir jo dekha humne aaina khud ko hi pehchaan_ne se inkaar kar aaye Ab khud se sharminda hain soch kar yeh kis raah pe nikal aaye...
Kashish ki Koshish...bekaar Lagi Mujhe !!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2009, 11:01:49 AM » |
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