*Kuch Pata Nahi*

by Roja on September 26, 2007, 02:43:26 PM
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Manzil ka nishaan maalum nahi.
Jayeinge kahaan maalum nahi

Aa baithe hain mahfil mein magar,
Mahfil ki jubaan maalum nahi.

Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

Lagte hai paraye hum ko kyu
Dil ke mehmaan malum nahi

Kyu pyaar mein jalne waalon par
Hansta hai jahaan malum nahi

Jis ko maine dilse chaha magar
Wo kyu mujhe jhooti kehta hai malum nahi
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2007, 03:21:07 PM »
bohot khoob roja
aap to is site ki jaan bangaye

hum bhi try karte hai


Khoon se rangungi aaj mohobbat ki tasveer ko
Dekhega aaj wo bhi mere dua ki tabeer ko

Choka degi usse yeh junoon e ashiqui meri
Azmaungi aaj mein khuda ki likhi is taqdeer ko

Tadap tadap kar bolegi chaht meri mehfilon mein
Todjaungi aaj laaj ki har zzanjeer ko

Wo bhi yaad rakhega k kis lazmi ka dil to gaya
k hoga ehsaas in zakhmon ka mere us nazir ko


~Roshni~
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2007, 04:08:21 PM »
Thank you very much Roshni...Aapka jawab b very good...

Kahan koi aisa mila jispar duniya luta dete,
Har ek ne dhokha diya kis kisko bhula dete...
Apne dil ka dard dil main hi daba kar rakha hai,
Agar karte bayan to mehfil ko rulaa dete
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2007, 05:34:07 PM »
Roja, that one is definitely a well balanced one. Good work.
Roshni you also worked nice and then Roja you again compiled nice 4 lines.
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2007, 06:59:51 AM »
Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

So nice as usual RoJa..

princee too good
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2007, 12:42:02 AM »
Thank you very much for reading me Mr Ricky.. and

Thanks Paani...
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2007, 06:29:49 PM »
Quote from: "Roja"
Manzil ka nishaan maalum nahi.
Jayeinge kahaan maalum nahi

Aa baithe hain mahfil mein magar,
Mahfil ki jubaan maalum nahi.

Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

Lagte hai paraye hum ko kyu
Dil ke mehmaan malum nahi

Kyu pyaar mein jalne waalon par
Hansta hai jahaan malum nahi

Jis ko maine dilse chaha magar
Wo kyu mujhe jhooti kehta hai malum nahi
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touching lines Roja and roshu...!!!

Mehfillon ki bhi kaash Jubaan hoti Roja.....
Toh hum uss WaQt chup na baithe hote.......

Fikar bhi na karte unke Armaano ki......
Aur na hee apne Jazbaaton ki chot yoon seh rahe hote......

Yeh toh Gum ke Nishaan bhar bhi nahi......
Ke Andaaz dard ka Mohabbat ne abhi bayan kia nahi......

Raah nahi chali Hawa ne abhi mere Zakhmo par......
Aur lahoo ne mere abhi unke ASHQON ko piya nahi...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2007, 07:08:51 PM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Quote from: "Roja"
Manzil ka nishaan maalum nahi.
Jayeinge kahaan maalum nahi

Aa baithe hain mahfil mein magar,
Mahfil ki jubaan maalum nahi.

Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

Lagte hai paraye hum ko kyu
Dil ke mehmaan malum nahi

Kyu pyaar mein jalne waalon par
Hansta hai jahaan malum nahi

Jis ko maine dilse chaha magar
Wo kyu mujhe jhooti kehta hai malum nahi
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touching lines Roja and roshu...!!!

Mehfillon ki bhi kaash Jubaan hoti Roja.....
Toh hum uss WaQt chup na baithe hote.......

Fikar bhi na karte unke Armaano ki......
Aur na hee apne Jazbaaton ki chot yoon seh rahe hote......

Yeh toh Gum ke Nishaan bhar bhi nahi......
Ke Andaaz dard ka Mohabbat ne abhi bayan kia nahi......

Raah nahi chali Hawa ne abhi mere Zakhmo par......
Aur lahoo ne mere abhi unke ASHQON ko piya nahi...!!!


BAHUT KHOOB ROJA..BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...
GAURAV AAP NE BHI KHOOB KAHA
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2007, 07:18:00 PM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Quote from: "Roja"
Manzil ka nishaan maalum nahi.
Jayeinge kahaan maalum nahi

Aa baithe hain mahfil mein magar,
Mahfil ki jubaan maalum nahi.

Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

Lagte hai paraye hum ko kyu
Dil ke mehmaan malum nahi

Kyu pyaar mein jalne waalon par
Hansta hai jahaan malum nahi

Jis ko maine dilse chaha magar
Wo kyu mujhe jhooti kehta hai malum nahi
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touching lines Roja and roshu...!!!

Mehfillon ki bhi kaash Jubaan hoti Roja.....
Toh hum uss WaQt chup na baithe hote.......

Fikar bhi na karte unke Armaano ki......
Aur na hee apne Jazbaaton ki chot yoon seh rahe hote......

Yeh toh Gum ke Nishaan bhar bhi nahi......
Ke Andaaz dard ka Mohabbat ne abhi bayan kia nahi......

Raah nahi chali Hawa ne abhi mere Zakhmo par......
Aur lahoo ne mere abhi unke ASHQON ko piya nahi...!!!


BAHUT KHOOB ROJA..BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...
GAURAV AAP NE BHI KHOOB KAHA
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2007, 03:35:23 PM »
Thanks Gavrav and khwaish
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2007, 09:22:36 PM »
very nice
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2007, 05:24:35 AM »
Thnx Khwahish and Roja
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2009, 01:52:06 PM »
Manzil ka nishaan maalum nahi.
Jayeinge kahaan maalum nahi

Aa baithe hain mahfil mein magar,
Mahfil ki jubaan maalum nahi.

Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

Lagte hai paraye hum ko kyu
Dil ke mehmaan malum nahi

Kyu pyaar mein jalne waalon par
Hansta hai jahaan malum nahi

Jis ko maine dilse chaha magar
Wo kyu mujhe jhooti kehta hai malum nahi
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wowwwwwww..............roja kia baat hai bhut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne kia kehne hain..................likhti rhiye

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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2009, 02:01:10 PM »
Manzil ka nishaan maalum nahi.
Jayeinge kahaan maalum nahi

Aa baithe hain mahfil mein magar,
Mahfil ki jubaan maalum nahi.

Jaane waale nahi aate magar
Jaate hai kahaan malum nahi

Lagte hai paraye hum ko kyu
Dil ke mehmaan malum nahi

Kyu pyaar mein jalne waalon par
Hansta hai jahaan malum nahi

Jis ko maine dilse chaha magar
Wo kyu mujhe jhooti kehta hai malum nahi
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bhot khob roja ji really nice feelings
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