Kuch peete hai

by lib80aks on March 07, 2005, 12:20:48 PM
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ISHU
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«Reply #75 on: April 27, 2005, 02:17:44 PM »
Quote from: "lib80aks"
mandir mein jaakar paath kar lete hai..
masjid mein jaakar namaaz pad lete hai.....
kahi hum insaan se khuda na ban jaaye
bas isi liye thoda sa paap kar lete hai....(NM)
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Wah Wah Aks Ji Kya Kehne

Manzile Bhi uski thi,
rasta bhi uska tha,
ek main hi akela tha,
kafila bhi uska tha,
sath-2 chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
fir rasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha,
aaj kyon akela hu dil sawal karta hain,
log to uske the kya khuda bhi uska tha
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wafakadard
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«Reply #76 on: May 06, 2005, 04:24:55 AM »
Usual Smile  nice man
LIB80AKS sorry yar yeh to Shair ki bayzti pay ap uthar ay na
ap kyon karab kar rahay hain us ko jo main nay likha hai woh real one hai
anyways thansk for that

okay yeh lain ik aur MASTER peace


Husan walay shahbab lay ay.......
cahman walay GULAB lay ay
Shkeeh ji nay mang lii janat....
hum wahan say shahrab lay ay
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #77 on: May 06, 2005, 05:44:37 AM »
Quote from: "ISHU"
Quote from: "lib80aks"
mandir mein jaakar paath kar lete hai..
masjid mein jaakar namaaz pad lete hai.....
kahi hum insaan se khuda na ban jaaye
bas isi liye thoda sa paap kar lete hai....(NM)
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Wah Wah Aks Ji Kya Kehne

Manzile Bhi uski thi,
rasta bhi uska tha,
ek main hi akela tha,
kafila bhi uska tha,
sath-2 chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
fir rasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha,
aaj kyon akela hu dil sawal karta hain,
log to uske the kya khuda bhi uska tha
[/b]


very  nice work........wafakadard ........Ishu......libs....Just_Hate_Love

ur welcome........wafa.....ishu..........to  "Yoindia" tongue3
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #78 on: May 06, 2005, 12:11:38 PM »
Bahut hi khoob likha hai Ishu ... Aks ... Wafa ...
Keep it up ...


Aks to maujood the par aks tanhaai ke the,
Aaina to tha par usme tera chehra na tha,
Aaj usne dard bhi aapne alhadaa kar diya,
Aaj main roya to mere saath wo roya na tha ...
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lib80aks
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«Reply #79 on: May 06, 2005, 01:40:54 PM »
hi thanx.......... few very simple but good lines...from me...hope u will like

muslim bola mera madina hai bada.......
bola pandit mere man ko to  mandir hi bhaata hai.....
lakh accha hai.mandir masjid se maykhana e "AKS"
har jaath..har majhab ka.. INSAA.. to jaata hai.....
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wafakadard
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«Reply #80 on: May 09, 2005, 01:36:32 AM »
Waaiz Bada Mazaa ho Agar Yoon Azaab Ho!
Dozakh mein Paanw Haath mein Jaam-e-Sharaab ho!
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lib80aks
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«Reply #81 on: May 13, 2005, 05:41:07 AM »
unki ada se kuch samjhe ...to kya samjhe
gahdi gahdi mein woh to tewar badalte rahte hai(NM)
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #82 on: May 13, 2005, 09:20:10 PM »
mahboob ko mera slaam araz hai
har subah ,har saam araz hai
dil ki bekarari hai yeh
dard dil ka tamaam araz hai
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Just_Hate_Love
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hi,
«Reply #83 on: May 17, 2005, 11:19:35 AM »
Quote from: "lib80aks"
hi thanx.......... few very simple but good lines...from me...hope you will like

muslim bola mera madina hai bada.......
bola pandit mere man ko to  mandir hi bhaata hai.....
lakh accha hai.mandir masjid se maykhana e "AKS"
har jaath..har majhab ka.. INSAA.. to jaata hai.....





Bahut hi khoob likha hai,


Dil mein tumhaare apni kami chhod jayenge,
Aankhon mein aansu ki lakir chhod jayenge,
Yaad rakhna dhunte phiroge ek din,
Zindagi mein aisi dosti ki kami chhod jayenge ...(nm)
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lib80aks
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«Reply #84 on: May 21, 2005, 08:02:29 PM »
thanx a lot....just hate love.......i`ll try my best to write even better
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myloveosho
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«Reply #85 on: May 22, 2005, 07:49:41 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Mehkhane me jo logo ne hame dekha
to Diljale bhi heirat me aa gaye
logo ne pehchana na khud ko
aur dekho mujhko aazmaane aa gaye

HumTum



bahut accha kaha.
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lib80aks
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«Reply #86 on: May 23, 2005, 04:30:31 PM »
is tarah giraya uski nazro ne...
ju gire ashq ka moti koi utha na sake....
badi hasrat thi sitaro se maanag bharne ki....
hum unki maang mein sindoor tak laga na sake.....
NM
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #87 on: May 28, 2005, 06:29:21 PM »
Thanks a lot Aks for appreciation ...
You dont have to try for better one ...
You write is the best one's ...
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lib80aks
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«Reply #88 on: June 01, 2005, 12:18:12 PM »
beshak kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko,
par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko,
na rahi tammana kisi jannat ki,
ae dost teri dosti se vo pyar mila humko
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #89 on: June 02, 2005, 12:28:22 AM »
Kaheen aah bun kay lubb pay tera naam aa na jaaye
Tujhay bewafa kahoon main woh muqaam aa na jaye

Woh jo manziloon par laakar kisi hum safar ko lutein
Inheen rahhzanoon main tera kaheen naam ana jaye

Yeh loog tazkaray kartay hain apnay piyaroon kay
Main kis say baat karoon aur kahan say laoon ussay

Jo hum safar saray munzil bichhad raha hay Niazi
Ajubb naheen hay agar yaad bhee na aaoon ussay

Kisi ko ghhar say nikaltay hi mil gayee manzil
Koyee hamaree tarah ummar bhar safar main raha

Sooch kar mainay chuuni hay aakhri aram gahh
Main tha matti aur mujhay matti ka ghar acha laga

Manziloon ki baat chhodo kisnay payee manzilein
Ik safar achha laga ik hum safar achha laga
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