Kuch Rishte Bas Yuhi Toot Jaaya Karte Hai.......

by khwaish on May 26, 2009, 03:30:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 27, 2009, 04:31:25 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 26, 2009, 07:34:45 PM
Very nice Talat...

Rishte Aise Bhi Hote Hai Jo Bante Hai Dikhawe Ke Liye,
Inke Tootne Ka Gam Bhi Ho, Par Rakhna Bas Pal Bhar Ke Liye,
Kabhi Na Bahana Aansu Kisi Ki Nadaan Harkaton Ki Wajah Se,
Ke Ye Na Qaabil Hai Dosti Ya Ek Aansu Ke Qatre Ke Liye...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: May 27, 2009, 04:33:26 PM »
Quote from: Roja on May 27, 2009, 06:20:42 AM
Bahut bahut khoob..... Applause Khwaish bhaiya... bahut accha likha hai. All lines touched my heart.... Good ...Very good  Applause Applause

Thankyou Sooo Much Roja..
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«Reply #17 on: May 27, 2009, 05:05:54 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 27, 2009, 08:25:29 AM
Thanks Sweetie...bohot achcha likha hai...sach ka ek pehlu...Thanks dear.

Youare most welcome Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 27, 2009, 06:21:45 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on May 27, 2009, 09:38:06 AM
waah bahot khoob Khwaish ji, behad achha likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


ek Gulzaar sahab ka qalaam n 1 of my fvrt ghazal
nazr kar rahe hain, ummeed hai pasand aaye



haath chhute bhi to, rishtey nahi chhoda karte
waqt ki shaakh se, lamhe nahin toda karte
haath chhute bhi to, rishtey nahi chhoda karte

jiski aawaaz mein silwat ho, nigaahon mein shikan
aisi tasveer ke tukade nahi joda karte


shehad jine ka mila karata hai thoda thoda
jaanewaalon ke liyein dil nahin thoda karte


lagake saahil se jo behata hai use behane do
aise daryiyaan ka kabhi rukh nahin moda karte

waqt ki shaakh se, lamhe nahin toda karte
haath chhute bhi to, rishtey nahi chhoda karte



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji...

Aur Aapne Meri Be Man-Pasand Ghazal Share Ki hai Kaashji..
Thankyou Sooooooo Much!!!  icon_salut
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«Reply #19 on: May 27, 2009, 06:25:43 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2009, 06:33:20 AM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat..Aur Bilkul Sach Kahan Aapne,Shayad Hum Hi Samaj Naa Paaye..

Koi baat nahin Dost...Kai baar zindagi main aane wala saaneha (dukh) hume kuch na kuch sikha hi jaata hai!
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«Reply #20 on: May 27, 2009, 07:11:25 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2009, 04:31:25 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so much Khwaish Ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: May 27, 2009, 07:12:04 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 27, 2009, 06:18:57 AM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!!!
Umeed Karta Hoon, Aap Ka saath Hamesha Yuhi Bana Rahega..

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Angel!!! icon_flower

Hum to hamesha aapke saath hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: May 27, 2009, 09:38:40 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 26, 2009, 07:34:45 PM
Very nice Talat...

Rishte Aise Bhi Hote Hai Jo Bante Hai Dikhawe Ke Liye,
Inke Tootne Ka Gam Bhi Ho, Par Rakhna Bas Pal Bhar Ke Liye,
Kabhi Na Bahana Aansu Kisi Ki Nadaan Harkaton Ki Wajah Se,
Ke Ye Na Qaabil Hai Dosti Ya Ek Aansu Ke Qatre Ke Liye...

Bahaut acha likha hai Angel di...Applause
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«Reply #23 on: June 28, 2009, 05:32:27 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on May 27, 2009, 10:34:48 AM
Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha hai KLhwaish Bhai,.
Too Good,.

Aur Kaash Bhai Aapne Bhi kamaal Ka Likha Hai.

Bhaut Bahut Shukriya Azeem...
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«Reply #24 on: June 28, 2009, 05:56:03 PM »
bahut hi khub khwaish ji.....rishton ka bakhubi varnan.... bahut khub kha aapne....dusra pathar bhi maare to dard nahi hota lkin apna phool bhi maare to baht takleef hoti hai
       Applause Applause Applause Applause
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