Kuchh Alfaaz (Two Liners) {{NM}}

by angel4u on April 05, 2009, 06:06:39 AM

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Pooja

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«Reply #315 on: May 01, 2009, 05:38:15 AM »

nice work lil bro, salil and Angel


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salil2002

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Re: Kuchh Alfaaz (Two Liners) {{NM}}

«Reply #316 on: May 01, 2009, 05:57:25 AM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 01, 2009, 05:37:14 AM

Tune to bhar liye paimaane apne ashqon se,
main apne aankhon ki jalan dikhaun kise...

bahut achche huzena kya baat hai]

talabgaar hai mohabbat teri jaane kis kii
jalta hua parvaana yeh keh gaya shama se.........


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salma786

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Re: Kuchh Alfaaz (Two Liners) {{NM}}

«Reply #317 on: May 01, 2009, 05:58:29 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 11:15:30 AM

bahut achche Qadeer bhai aur salma....aap dono k saath shayari karne ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai

kii qabra kii mitti ko geela kar gaye yeh ashq kiske
mujhe toh ab bhi ashqon se ,khoo-e-boo aati hai

Shukriya!

Rooh-e-dard ki dastaan kya sunaye,
Ke kabr me bhi sukun naseeb na hua!


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angel4u

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Re: Kuchh Alfaaz (Two Liners) {{NM}}

«Reply #318 on: May 01, 2009, 05:59:40 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on May 01, 2009, 05:57:25 AM

bahut achche huzena kya baat hai]

talabgaar hai mohabbat teri jaane kis kii
jalta hua parvaana yeh gaya shama se.........

lovely

kehte hia parwana jalta hai shama ke liye,
par Shama ke ashqon ko kisine dekha kahan hai...


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salma786

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Re: Kuchh Alfaaz (Two Liners) {{NM}}

«Reply #319 on: May 01, 2009, 06:02:25 AM »

Bahoot khoob Azeem ji,Salil ji n Huzena sis

Ruswaaiyon ka silsila tu yun hi jari rakhna,
Ke akhir mera naam to teri zubaan pe hai!


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pankshivam

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«Reply #320 on: May 01, 2009, 06:11:39 AM »

Very nice Salmaji
Bahoot Khoob Algelji


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salma786

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«Reply #321 on: May 01, 2009, 06:22:12 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on May 01, 2009, 06:11:39 AM

Very nice Salmaji
Bahoot Khoob Angelji

Shukriya... aap kuch likhte to acha lagta!


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angel4u

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«Reply #322 on: May 01, 2009, 06:33:59 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on May 01, 2009, 06:11:39 AM

Very nice Salmaji
Bahoot Khoob Algelji

Thanks par likhe bina kyon gayab hogaye... sad5


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salil2002

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«Reply #323 on: May 01, 2009, 06:34:59 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on May 01, 2009, 05:58:29 AM

Shukriya!

Rooh-e-dard ki dastaan kya sunaye,
Ke kabr me bhi sukun naseeb na hua!

Quote from: {Angel} on May 01, 2009, 05:59:40 AM

lovely

kehte hia parwana jalta hai shama ke liye,
par Shama ke ashqon ko kisine dekha kahan hai...

Quote from: salma786 on May 01, 2009, 06:02:25 AM

Bahoot khoob Azeem ji,Salil ji n Huzena sis

Ruswaaiyon ka silsila tu yun hi jari rakhna,
Ke akhir mera naam to teri zubaan pe hai!

bahut achche salma ji and huzena ji

ek maut di shama ne parvaane ko aaj phir
aaj phir ek deewana mohabbat mein mit gaya


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angel4u

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«Reply #324 on: May 01, 2009, 06:39:23 AM »

Shama shayad mitati hogi parwaane ke wajood ko,
jalti hai shama kiske liye kabhi puchh liya karo...


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salil2002

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«Reply #325 on: May 01, 2009, 06:49:58 AM »

mohaabbat se poochha kyun jalta hi parvana hamnesha
ro oothi woh bhi, shama kii bewafaai pe


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angel4u

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«Reply #326 on: May 01, 2009, 06:56:13 AM »

shama bhi pighalti hia parwane ko jalane ke baad,
ke baad uske kahan uska wajood milta hai...


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pankshivam

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«Reply #327 on: May 01, 2009, 07:04:21 AM »

Very Nice Salil Bhai
Angelji Bahoot Khoob

Shama ki muhabbat parwane se anjaan nahi...
Mit jaye yunhi nishan jiske, inki muhabbat vo dastaan nahi....
~Pank~


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dead heart

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«Reply #328 on: May 01, 2009, 07:05:04 AM »

Wah Wah Wah Wah...Jab last tym iss thread main post kia tha toh suna suna lag raha tha par mashallah aaj ronak hi ronak hai...Hmm Qatil writers hai aap sab...dil ko chuu gayi har ek line aap sab ki likhi hui...

Salma jee, Angel di, Salil bhaijan, Azeem bhaijan, Qadir saheb aur Pank bhaijan...Bahaut khoob...


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angel4u

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«Reply #329 on: May 01, 2009, 07:07:36 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on May 01, 2009, 07:04:21 AM

Very Nice Salil Bhai
Angelji Bahoot Khoob

Shama ki muhabbat parwane se anjaan nahi...
Mit jaye yunhi nishan jiske, inki muhabbat vo dastaan nahi....
~Pank~

Shama pighalte pighalte bhi ye daastaan sunati hai,
na aa parwane mere paas, tujhe dekhke meri rooh pighalti hai...