Kuchh Jawab Ab Humse Sawaal Karte Hai___ {Angel}

by angel4u on July 06, 2009, 04:40:16 PM
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Kuch Jawab Ab Humse Sawal Karte Hai,
Zindagi Ki Veeraniyon Ne Hamein Patthar Kar Diya,

Kahan Kho Gaye Ho Tum In Anjaani Si Raahon Mein
Tumhare Qadmon Ke Nishaan To Ab Tak Hai In Raston Pe,
Saamne Hai Manzil Par Na Jaane Tum Kahan Kho Gaye,

Dhadkanein Tumhari Hamara Hi Naam Liya Karti Thi,
Kya In Mein Tumhari Dhadkanein Ab Shamil Nahi?
Aaj Meri Ye Dhadkanein Madhdham Hai Kyon,

Base The Hum Tumhari Har Saans Mein
Kya Tumhari Saanson Mein Ab Hum Mehekte Nahi?

Kyon Aaj Ye Laqeerein Alag Si Lagti Hai,
Kya In Mein Ab Tumhare Naam Ki Taqdeer Nahi?

Ujdi Hui Si Kyon Hamein Har Kali Lagti Hai,
Is Bahar Mein Kya Ab Hamara Ehsaas Nahi?

Kabhi Saath Milke Ghanton Dekhte The Samundar Ki Lehron Ko,
Aaj Tapti Hui Ret Pe Chalte Hue Sochte Hai Hum,

Kyon Aaj Tumhari Chahat Ki Chhanv Hamare Saath Nahi?
Zamane Ki Thokarein Se Jo Sambhalti Thi Hamein,
Aaj Wo Baahein Kyon Hamein Thaamti Nahi?

Aa Jao Sanam Ke Ab Bhi Tere Intezaar Mein Hai,
Ye Samundar, Ye Kaliyan, Ye Saansein, Ye Dhadkan,
Ye Rooh Adhoori Hai Tum Bin,
Aa Ke Kar Do Hamari Zindagi Ko Mukammal Sanam,
Aa Jao Na!!!
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2009, 04:42:56 PM »
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Kuch Jawab Ab Humse Sawal Karte Hai,
Zindagi Ki Veeraniyon Ne Hamein Patthar Kar Diya,

Kahan Kho Gaye Ho Tum In Anjaani Si Raahon Mein
Tumhare Qadmon Ke Nishaan To Ab Tak Hai In Raston Pe,
Saamne Hai Manzil Par Na Jaane Tum Kahan Kho Gaye,

Dhadkanein Tumhari Hamara Hi Naam Liya Karti Thi,
Kya In Mein Tumhari Dhadkanein Ab Shamil Nahi?
Aaj Meri Ye Dhadkanein Madhdham Hai Kyon,

Base The Hum Tumhari Har Saans Mein
Kya Tumhari Saanson Mein Ab Hum Mehekte Nahi?

Kyon Aaj Ye Laqeerein Alag Si Lagti Hai,
Kya In Mein Ab Tumhare Naam Ki Taqdeer Nahi?

Wah wah Bahut bahut accha likha hai tumne dear hasina
Padker dil ber aaya re... God Bless you... dear
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2009, 04:43:45 PM »
Bahoot khoob Angel!!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2009, 04:46:18 PM »

Wah wah Bahut bahut accha likha hai tumne dear hasina
Padker dil ber aaya re... God Bless you... dear


Thank you so much Roja...
Hmmmm, Bus pray for me... I really need.....
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2009, 04:46:47 PM »
Bahoot khoob Angel!!!

Shukriya Di, aapko itne din baad dekhke bahut achha laga Usual Smile
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2009, 04:56:12 PM »
AA Jao Na...!!!
Last Ke Yeh 3 Lafz aapki Is rachna ki Khubsoorati Me Chaar-chaand laga gaye Angel.. waqai Bahut Hi Behtreen Alfaaz Pesh kiye Hain.. Jinme Judaai ka dard bhi hai aur Mohabbat bhi.. Really Great Work..!! Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2009, 04:58:13 PM »

Thank you so much **Mann**

In lafzon mein dard aur usmein chhupi hui mohabbat samajhne ke liye... Aisa hai ke koi samajhna chahe to bahut kuch samajh sakta hai, agar na chahe to ye lafz shabdon ke siwa kuch bhi nahi...

Khair....
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2009, 05:13:09 PM »
Bohot Khoob Sweety, Dard ka ek darya samaya hai in lafzon main.....Jis main agar socho to bas insaan doobta chala jaaye.....Dil tak utarne waale alfaaz hain ye.......Bohot bohot Khoob dear.
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2009, 05:22:48 PM »
Thank you so much Talat. You always undersatnd my words and appreciate. Its really a pleasure to see your comments over my thread...

Thanks Dear...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2009, 07:10:28 PM »
Wow Angel ji,excellent,very beautiful creation,too good. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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superspawn10
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 07:53:19 PM »
wah..bohot badhiya angel ji... Usual Smile
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 01:03:59 AM »
Bohot khoob angel ji..achha likha aapne.

Jigar muradabaadi ka ek sher yaad aagaya...

Dil ko jala ke daag-e-tamanna diya mujhe
Ae ishq teri khair ho ye kaya diya mujhe

_____________________Jigar___
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2009, 01:07:10 AM »
Wah beautiful lines Sayyid ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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Deepati
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2009, 04:14:51 AM »
Wah Wah Angel Ji, Bahut khoobsurat likha hai!  Very touching! Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 04:18:41 AM »
Kuch Jawab Ab Humse Sawal Karte Hai,
Zindagi Ki Veeraniyon Ne Hamein Patthar Kar Diya,

Kahan Kho Gaye Ho Tum In Anjaani Si Raahon Mein
Tumhare Qadmon Ke Nishaan To Ab Tak Hai In Raston Pe,
Saamne Hai Manzil Par Na Jaane Tum Kahan Kho Gaye,

Dhadkanein Tumhari Hamara Hi Naam Liya Karti Thi,
Kya In Mein Tumhari Dhadkanein Ab Shamil Nahi?
Aaj Meri Ye Dhadkanein Madhdham Hai Kyon,

Base The Hum Tumhari Har Saans Mein
Kya Tumhari Saanson Mein Ab Hum Mehekte Nahi?

Kyon Aaj Ye Laqeerein Alag Si Lagti Hai,
Kya In Mein Ab Tumhare Naam Ki Taqdeer Nahi?

Ujdi Hui Si Kyon Hamein Har Kali Lagti Hai,
Is Bahar Mein Kya Ab Hamara Ehsaas Nahi?

Kabhi Saath Milke Ghanton Dekhte The Samundar Ki Lehron Ko,
Aaj Tapti Hui Ret Pe Chalte Hue Sochte Hai Hum,

Kyon Aaj Tumhari Chahat Ki Chhanv Hamare Saath Nahi?
Zamane Ki Thokarein Se Jo Sambhalti Thi Hamein,
Aaj Wo Baahein Kyon Hamein Thaamti Nahi?

Aa Jao Sanam Ke Ab Bhi Tere Intezaar Mein Hai,
Ye Samundar, Ye Kaliyan, Ye Saansein, Ye Dhadkan,
Ye Rooh Adhoori Hai Tum Bin,
Aa Ke Kar Do Hamari Zindagi Ko Mukammal Sanam,
Aa Jao Na!!!


Really nice one indeed Angel Ji
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