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Meena

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phir se ayi hoon ek new poem ke sath :D

Kitni fariyaade judi thi har ek kushi ke saath,
Chand kushiyon ko samet kar apni zindagi me hum sajane lage,

Kush te hum bohot, apne is chote se chaman me,
Ke jane kaisa mausam aya aur sab phool ek ek karke murjane lage,

Lak koshishe ki apni is bahar ko bachane ki humne,
Par kismat ke khel kaante haaton me rajane lage,

Ansoon bahete gaye, yuh apne armano ki maut dekh kar,
Shayad tabse hi hum har kushi se apna daman bachane lage!


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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2005, 05:30:53 PM »

meena sis...... :hug: u r gr8 Usual Smile

.....bohat khoob.


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Meena

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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2005, 05:40:55 PM »

oh shukriya ji shukriya kuddiye!!!!!!!!

:D


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2005, 05:52:26 PM »

ye Raat din ki tapish yun na hum ko pighlaati
Na aaag dil main bharakti na ye Jalan hoti


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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2005, 12:49:50 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Meena

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hai aur bhi Shuknwaar yoindia mein bahut
kehte hai ke "Meena" ka hai andaaz e byaaN aur !!

hummmmm dil ke jazbatoon ko alfaazoon mein pirona to bas aap se shikey ....... kismat se bhlaa aaj tak kaun lad paya hai .... fir bhi ashiq to anjaam e ishq ki parwaah kiye bhagir us rah pe chalta hi rehta hai ....... ishq aur dard .... bahut gehra rista hai in mein ....

tanhaiyon pe apne karam kuch jiada kiya hai
phir na karengey koi gilaa yeh waada kiya hai

lutaaye nahi lut ta zakhiraa-e-tanhai jaisey
sadiyon ka khazaana ek umr mien jama kiya hai

taweel safar-e-zindegaani, saaya na koi saathi
kis kis tarah se hamne tai ye faasla kiya hai

meri duaayooN ka asar ho kar rahegaa par magar
baad muddat ke "HumTum" ne yaad-e-khudaa kiya hai !!!


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nikki

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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2005, 03:42:11 PM »

too gud Meena sis..jeoo, maine kuch aisa likhne ka socha tha, aapne likh diya..main shayad itna acha nahi likh paati...really bahut acha likha hai aapne.
Humtum u have also written very well......very nice reply.....waoo


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Meena

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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2005, 04:44:04 PM »

waheed:
very nice waheed! :D

humtum ji:
oh shukriya janab! meri to koshish rehti hai apne to aise hi itni tareef kar di :D par thank u na!
hmm apki poem ka kya kahon aab?`itna kahongi ke jitni samajh ayi bohot achi thi :D phir se aapne chinese me likhna shuru kar diya sad5

nikki:
oh kuddiye, tum bhi likho yaar, tum khud hi bohot acha likhti ho i love to read ur poems!!! thanx a lot for liking my work!! :D


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2005, 05:51:52 PM »

Thanx alot Meena............................................ ...


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2005, 05:55:02 PM »

bahoot khoob meena ji...love to read ur work.....bahoot oomda likhti ho....

tere liye khuda ko bhi khudser likha kiye,
Gustaakh zindaki ko bhi her pal jiya kiye.

ye dil ki waadiyaan toh ab udaas ho chaleen
na ho sake sahil mere phir bhi jiya kiye.

zindagi ne bahoot liye hamse intkaam,
umeed kyuin wafa ki hum tumse kiya kiye.

amaanat ke tour pe para mehfooz dil wahi,
ab talak jahaan chot tum her pal diya kiye.

chaar din ki czindagi hai 'harsh' der-asal,
hum abas hi maut ko ruswa kiya kiye.

Harash Mahajan 'Harsh'


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sidhant_kudesia

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labo ki hansi

«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2005, 09:06:30 AM »

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labo ki hansi dekh kar you khushi ka andaza lagatey ho
na jane kitney gamoo ki yeh parda-dari hai.

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sidhant_kudesia

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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2005, 09:12:19 AM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

very nice i really like it .
bhaut dard hai shayari mey.


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Meena

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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2005, 02:46:35 PM »

harsh ji
bohot bohot shukriya meri poems pasand karne ka. apne bhi acha likha hai!! :D

sidhant ji:
welcome to yoindia! 2 lines me bohot kuch likha hai apne! pasand aya! keep writing! :D


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2005, 06:11:07 AM »

is tarah na parkho mujhey ai noor-e-bahaar
mere lafzon ne teri hi choton ki saja payee hai
ho sakey toh is gam-jada ko ik martaba our
chot dena..yahi is nacheez ke liye rehaayee hai.

Harsh


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Delicate_Doll

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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2005, 07:27:37 AM »

nice one all .....gr8 one meenu sis ..........!!! bahut khoob........!!!


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Meena

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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2005, 03:11:45 PM »

wah wah harsh ji! bohot ache!! :D

thanxxxx samla sis!! :D


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