""Kusoor kya hai""

by nirala on January 16, 2011, 12:28:03 PM
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zism aur zazbaaton ka ab wazood kya hai!

duniya ke iss baazaar me mehfooz kya hai!

kaleze me samakar kaise fir andar se,cheerte hain

aise dilkash qaatilon ka usool kya hai!

kadam dar kadam dhoka hai, har taraf

jane is matlabparasti ka dastoor kya hai!

chaya hai nasha sa sabhi me, magroor hain saare

jaane iss madhoshi ka suroor kya hai!

sachh kahin kho sa gaya ab dikhawe ke sansaar me

sach bolkar ilzaam leta hai 'nirala' khud par
 
koi btaye isme bhala ab uska kusoor kya hai !
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 01:25:29 PM »
dhanyabaad ji
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 01:30:30 PM »
Aadab Nirala Jee

Behad achcha likha hai aapne..
Ahsaas o khayaal behad khoob rahe..

Daad hazir hai ..

Likhate rahiye..
Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2011, 01:48:57 PM »
Bahut Khub KB Ji Nice And Sweet Creation Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2011, 01:52:04 PM »
Bahut khoob nirala ji..
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2011, 02:18:02 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye...!
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 05:55:08 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 07:18:59 AM »
wah bahut khub niralaji...

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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 07:36:39 AM »
koi kasuur nahin hai nirala ji....bilkul nirdosh hain aap....
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bas ek khata ki hai ee mastane nirala tune
sach ko kadwe shabdon me saamne rakha hai

log mithi boli bolke khanjar chubhate hain
tune nangi talwaar k saamne khudko parosa hai

ab koi zakhm lage tujhe uss talwaar se to tu hi bata
uss khun se sani bechari talwaar ka kasuur kya hai...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 07:39:13 AM »
hiyaaaaa mai aa gaya Usual Smile
sabse pahle sabhi logo ko thankuuuuuuu kyunki sabne apna apna waqt dia iss postwa me Usual Smile
baaki sabko bhi dhanyabaad jinhone waqt nhi dia Usual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 07:42:02 AM »
zism aur zazbaaton ka ab wazood kya hai!

duniya ke iss baazaar me mehfooz kya hai!

kaleze me samakar kaise fir andar se,cheerte hain

aise dilkash qaatilon ka usool kya hai!

kadam dar kadam dhoka hai, har taraf

jane is matlabparasti ka dastoor kya hai!

chaya hai nasha sa sabhi me, magroor hain saare

jaane iss madhoshi ka suroor kya hai!

sachh kahin kho sa gaya ab dikhawe ke sansaar me

sach bolkar ilzaam leta hai 'nirala' khud par
 
koi btaye isme bhala ab uska kusoor kya hai !



Bahut bahut Khoob Niralaji..

Kya Baat Hai!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 07:50:28 AM »
Khwahishh ji apko dhero thanku aapne mujhe fir se ek baar mere hi likhe se rubaru krwaya.
aapki nazar e inayat manye rakhti hai mere liye.
sarahne ke liye Thankuuuuu
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thanx
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 08:00:02 AM »
hay re.........

maar dala nirala ji ki nirali poetry ne......

"chaya hai nasha sa sabhi me, magroor hain saare

jaane iss madhoshi ka suroor kya hai!"

uffffff ab kya kahe.........bas lajawab he ji....msot wonderful post nirala ji........keep it up
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 08:07:31 AM »
Matrix Yaara---
aapki dua hai ji.
aapko dekh kuch liklikha lete hain.
aapki Daad ke liye thankuuu
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thanx
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 08:11:59 AM »
K mam --maar daala aapke reply ne.
aapka ye andaaz jawab dene ka hume bahut hi nirala lagta hai.
aapne sach ko aur kadwa upar se mujhe Nangi talwaar ke samne kar dia Gazabbb ji.
aapka jawab nhi
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thanx
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