*~*KyA bAaT hAi Us PaRwAaNe Ki*~*:Shayri-E-Dard

ghayal_shayar

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ek baar fir pesh hai ye nacheez ghayal aap sabhi ke saamne ek aur kalaam le kar,isi umeed ke satah ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaayega.

to pesh-e-khidmat hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam.........

apne ashkon se teri aankhon ko bhigote hain,teri ungliyon ko apne badan pe chubhote hain,teri yaadon ka jo sagar hai saath mere,usme raat-din khud ko dubote hain,ab to bas samaa hi ho gaya hai kuch yun ki,ek dooje ko yad kar tu v roti hai,hum bhi rote hain............

sach sirf rote hain.............

kosish ki humne tujhko paane ki,
saza mili hume dil aazmane ki.
khud jise shamma dhoodh rahi,
kya baat hai us parwaane ki.

main ek zinda laash ho gaya,
zindagi se hataash ho gaya,
roshani se is kadar naata tuta,
main amawas ka aakash ho gaya.
ro na pade kahin meri haalat dekh,
so khabar na lena is deewane ki.
khud jise shama dhoond rahi hai,
kya baat hai us parwaane ki..........

ishq mera khuda,tu meri khudaai,
tu meri mehfil,aur tu meri tanhaai,
sab seh lega "ghayal" bas,
seh na paayega teri judaai.
bhula na dena mujhe kabhi,
yaad sambhale rakhna is anjaane ki,
khud jise shamma dhoodh rahi,
kya baat hai us parwaane ki.............

na zameen me,na falak me,
na hi kisi kaatil jhalak me,
tera basera to hota hai bas,
meri us bheegi palak me.
tu hi mera aakhiri sahara,
tu hi karan mere ladkhadaane ki.
khud jise shamma dhoodh rahi,
kya baat hai us parwaane ki.

lamha-lamha bas tera intezaar hai,
tute hue dil ko kahan karaar hai,
ye bas teri bewafaai ki jeet,
aur meri mohabbat ki haar hai.
ye dard mila mujhe,shayad saza thi,
teri yaadon se khud ko sajane ki.
khud jise shamma dhoodh rahi,
kya baat hai us parwaane ki.

ab kosish karte hain tujhe bhulaane ki,
teri yaadon ke sung khud ko mitaane ki.
khud jise shamma dhoodh rahi,
kya baat hai us parwaane ki.


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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2006, 07:05:03 PM »

Awesome.....splendid.....kya baat hai ghayal_shayar ji,bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne...sach me kya baat hai IS parwane ki Usual Smile


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2006, 07:59:46 AM »

bahot khoob ghayal shayar.......... bahot accha aap ne likha... :lol:


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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2006, 12:05:02 PM »

Bohot khoob ghayal ji...!!each line is lovelly & xtrmly touching!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2006, 12:16:09 PM »

It was fantastic ones Ghayal ...
You deserve it and are really good ...


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2006, 12:53:41 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Awesome.....splendid.....kya baat hai ghayal_shayar ji,bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne...sach me kya baat hai IS parwane ki Usual Smile

nidhi ji humari khusnaseebi ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.bas aage bhi yunhi padhti rahiyega aap hume.


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2006, 12:55:16 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

bahot khoob ghayal shayar.......... bahot accha aap ne likha... :lol:

waheed bhai ye to aapki nazar thi jo aapko is nacheez ka kalaam pasand aaya.bas aage bhi yunhi padhte rahiyega hume aap.


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2006, 12:57:03 PM »

Quote from: "sweety pie"

Bohot khoob ghayal ji...!!each line is lovelly & xtrmly touching!!

it touched u dats my work done.hope u will keep reading the same way.


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phoenix

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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2006, 05:56:41 PM »

wah wah ghayal ji kya baat hai


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2006, 07:29:45 AM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

It was fantastic ones Ghayal ...
You deserve it and are really good ...

thanks dear for likig it.hope u will keep reading the same way.


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Delicate_Doll

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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2006, 07:32:07 AM »

gr8 Work ghayal_shayar jee...!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2006, 10:32:13 AM »

Kyu tumhare is aashiq ka parwano mein naam lete ho,
Kehkar ke dil doge hamari jaan lete ho,
Pata hai nahi rakh sakte hum apni dhadkano pe kaabu,
Phir kyu hamari mohabbat ka imtehaan lete ho...


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2006, 01:28:41 PM »

Quote from: "salma4u"

gr8 Work ghayal_shayar jee...!!!

thanks salma ji.keep reading.


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2006, 01:30:44 PM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Kyu tumhare is aashiq ka parwano mein naam lete ho,
Kehkar ke dil doge hamari jaan lete ho,
Pata hai nahi rakh sakte hum apni dhadkano pe kaabu,
Phir kyu hamari mohabbat ka imtehaan lete ho...

wah kya sher kaha hai janab.par.......

aashiq bhi to parwaane hi hote hain,
ishq ki shamma me jo khud ko jala lete hain.


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2006, 05:27:08 PM »

very nice JHl.......... Ghayal shayar......


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