Kya Karun Teri Shikayat.!

by majid on August 14, 2009, 11:05:07 AM
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                  Kya   Karun   Teri  Shikaayat   Zamaane  Se
                  Tu  To  Bichad  Gaya  Hai , Kisi  Bahaane Se.

                  Kehne  Ko  To  Keh  Deta  Haal-e-Dil Apna
                  Par Kuch Nahi  Milta , Gairon Ko Sunane Se.

                  Dosti  Ab ,  Andheron  Se  Maine  Karli  Hai
                  Kya Hoga  Ab , Roshni  Ko  Ghar Jhalane Se.

                  Nazuk Se Dil  Pe , Ab  Bhi Zakhm Taaza Hai
                  Waqt  Kab  Thakta  Hai , Bhala Aazmane Se.

                  Is Qadar Masroof Raha Teri Yaadon Men Ki
                  Kahan Bhool Paaya Main ,Tujhe Bhulane Se.



 
                                      (Shihab)
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2009, 11:07:27 AM »
Kya baat hai Majid...Bohot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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sbechain
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2009, 11:45:14 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB SHIHAB JI Applause Applause Applause Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2009, 11:52:13 AM »
Wah Wah Bahut khoob Shihab Ji.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Aaj to jaise hamare hi dil ke khayalat likh diye aapne..!! GUstakhi maaf ho kuch likhne ki khata kar rahe hai...!!!

Kabhi dil khol kar roya karte the ham,
Aab to aansoo bhi nahi aate hai bahane se,

Iss kadar dil me reh ke dil ko banjar kiya,
Darta hai mann aab kisi aur ko basane se,

Aur bhi to kayi log aaye hi hai lout ke,
Tu bhi lout aa na kabhi kisi bahane se,

Pyaar liya, waqt liya aur le li khushiya bhi,
Aab aa ke ek baar jaan bhi le ja iss diwane se.

Shally.
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2009, 12:28:03 PM »
Bahut Acche Majid Bhai Lajawab Likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause

Shally Dear aapne Bhi Bahut Khoooob Likha hai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2009, 02:29:48 PM »
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Shihab.. bahoot Khoob!

Shally tumne bhi bahoot Khoob likha hai
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javedarshad
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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2009, 02:53:33 PM »
Shihab Sb

Bahut khoob
dad hazir hai



javed
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2009, 05:13:38 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai Majid wah ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai

shally bahoot acha sath diya hai apne..

Good work Both!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2009, 05:41:04 PM »
Majid saaHeb:

AOA!

aapne apnii Ghazal ke saath pooraa iNsaaf kiyaa hay.. bahot hi umdaah aSh'aar  raheN.. aaGhaaz se lekar aNjaam tak bahot hi Khuub aNdaaz-e-bayaaN aapka! dil se nikli hu'ii daad ko qabUl keejiYeNgaa!

yuuNhi bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte raheN!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

> Shaily jee aapne bhee bahot Khuub liKhaa hay!

aapka

~ Dhaval
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2009, 05:47:19 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on August 14, 2009, 11:05:07 AM
    Kya Karun Teri Shikaayat Zamaane Se
   Tu To Bichad Gaya Hai Kisi Bahaane Se.

    Kehne Ko To Keh Deta Haal e Dil Apna
   Par Kuch Nahi Milta Gairon Ko Sunane Se.

    Dosti Ab Andheron Se Maine Karli Hai
   Kya Hoga Ab Roshni Ko Ghar Jhalane Se.

   Nazuk Se Dil Pe Ab Bhi Zakhm Taaza Hai
    Waqt Kab Thakta Hai Bhala Aazmane Se.

    Is Qadar Masroof Raha Teri Yaad Mei Ki
   Kahan Bhool Paaya Main,Tujhe Bhulane Se




Yah char line dil ko ander tak chu gai… wapis akar phir se kai baar apki yah kavita parri… bahoot khoob

Nazuk Se Dil Pe Ab Bhi Zakhm Taaza Hai
    Waqt Kab Thakta Hai Bhala Aazmane Se.

    Is Qadar Masroof Raha Teri Yaad Mei Ki
   Kahan Bhool Paaya Main,Tujhe Bhulane Se

Kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu:

Zamane se nahi khud se shikayat hoti hai
Tanhaai meri jab mujh se lipat kar roti hai

Dil main agg ka samunder jaise jalta hai
Ankhon mai ansoo ki ek boond bhi nahi hoti hai

Mrigchika si ban gai hai meri zindagi mere liye
Mar mar kar jeeti hai, jee jee kar roj marti hai

Waqat se waqat ki ladai bhi kare to kis ke liye
Her teri yaad, waqat - bewaqat lipat kar mujhse roti hai

Zamane se nahi khud se shikayat hoti hai
Tanhaai meri, jab mujh se lipat kar roti hai……
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2009, 06:22:56 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on August 14, 2009, 11:05:07 AM
    Kya Karun Teri Shikaayat Zamaane Se
   Tu To Bichad Gaya Hai Kisi Bahaane Se.

    Kehne Ko To Keh Deta Haal e Dil Apna
   Par Kuch Nahi Milta Gairon Ko Sunane Se.

    Dosti Ab Andheron Se Maine Karli Hai
   Kya Hoga Ab Roshni Ko Ghar Jhalane Se.

   Nazuk Se Dil Pe Ab Bhi Zakhm Taaza Hai
    Waqt Kab Thakta Hai Bhala Aazmane Se.

    Is Qadar Masroof Raha Teri Yaad Mei Ki
   Kahan Bhool Paaya Main,Tujhe Bhulane Se



bhut badiya hai shihaab sahab kya baat hai dear
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2009, 08:30:19 AM »
Shukriya Shihab Ji, Aur bahut hi behtreen jawab aaya hai aapki taraf se..

Tu thi to bahut kuch tha paas mere,
Aab har cheez, insaan se, begana ho gaya mein,

Tere rehte ek dorr si bandhi thi sabse,
Aab to shayro ki galiyon me awara ho gaya mein,

Teri khatir kuch kaam-kaar kar leta tha,
Jab se gaya hai tu bujhdil nakara ho gaya mein,

Tumne hi mujhe bana rakha tha dildaar,
Tere jaane ke baad sabke liye bechara ho gaya mein.

Shally.
 
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2009, 09:50:14 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on August 14, 2009, 11:05:07 AM
    Kya Karun Teri Shikaayat Zamaane Se
   Tu To Bichad Gaya Hai Kisi Bahaane Se.

    Kehne Ko To Keh Deta Haal e Dil Apna
   Par Kuch Nahi Milta Gairon Ko Sunane Se.

    Dosti Ab Andheron Se Maine Karli Hai
   Kya Hoga Ab Roshni Ko Ghar Jhalane Se.

   Nazuk Se Dil Pe Ab Bhi Zakhm Taaza Hai
    Waqt Kab Thakta Hai Bhala Aazmane Se.

    Is Qadar Masroof Raha Teri Yaad Mei Ki
   Kahan Bhool Paaya Main,Tujhe Bhulane Se


bahut khuuuuuub Sahihab ji......bahut sahi kha aapne
"waqt kab thakta hai bhala aajmaane se" bahut khub Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2009, 10:05:01 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Shally ji and Shihab ji mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
excellent,bahut acha likha aap dono ne.
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«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2009, 02:41:52 PM »
Mashallah Ek Behatreen Kalaam Likha Hai Majid Bhai,.

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And Nice REply By You Shally,.

And Good JOb By U Pooja Sis,.
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