Kya Karun Teri Shikayat.!

by majid on August 14, 2009, 11:05:07 AM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #15 on: August 21, 2009, 09:11:46 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Shihab ji,mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: August 22, 2009, 07:57:24 AM »
bahut hi khub Shally ji & Sahihab ji........lajwaab...khub mehfil lagayi hui hai aap dono ne.....bahut achha lga parrkar.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapne bahut behtrin alfaaz pesh kiye Pooja ji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: August 31, 2009, 03:10:00 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work Shihab ji and Shally
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: September 22, 2009, 03:59:06 PM »
kaya karu teri shikayat
dil khud teri gawahi deta hai
dard dene mai tune to koi kasar chori nahi
phir kyun tera dard, meri dhadkano koi sunai deta hai!!!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #19 on: September 22, 2009, 09:12:58 PM »
Really touching lines Pooja ji ,bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Sajania
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«Reply #20 on: September 23, 2009, 07:43:31 AM »
bohut bohut bohut hi khoob..... Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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k.shael
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«Reply #21 on: September 23, 2009, 07:49:08 AM »
Sahel Ji Aapne Mujhe
Sochne Par Majbur Kar Diya
Samajh Main Nahi Aaya Kya Rep Dun
Par Phir Bhi Aaj Thoda Waqt Mila
To Koshish Ki Hai Galti Maaf Ho Ji.!



Kabhi Khona Aur Kabhi Pana Hai
Yeh Silsila Bada Hi Puraana Hai.

Chaahe Jitni Bhi Karu Koshishen
Tujse Bichadna To Ek Bahana Hai.

Teri Yaad Ki Khusboo Me Lipatkar
Tanha Hi Muhabbat Ko Nibhana Hai.

Yun To Usse Jaan Dekar B Paa Lete
Magar Kismat Ka Khel B Nirala Hai.

Rakh Ke Dil Mein Un Beeti Baato Ko
Bas Ab Zindagi Ko Yun Hi Bitana Hai.


Thanks to all of u & Shihab Ji, Wah Kya khoob reply diya hai aapne..
Jald hi reply dene ki koshish hogi..

Shally.




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k.shael
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«Reply #22 on: September 24, 2009, 06:21:24 AM »
Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai, umeed hai pasandh karenege aap..

Duniya ka kya hai isne to satana hai,
Magar ae dil tujhe himmat dikhana hai!!

Laakh chube kante, chalte jaana hai,
Haan ek din, uss manzil ko paana hai!!

Gammo ko dekhna nahi mitana hai,
Roti hai aankh lekin muskurana hai!!

Haq ho chahe, na kabhi jatana hai,
Tumhe chahte the, aur chahte jaana hai!!
Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #23 on: September 24, 2009, 06:31:31 AM »
Wah Wah Shael Ji Kya Khoob Andaaz e Bayaan Hai
Bahut Hi Achha Likha Hai Aapne
Waise To Hat Line Apne Mein Kuch Khas Hai
Par Last Wali Line To Dil Chhu Gayi
Good Job Ji Keep It Up
Kuch Bana To Jarur Aapki Nazar Karenge Ji.

Shukriya Shihab Ji..Intezaar rahega aapke reply ka..

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: September 24, 2009, 06:56:01 AM »


Uski Mohabbat Se Koi Shikayat Nahi,.
Gila Magar Apni Kismat Se Hai Mujhe,.

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«Reply #25 on: October 05, 2009, 05:58:55 PM »
lovely thread
keep it up shihaab ji,pooja ji and shael ji
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«Reply #26 on: October 05, 2009, 06:56:11 PM »
Thank You So Much Thegrimreaper ji
And Plz Call Me Shihab..!

sry for seplling mistake
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