Kya kasur hai merra...

by brokenbyluv on October 15, 2010, 01:43:27 PM
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Tum kyun nhi aaoge merri zindgi mein,
kyun nhi asar laoge merri bandgi mein,

bina kahe tumne mujhse pyar kiya hai,
zamane bhar mein apni chaht ka izhar kiya hai,

phir aaj kyun mujhe iss dard mein akela chhod gye ho,
tumhari ankho ne jo waade kiye the mujhse tum kyun unhe tod gye ho,

kya kasur hai merra jo tumhe chahne lagi hu main,
har pal har ghadi terri yad mein ansu bahane lagi hu main,

itna asaan hai kya har baar mhbt mein haarna,
bada mushkil hai merri jaan khud ko jite ji maarna,

nhi himmat mujhme ki main apni jaan le saku,
na hi koi farishta hai jise main apni mhbt ka farman de saku,

main janti thi ki tu mujhse door chala jayega,
merre laakh bulane per bhi tu merre paas na ayega,

phir bhi terri baato pe aetbaar karti rahi hu,
khud se zyada main tujhse pyar karti rahi hu,

tou kya hoga jo tu bhi mujhe zindgi mein tanha chhod dega,
ji lungi zinda laash banke jb tu apna rishta kisi aur se jod lega.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2010, 03:16:39 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko shabdon me bayaan kiya hai..... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


na to dur ja paaya hoon na dur ja paunga,
tumhaari ek awaaz pe khincha chala aaunga,

chaaha hai tumhe duniya me har rishte se badhke,
main kaise tumhaara pyaar bhara dil tod paunga,

pyaar maine kiya nahi tha tumse wo to khud ba khud ho gaya tha,
ab main apne pyaar bhare dil ko tumse kaise juda kar paunga,

dur hoon tumse kuch pal ke liye par main laut aaunga,
kaise main tumse kiye huye waadon ko tod paunga,

na bahao tum apne aankhon se moti jaise aansoo,
main tumhaari chaahat ko apni chaahat se nibhaunga,

kaun kehta hai tumse ki tum mar jaao mohabbat me,
tumhare aisa kehne se main bhi to mar ji jaaunga,

tumhe aetbaar tha mujhpe kabhi to aaj kyun nahi hai,
kar lo aetbaar fir se ki main laut ke jarur aaunga,

soch bhi nahi sakta kisi aur k baare me tumnhaare siwa,
aisa karna pade agar kabhi to main ye duniya chhod jaunga,

yakeen karo tum mujhe main bas tumhaare "Geet" gungunaunga,
kehta hai ye "Hriday" mera main marke bhi pyaar nibhaunga.....
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2010, 11:49:28 PM »
BBL jee Aadaab!

Kafi touchy ahsaas kahe hai daad....
       
Itna aasaaN hai kia har baar mohobbat meiN harna
Bada mushkil hai meri jaaN khudko jite jii marna

Amazing one ... Bahut khoob daad daad daad
Likhati rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile

Klaskar jee Aadaab... Kafi achcha reply kiya hai aapne
BBL jee ke Dard bhare nagme ko Romantik bana diya aapne Daad..

Likhate rahiye......
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2010, 12:01:07 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji...  main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa karta hoon....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2010, 08:35:50 AM »
Geet Ji.. Humesha Ki Tarah aapke Alfaazon ne Dil Ko Kisi ki yaadon me Doobne ko Majboor kar diya.. Aapki Shayari Humesha har padhne wale Ko apni Zindgi se Judi lagti hai.. aur majboor kar deti hai in alfaazon ko mehsoos karne ke liye.. aur asli mayano me shayar wahi hota hai... Har padhne wale ko un Gaharaaiyon me Utrane ko majboor kar de.. Applause Applause

Dil se Daad Hi daad..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2010, 08:36:44 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 15, 2010, 03:16:39 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko shabdon me bayaan kiya hai..... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


na to dur ja paaya hoon na dur ja paunga,
tumhaari ek awaaz pe khincha chala aaunga,

chaaha hai tumhe duniya me har rishte se badhke,
main kaise tumhaara pyaar bhara dil tod paunga,

pyaar maine kiya nahi tha tumse wo to khud ba khud ho gaya tha,
ab main apne pyaar bhare dil ko tumse kaise juda kar paunga,

dur hoon tumse kuch pal ke liye par main laut aaunga,
kaise main tumse kiye huye waadon ko tod paunga,

na bahao tum apne aankhon se moti jaise aansoo,
main tumhaari chaahat ko apni chaahat se nibhaunga,

kaun kehta hai tumse ki tum mar jaao mohabbat me,
tumhare aisa kehne se main bhi to mar ji jaaunga,

tumhe aetbaar tha mujhpe kabhi to aaj kyun nahi hai,
kar lo aetbaar fir se ki main laut ke jarur aaunga,

soch bhi nahi sakta kisi aur k baare me tumnhaare siwa,
aisa karna pade agar kabhi to main ye duniya chhod jaunga,

yakeen karo tum mujhe main bas tumhaare "Geet" gungunaunga,
kehta hai ye "Hriday" mera main marke bhi pyaar nibhaunga.....
Kapil Bhai aapne bhi Kamaal likha hai... Bahut khoob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2010, 10:21:40 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji...!!!

Quote from: Mann on October 16, 2010, 08:36:44 AM
Kapil Bhai aapne bhi Kamaal likha hai... Bahut khoob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2010, 11:03:11 AM »
Tahe dil se shurkiya,parwaaz ji,mann ji aur shihab ji........
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2010, 11:04:00 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 15, 2010, 03:16:39 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko shabdon me bayaan kiya hai..... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


na to dur ja paaya hoon na dur ja paunga,
tumhaari ek awaaz pe khincha chala aaunga,

chaaha hai tumhe duniya me har rishte se badhke,
main kaise tumhaara pyaar bhara dil tod paunga,

pyaar maine kiya nahi tha tumse wo to khud ba khud ho gaya tha,
ab main apne pyaar bhare dil ko tumse kaise juda kar paunga,

dur hoon tumse kuch pal ke liye par main laut aaunga,
kaise main tumse kiye huye waadon ko tod paunga,

na bahao tum apne aankhon se moti jaise aansoo,
main tumhaari chaahat ko apni chaahat se nibhaunga,

kaun kehta hai tumse ki tum mar jaao mohabbat me,
tumhare aisa kehne se main bhi to mar ji jaaunga,

tumhe aetbaar tha mujhpe kabhi to aaj kyun nahi hai,
kar lo aetbaar fir se ki main laut ke jarur aaunga,

soch bhi nahi sakta kisi aur k baare me tumnhaare siwa,
aisa karna pade agar kabhi to main ye duniya chhod jaunga,

yakeen karo tum mujhe main bas tumhaare "Geet" gungunaunga,
kehta hai ye "Hriday" mera main marke bhi pyaar nibhaunga.....

Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji...bahut shurkiya merri kavita pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2010, 11:32:49 AM »
wah geet di bahut khoob likha he apne...

bahut sundar alfaz piroye he ...maja aa gaya~
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2010, 11:33:54 AM »
Bahut bahut shurkiya abhi ji...
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2010, 11:37:08 AM »
geet di apko di keheta hu na kam se kam ji to mat lagao diiii~
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2010, 11:40:04 AM »
Ok ABHI..ab thik hai...
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«Reply #13 on: October 20, 2010, 09:49:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 19, 2010, 11:04:00 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji...bahut shurkiya merri kavita pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #14 on: October 20, 2010, 09:53:40 AM »
Usual Smile
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