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<>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

Dard se mera rishta bada purana tha
Tu to sirf uska bana ek naya bahana tha

Tere dar pe aate rahe hum iss umeed pe
Humne suna tha k tu kabhi mera deewana tha

Na ban sake tere humsafar hum sanam
Ek taraf tu tha ek taraf zaalim zamana tha

Tum tadapte rahe hamare liye aur sanam
Humari khwaish to aasmaan k aage jana tha

Hamari chahut me tum ho gaye fanaa sanam
Samjhe hum tab jab thokron me aapki zamana tha

Sara zamana jab hua deewana tumhare kalaam ka
Tab jaake samjha humne kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…!!!


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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 04:50:42 PM »

Nice poem Annu-di...... Applause

Kya khoob mera wo deewana tha......
Shama pe mit gaya pawaana tha...

Kiye they jo waade nibhaana tha
Par beech hamaare zamaana tha

Kissaa wahee sakhee puraana tha
Chhod gaya wo na koi bahaana tha

Kya khoob mera wo deewana tha....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 30, 2010, 02:38:33 PM

<>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

Dard se mera rishta bada purana tha
Tu to sirf uska bana ek naya bahana tha

Tere dar pe aate rahe hum iss umeed pe
Humne suna tha k tu kabhi mera deewana tha

Na ban sake tere humsafar hum sanam
Kya karte ek taraf tu ek taraf zaalim zamana tha

Tum tadapte rahe hamare liye aur sanam
Humari khwaish wo aasmaan ka ujlaa sitara tha

Hamari chahut me tum ho gaye fanaa sanam
Samjhe jab thokron me apna dil humne paaya tha

Sara zamana jab hua deewana tumhare kalaam ka
Tab jaake samjha humne kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…!!!


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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 05:26:24 PM »

KOYALLL....BHT PYARA REPLY....

US JAISA NA DEKHA MAINE KOI INSAN HAI
MERE DEEWANE KA EK ALAG HI ANDAAZ HAI

USKI MAHOBBAT USKI WAFAEIN
GURUR HAIN MERA WO MERA NAAZ HAI

JITNA BHI CHAHUN USE WO KUM HI LAGE MUJHE
MERE DIL PE BAS USI KA HI TO RAAJ HAI

MERA HUMSAFAR HAI WO MERA HAI HUMSAAYA
MERA PARWANA HAI WO HI TO MERA HUMRAAZ HAI..!!!


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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 05:30:03 PM »

bahut khoob kasak ji n nice reply koyal...


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ParwaaZ

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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2010, 05:59:23 PM »

Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aapki yeh koshish to bahut achchi rahi ... aur ashar bhi bahut achche rahe...

Chaliye aaj humare andaaz meiN aapki post ko padhte hai...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 30, 2010, 02:38:33 PM

<>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

Dard se mera rishta bada purana tha
Tu to sirf uska bana ek naya bahana tha

Masha Allah ! Kia kahne hai bahut umdaa aur gehra kahahai aapne sidhe se lazoN meiN realy mind blowing...

Tere dar pe aate rahe hum iss umeed pe
Humne suna tha k tu kabhi mera deewana tha

Ka baat hai sach meiN behad achcha sher hai daad janab....

Na ban sake tere humsafar hum sanam
Kya karte ek taraf tu ek taraf zaalim zamana tha

Bahut achcha raha yeh sher bhi... Secoud line ko zarra chota karne ki koshish kariye..

Tum tadapte rahe hamare liye aur sanam
Humari khwaish wo aasmaan ka ujlaa sitara tha

Sher achcah hai per yeh sitara kahaaN se aa gaya jee.... Aapne jo pahele kafiyaa use kiye use hi countinue rakhte... Zamana deewaana fasaana banaana bataana yeh aise words use kariye ..

Hamari chahut me tum ho gaye fanaa sanam
Samjhe jab thokron me apna dil humne paaya tha

Sher bhi kuch kamzor bana hai... aur wohi kafiye meiN gadbad kar dii jee aapne...

Sara zamana jab hua deewana tumhare kalaam ka
Tab jaake samjha humne kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…!!!

Hmmmm Kafi tez tanz kiya hai Kasak Jee... Daad sher achcha hai ...

Aapki yeh koshshih behad pur asar aur khoob rahi Kasak jee .... Koshish jari rakhiye...

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez.......


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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2010, 06:07:37 PM »

humne sari galtiyan sudhaar li parwaz ji ab chk kijiye kaisi hai....
kabse soch rahe hain kab aap hmari kisi poem ka post martum karen aur bataye ..aaj aapne kar hi diya...wow maza aagaya..
thnxxxxxxx jiiiiiii


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ParwaaZ

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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2010, 06:32:17 PM »

Jee Kasak Jee yeh hui naa baat... abhi ekdum mastam lag raha hai jee and thought's bhi khoob rang rahe hai....... Keep it up...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 30, 2010, 05:26:24 PM

And this one is also very nice....

Aise hi likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez......


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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2010, 06:48:45 PM »

thnx ji....


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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 12:45:33 AM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... aapke is post ke aage har jawaab kamzor hai... koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki... aap jaisa achcha to nahi likh paaye bas kuch kuch yunhi likh diya....!!!

tera har dard hamaare liye dawa ka kaam karti hai,
ab hamaare paas dard chhupaane ka bahaana na raha,

jis chhat ke niche milti thi humse wo chhat na rahi,
ab har mehfil hamaari hai koi ek thikaana na raha,

chaaha tha chalna safar me zindagi ke haath thaame tera,
koi pyaar karne waalon ko baksh de aisa zamaana na raha,

suna tha pyaar me suli chadd gaye they kai aashiq,
par ab jaan dene waala koi paagal deewaana na raha,

kabhi tumhaare aankhon me doobke jhoomte the nashe me hum,
ab madhosh karne ke liye tumhaare aankhon ka paimana na raha....


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2010, 12:51:20 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 30, 2010, 02:38:33 PM

Good one Anamika Ji


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FARAWAYNUTS

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Re: <>*Kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…*<>

«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2010, 03:32:26 PM »

pehli do lines......kyaa baat!!! kyaa baat !!!!


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