kya rakkha aise jine mein

by khayaal on June 01, 2012, 07:54:24 AM

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dard ki chubhan hai aaj fir sine main
ashko ka sailaab utar aaya hai fir palko mein
har ek naye moud par har pal wahi ghut ghut ke jina
kya rakkha hai aise jine mein...........


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2012, 07:56:24 AM »

acha hai


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2012, 08:56:46 AM »

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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2012, 10:12:19 AM »

khoob...


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2012, 01:48:22 PM »

bahut bahut khoob Khayaal ji....!!!

maut ko seene se lagaa loge to kya mil jaayega,
kya iss se tumhaare dil ka dard kam ho jaayega,
har raat ke baad subah hoti hai suna to hoga,
kuch waqt baad khushiyon ka sawera ho jaayega...


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2012, 07:49:17 AM »

maut ko seene se lagane ka arama to nhi tha
main apni hasti se yu bhi anjaan na tha
mana ke har raat ke baat subah hoti h ay dost
jane kyu wo raat itni lambi thi
jiske intzar mein aajtak bhi main soya na tha


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2012, 11:34:34 AM »

bahut bahut khoob jawaab diya hai aapne Khayaal ji....!!!

har kisi ke kismat me deepaawali jaldi nahi hoti,
kehhe hain uske ghar me der hai andher nahi hoti,
maanaa ghum ke baadal se aasmaan dhakaa hai saara,
khushiyaan aayengi, aane me zyaadaa der nahi hoti....


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2012, 03:23:11 PM »

palko k moti ko log aksar jugnu samjh lete hain
dene k liye jab logo pe aur kuch nahi hota to misaal hi diya karte hai
dena h mujhe kuch to ek baar us khuda se mila do
ya mera ujda gulista fir se khila do ............
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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2012, 03:31:11 PM »

bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khayal ji Usual Smile


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2012, 03:32:24 PM »

bahut achhi shayari likhte hai aap khyal ji


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Re: kya rakkha aise jine mein

«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2012, 04:17:39 PM »

Quote from: khayaal on June 01, 2012, 07:54:24 AM

dard ki chubhan hai aaj fir sine main
ashko ka sailaab utar aaya hai fir palko mein
har ek naye moud par har pal wahi ghut ghut ke jina
kya rakkha hai aise jine mein...........

bahut umda likha hai khayal ji