Kya samajh baithe

by thycreator on April 01, 2008, 05:37:13 PM
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thycreator
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Hello everyone,

Thanks for your response to my last post....n helping me in my revival...apke encouragement se likhne ka motivation milta hai....

Meri ek aur poem, ummeed hai apko pasand aayegi


Unn masoom nigahon ko hum na jaane kya samajh baithe,
Teri dilkash adaon ko hum wafa samajh baithe..

Badi hasrat se sajaya tha dil ka aashiyan humne,
Tujhe nafrat bhari dunai mein hum dua samajh baithe..

Bahut tha naaz humko apni iss paak muhabbat par,
Sabhi gumon se hum apne aap ko juda samajh baithe..

Na gumaan tha hame ye bas dillgai hai teri khatir,
Tujhko toh hum muhabbat ka ek khuda samajh baithe..

Liye baithe hain ab aansoo aur jahan ka dard seene mein,
Apni iss nadan si ghaflat ko pyar ka diya samajh baithe..

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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2008, 05:44:12 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Amit, ek ek line bahoot achi hai.. magar yah line dil ko chu gai..

Badi hasrat se sajaya tha dil ka aashiyan humne,
Tujhe nafrat bhari dunai mein hum dua samajh baithe..
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thycreator
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2008, 05:51:00 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja ji...........Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2008, 05:51:59 PM »
jo samjha humne aisa hua na tha
dard mila aisa dil aazarda tha
harsu ishq naapaid sa tha
kaatna ik ik lamha dushwaar sa tha
firaaq ka samaan haijaan sa tha
amn-o-sukoon dasht main khoya tha
visaal ki chaah main tarq kia sab kuchh tha
woh paikar-e-husn ayaan phir bhi na tha


(S Naami)
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thycreator
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2008, 06:38:26 AM »
jo samjha humne aisa hua na tha
dard mila aisa dil aazarda tha
harsu ishq naapaid sa tha
kaatna ik ik lamha dushwaar sa tha
firaaq ka samaan haijaan sa tha
amn-o-sukoon dasht main khoya tha
visaal ki chaah main tarq kia sab kuchh tha
woh paikar-e-husn ayaan phir bhi na tha


(S Naami)

Wooofffff..........urdu ki dictionary lekar baithna padega....apse ek request hai ki jahan urdo ke mushkil shabdon ka istemaal karein, wahan bracket mein uske meaning bhi likh de.....taki hum jaise gareeb shabdon wale bhi samajh saken...its just a request...Usual Smile
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zakhmola
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2008, 06:59:42 AM »
Jisney samjhaya
Wohh khud na samajh paaya
sachmein, bahut asaan hai
sabko samjhana...
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aarzoomehek
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2008, 09:16:36 AM »
hota hai kabhi kabhi aise hi..jispar dil-o-jaan se bharosa kar baithte hai wohi dil ko dukha jaate hai..pehli baar aapka kalaam parha...bohot acha laga..keep penning down ur thoughts..Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2008, 12:53:54 PM »
jo samjha humne aisa hua na tha
dard mila aisa dil aazarda (Very sad, agonized)tha
harsu (All around, har taraf) ishq naapaid(disappeared, obsolete) sa tha
kaatna ik ik lamha dushwaar(difficult) sa tha
firaaq(judai, bhichhadna) ka samaan haijaan(Joshila, excited) sa tha
amn-o-sukoon dasht(wild, desert, war like ground) main khoya tha
visaal(milan, meeting) ki chaah main tarq(shun, leaving, chhod dena) kia sab kuchh tha
woh paikar-e-husn(example of beauty) ayaan(visible, zaahir) phir bhi na tha


(S Naami)

Wooofffff..........urdu ki dictionary lekar baithna padega....apse ek request hai ki jahan urdo ke mushkil shabdon ka istemaal karein, wahan bracket mein uske meaning bhi likh de.....taki hum jaise gareeb shabdon wale bhi samajh saken...its just a request...Usual Smile

Sorry, mujhe lagaa normal words hain samajhe ja sakte hai.
main ma'ani likh deta hun waise.
Aage se khayal karunga, waise, dictionary ko dekhna padta hai to achha hota hai.
Shukriya
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2008, 03:13:13 PM »
jo samjha humne aisa hua na tha
dard mila aisa dil aazarda tha
harsu ishq naapaid sa tha
kaatna ik ik lamha dushwaar sa tha
firaaq ka samaan haijaan sa tha
amn-o-sukoon dasht main khoya tha
visaal ki chaah main tarq kia sab kuchh tha
woh paikar-e-husn ayaan phir bhi na tha


(S Naami)

Wooofffff..........urdu ki dictionary lekar baithna padega....apse ek request hai ki jahan urdo ke mushkil shabdon ka istemaal karein, wahan bracket mein uske meaning bhi likh de.....taki hum jaise gareeb shabdon wale bhi samajh saken...its just a request...Usual Smile

bilkul sahi kaha AMIT...

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thycreator
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2008, 04:35:33 PM »
hota hai kabhi kabhi aise hi..jispar dil-o-jaan se bharosa kar baithte hai wohi dil ko dukha jaate hai..pehli baar aapka kalaam parha...bohot acha laga..keep penning down ur thoughts..Usual Smile

Thanks a lot Aarzoo-mehek ji......kya naam hai....Aapne kuch likha nahi??
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thycreator
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2008, 04:39:04 PM »
jo samjha humne aisa hua na tha
dard mila aisa dil aazarda (Very sad, agonized)tha
harsu (All around, har taraf) ishq naapaid(disappeared, obsolete) sa tha
kaatna ik ik lamha dushwaar(difficult) sa tha
firaaq(judai, bhichhadna) ka samaan haijaan(Joshila, excited) sa tha
amn-o-sukoon dasht(wild, desert, war like ground) main khoya tha
visaal(milan, meeting) ki chaah main tarq(shun, leaving, chhod dena) kia sab kuchh tha
woh paikar-e-husn(example of beauty) ayaan(visible, zaahir) phir bhi na tha


(S Naami)

Wooofffff..........urdu ki dictionary lekar baithna padega....apse ek request hai ki jahan urdo ke mushkil shabdon ka istemaal karein, wahan bracket mein uske meaning bhi likh de.....taki hum jaise gareeb shabdon wale bhi samajh saken...its just a request...Usual Smile

Sorry, mujhe lagaa normal words hain samajhe ja sakte hai.
main ma'ani likh deta hun waise.
Aage se khayal karunga, waise, dictionary ko dekhna padta hai to achha hota hai.
Shukriya

Koi bat nahi, mujhe khushi iss bat ki hai ki apne meri bat ko sahi spirit mein liya, yahan aane wale sabhi log urdu shabdon ke dhani nahi hain, issliye unki suvidha ke liye shayad yahi behtar hoga......

Abhi meaning likhne ke bad samajh mein aaya ki aap kya keh rahe hain....Usual Smile

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syednaami
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«Reply #11 on: April 02, 2008, 05:09:47 PM »
Bilkul Baja farmaya Amit sahib.
Waise maine Urdu ke liye ek thread shuroo kia hai, agar aap uss main hissa lainge to khushi hogi.
Urdu Talaffuz Aasan Ke naam se.
Buhat Meherbaani
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2008, 05:51:54 AM »
syednaami sahab Shukriyaa^h aapne lafoN ko samjhaane ka bheeRha uthhaya hai....agarche kabhi kabhi toh bahoot hi Koft hoti hai..jab kisi Achhe Ashar ka talaffuz na samajh maiN aaye toh...Hum dil se aapke mamnoon haiN....our aapne urdu ke liye jo naya silsila Shuru kiya hai hum uske liye dil se aapke mashkoor haiN...our umeed hai hamare ilm maiN us se kaafi izafa hoga.....Shukriyaa^h.............Harash
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2008, 06:02:09 AM »
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Unn masoom nigahon ko hum na jaane kya samajh baithe,
Teri dilkash adaon ko hum wafa samajh baithe..

Badi hasrat se sajaya tha dil ka aashiyan humne,
Tujhe nafrat bhari dunai mein hum dua samajh baithe..

Bahut tha naaz humko apni iss paak muhabbat par,
Sabhi gumon se hum apne aap ko juda samajh baithe..

Na gumaan tha hame ye bas dillgai hai teri khatir,
Tujhko toh hum muhabbat ka ek khuda samajh baithe..

Liye baithe hain ab aansoo aur jahan ka dard seene mein,
Apni iss nadan si ghaflat ko pyar ka diya samajh baithe..


Amit ji...chalo aaj hume aapka naam bhi maloom hua... happy3..Achha laga....aapki rachna hamne padi achhi lagi....jahaaN tak sammajhne ki baat hai amit ji..insaan bahoot jagah daga kha jata hai dost....ZindagiyaaN barbaad hote dekhi haiN...bada hi na-muraad Lafz hai samajh baithhna....bahoot hi khoob likha hai dost..

Ummid-e-wafa maiN deta raha ImtihaaN koi
Sizde woh kerte rahe loot.ta raha jahaN koi

KarmoN ke haiN khel mere humdum mere sahil
Khuda kahiN deta raha Gut.ta raha jahaN koi

Harash
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syednaami
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2008, 12:49:36 PM »
syednaami sahab Shukriyaa^h aapne lafoN ko samjhaane ka bheeRha uthhaya hai....agarche kabhi kabhi toh bahoot hi Koft hoti hai..jab kisi Achhe Ashar ka talaffuz na samajh maiN aaye toh...Hum dil se aapke mamnoon haiN....our aapne urdu ke liye jo naya silsila Shuru kiya hai hum uske liye dil se aapke mashkoor haiN...our umeed hai hamare ilm maiN us se kaafi izafa hoga.....Shukriyaa^h.............Harash

Aap ka tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun, jo iss khaaksaar ki adna koshish ko saraaha gaya. Yeh sab kuchh aap karamfarmaon ke baahimi ta'aawun ke baghair mumkin na ho paayega, arz bas yeh hai ki aap buzrig log bhi hum thoda sa apne wasee ilm se mustafeed karenge.

Faqat Syed Naami
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