Kya the woh humare...

by Ravi_Dave on May 07, 2007, 09:48:11 PM
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Zaalim woh mulaqaati the humare,
Shabd shaayad jazbaati the humare,

Chasm-e-gosh ko kaha dosh dete phire,
Har harkat wafa-e-takht-e-aheldaagi the humare,

Shikhast khaayi hain humne dil lagate lagate,
Ek baar bhi lek aanskh naa bhaari the humare,

'Ravi' jalta raha din-ba-din aur raat bhur,
Gubaar hi shaayad ghum-khaari the humare,

Woh aisa bhi nahi ke badnaam ho sake,
khuu-e-qatra ke hisaab-daari the humare,

Hum jurm par jurm karte jaate the,
Woh khatta pe khatta jooth mein dafnaaya jaate the,
Jaise ke pardadaari the humare,

Farmaaye kya husn-e-haaya ki naadan galtiyaan,
Jo bhi the woh, par saaqi the humare,

Beet gayi zaraa zaraa kar ke be-ikhtiyaar si zindagi,
Paa kabr mein gaard (buried) diya, phir bhi wohi zindagaani the humare!
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2007, 06:57:19 PM »
Nice !!
beautifully drafted Usual Smile !!
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2007, 01:59:54 PM »
Bohot khoob Ravi !!
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2007, 04:15:08 AM »
Ravi .. its amazing... bahoot hi khoob farmaya.. 1st time  pada hai tumhe .. par umeed rahegi.. ki har baar padu...

keep writing...
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2007, 12:51:32 PM »
Shukriya Ricky, Talat and Deepika!

Ji meri bhi umeed hain ke aap pade aur mujhe aise hi daad milti rahe!
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2007, 05:24:27 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB RAVI..
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