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<>*Kya unhe bhi hum yaad aate rahe….?*<>

Yaadon k saaye hume raaton me sote jagaate rahe
Adhure khwabon ki tabeer khwabon me hi hum sajate rahe

Unki mahobbat ko bana kar hum apna khuda
Unke kadmon me hi apne sir ko hum jhukate rahe

Hue badnaam aur kuch unki nazar se gire bhi hum
Lekin fir bhi dil me bas unki hi tasveer hum sajate rahe

Koi dekh na le hamare dil k zakhmon ko aankhon me kahin
Iss dar se khudko ek band kamre me hi hum chhupate rahe

Apne gum ki numaish to kar sakte the hum gairon me lekin
Bhulkar har dard apna gairon k dard me kaam hum aate rahe

Unse kehne ki chaah me k mahoobaat hai hume unse
Unke saamne jate aur khud ko himmat hum dilate rahe

Likhte rahe apne dard, apni kahani hum sheron me
Aur unhe khud hi akele me khudko hum sunate rahe

Har raat ye *KasaK* uthti rahi dil me mere
Jis tarah mujhe yaad aate hain wo
Kya unhe bhi waise hi yaad hum aate rahe….?


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Re: <>*Kya unhe bhi hum yaad aate rahe….?*<>

«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 07:04:43 PM »

Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Wah Aap to kafi kareeb aa gayi achchi kalam kahnne ke...
Aapki puri kalaam achchi rahi....
achchi koshish per daad... Kabool kijiye...

jee aapki first line ke kafiye meiN gadbad hai.. jaagte nahi hoga wahaaN " Jagaate aayeNga... per jagate use karne ke liye aapko sentance meiN changing karni hogi...

Kuch misra aisa ho jayenga...
Unki yaadoN ko hum raatoN ko jagaate rahe..
Adhure khawaaboN ki tabeere sajaate rahe...

Hope aap ko koi bura nahi laga ho...
Koshish jari rakhiye....

Likhati rahiye...
Khush rahiye.....


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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 07:11:40 PM »

shukriya parwaz ji....aapki iss tip k liye...

aapne itni achchi kahi ise iske liye bht bht dhanyawadd.....


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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 09:37:07 PM »

wah ji wah kya kehne aapke... bahut pyaari peshkash hai aapki... bahut khoob likha hai aapne ....!!!

kuch afsaane shabdon se nahi, khamoshi se bayaan ho jaate hain,
zubaan khaamosh rehti hai par nigaahon se bayaan ho jaate hain,

tujhko shaayad khabar nahi ki tere khwaabon me chupke se aate hain,
raat ko jab tu soti hai hum hawa ban tere gaalon ko sehlaate hain,

julfon se tere khelte hain hum, kabhi unme hi hum chhup jaate hain,
teri gulabi hothon ki taazgi ko apne hothon ka ras hum pilaate hain,

mehsoos to tu bhi karti hogi mujhe raat ko apni baahon me,
khwaabon me bhi rakhti hogi tu mujhko apni chaahon me,

lab hamaare chaahe kuch na kahen par dil ki dhadkan kehti hai,
hum har pal chahen chup hi rahen par dil me tu hamaare rehti hai,

yaadon me tujhe hum rakhte nahi hain, hum dhadkan banaake rakhte hain,
teri pyaari ek tasveer ko har lamha hum seene se lagaake rakhte hain,

chaahe humse tu kuch bhi na kahe, par hum aaj ye sach tujhe kehte hain,
bas tujhse hi humko mohabbat hai aur tujhe hi hum khuda kehte hain....


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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2010, 06:16:15 PM »

waahhhhhhhhhhh........klaskar ji......
kya tareef karun aapki is reply ki......mast hai sachchiiiiiiiii

bht pyara likha hai dil se ekdum...


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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2010, 06:27:53 PM »

thank you so much hai ji... par mujhe pata nahi kyun khaas achchi nahi lagi... isko likhne ke baad main soch raha tha meri har poem me aise hi kuch lines rehte hain... ab kuch naya try karna padega.... pata nahi kya likhunga ... kuch alag ... kuch hat ke.... ye aapka badappan hai ki kuch bhi likhun aap pasand kar lete hain....

thanks hai ji dher saaraa......!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 23, 2010, 06:16:15 PM

waahhhhhhhhhhh........klaskar ji......
kya tareef karun aapki is reply ki......mast hai sachchiiiiiiiii

bht pyara likha hai dil se ekdum...


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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2010, 06:30:41 PM »

bahut khoob kasak ji bahut hi umda likha hai apne bahut dard hai apki lekhi mein..dil ko chhu ggyi aur khaas kar k ye do lines tou mujhe dil k bahut h kareeb lagi...

Apne gum ki numaish to kar sakte the hum bhi lekin
Bhulkar har dard apna gairon k dard me hum kaam aate rahe...

kapil ji apne bhi bahut khoob likha hai....


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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2010, 06:45:52 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 23, 2010, 06:27:53 PM

har likhne wale k kuch spl lines hote hain aur ek thought hamesha har poem me hota hai..wahi aapke sath hai...
par ye achhci bat hai k aap kuch naya try karne ki soch rahe hain hain....
hum wait karenge aapki us new style ka......


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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2010, 06:46:46 PM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 23, 2010, 06:30:41 PM

thnx geet ji..aapne ise itna pasand kiya......
aur ye lines mujhe bhi bhht achhci lagi....


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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2010, 07:14:20 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 22, 2010, 04:22:39 PM

<>*Kya unhe bhi hum yaad aate rahe….?*<>

Yaadon k daaman me hum sote jaagte rahe
Kuch adhure khwabon ki taabeer khwabon me hi sajate rahe

Unki mahobbat ko banakar apna khuda
Hum unke kadmon me hi apne sir ko jhukate rahe

Hue badnaam kuch unki nazar se gire bhi hum
Lekin fir bhi dil me bas unki hi tasveer hum sajate rahe

Koi dekh na le hamare dil k zakhmon ko kahin
Iss dar se khudko ek band kamre me hi hum chhupate rahe

Apne gum ki numaish to kar sakte the hum bhi lekin
Bhulkar har dard apna gairon k dard me hum kaam aate rahe

Unse kehne ki chaah me k mahoobaat hai hume tumse
Unke saamne jate aur khud ko himmat dilate rahe

Likhte rahe apne dard apni kahani hum sheron me
Aur unhe khud hi akele me khudko sunate rahe

Har raat ye *KasaK* uthti rahi dil me mere
Jis tarah mujhe yaad aate hain wo
Kya unhe bhi hum yaad aate rahe….?

Bahut khoob Anu Ji


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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2010, 07:15:56 PM »


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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2010, 02:07:08 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji....!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 23, 2010, 06:30:41 PM


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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2010, 05:56:52 AM »

yaadein to wohi hoti hai jo dil ko sukun de jati hai,
inhi kuchh yaadoon ke sahare ham bas jiye jate hai..

milana unse aab hamari kishmat me nahi hai,
bas ek unki yaadein hi to reh gayi hai jo hame marne nahi deti hai..


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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2010, 10:55:41 AM »

jald hi aapko wo naya roop dekhne ko milega....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 23, 2010, 06:45:52 PM


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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2011, 09:58:01 AM »

thnx rancho ji for such beautiful lines..par ho kahan aajakl aap nazar nahin ate........missing u re


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