kyo.N uss kee kaMee see rehTee hAy,.........

by laaiba on December 22, 2012, 11:11:16 AM
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baa.t hoNton pe ruukee rehTee hAy,
muhaBat dil mein chuPee rehTee hAy,

sho.r  uuthhTa  hai  dil mein leiKin,
chaa.r soo khaMshee bhee rehTee hAy,...

naa .m jis kaa  li khaa hai saaNson par,
kyo.N  us kee  kaMee see rehTee hAy,..
 
khya.l  uss kaa to jub bhi aaTaa haii ,
dil pe chaaYee be khuuDee rehTee hy,..

zik.r uss kaa,kA hin chhiDaa ho toh,...
dei r  tak   Lab pe  haNsee rehTee hAy,..

paa.s voh jab bhi hou te hain meiiRee,..
zinDagee zinDagee see rehTee hAy,..

,,laaiba ali,,
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aqsh
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2012, 11:39:10 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful laaiba jee
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2012, 11:43:26 AM »
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Wow sister aapne bahut jabardast likhaa hai. Last ke 3 shero ne to hamaara dil jeet liyaa. Bahut bahut mubaarak ho
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2012, 11:53:26 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on December 22, 2012, 11:11:16 AM
baa.t hoNton pe ruukee rehTee hAy,
muhaBat dil mein chuPee rehTee hAy,

sho.r  uuthhTa  hai  dil mein leiKin,
chaa.r soo khaMshee bhee rehTee hAy,...  Applause Applause Applause

naa .m jis kaa  li khaa hai saaNson par,
kyo.N  us kee  kaMee see rehTee hAy,..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 
khya.l  uss kaa to jub bhi aaTaa haii ,
dil pe chaaYee be khuuDee rehTee hy,..  Applause Applause

zik.r uss kaa,kA hin chhiDaa ho toh,...
dei r  tak   Lab pe  haNsee rehTee hAy,..  Applause Applause Applause Applause

paa.s voh jab bhi hou te hain meiiRee,..
zinDagee zinDagee see rehTee hAy,..  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

,,laaiba ali,,
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
behatreen peshkash.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2012, 11:55:07 AM »
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... bade
hi dilkash O umdaa ahsaas O khayaal aur gazab ki rawaani
rahi kalaam meiN... Usual Smile


Is khoobsurat gazal par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2012, 05:14:59 PM »
Bahot achi creation hai Laaiba ji. Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2012, 07:07:16 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Laaiba ji... bahut khoobsurat rachnaa....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2012, 12:53:24 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on December 22, 2012, 11:39:10 AM
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beautiful laaiba jee
bohat shukria,......
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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2012, 12:55:26 PM »
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 22, 2012, 11:43:26 AM
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Wow sister aapne bahut jabardast likhaa hai. Last ke 3 shero ne to hamaara dil jeet liyaa. Bahut bahut mubaarak ho
bohat shukria bhai aapkaa,.................
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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2012, 12:56:05 PM »
Quote from: mkv on December 22, 2012, 11:53:26 AM
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
behatreen peshkash.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
shukria mkv ji ,................
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2012, 12:57:33 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 22, 2012, 11:55:07 AM
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... bade
hi dilkash O umdaa ahsaas O khayaal aur gazab ki rawaani
rahi kalaam meiN... Usual Smile


Is khoobsurat gazal par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
bohat bohat shukria parwaz ji aapkaa,..............
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«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2012, 12:57:55 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on December 22, 2012, 11:11:16 AM
baa.t hoNton pe ruukee rehTee hAy,
muhaBat dil mein chuPee rehTee hAy,

sho.r  uuthhTa  hai  dil mein leiKin,
chaa.r soo khaMshee bhee rehTee hAy,...

naa .m jis kaa  li khaa hai saaNson par,
kyo.N  us kee  kaMee see rehTee hAy,..
 
khya.l  uss kaa to jub bhi aaTaa haii ,
dil pe chaaYee be khuuDee rehTee hy,..

zik.r uss kaa,kA hin chhiDaa ho toh,...
dei r  tak   Lab pe  haNsee rehTee hAy,..

paa.s voh jab bhi hou te hain meiiRee,..
zinDagee zinDagee see rehTee hAy,..

,,laaiba ali,,


Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!
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«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2012, 09:25:33 AM »
Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on December 22, 2012, 05:14:59 PM
Bahot achi creation hai Laaiba ji. Daad pesh hai.
bohat shukria riaz aashna ji,..............
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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2012, 09:26:14 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 22, 2012, 07:07:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Laaiba ji... bahut khoobsurat rachnaa....!!!
shukria hriday aapkaa,.........
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«Reply #14 on: December 25, 2012, 09:26:55 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 24, 2012, 12:57:55 PM

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!
bohat bohat shukria khwaish ji aapkaa,.........
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