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Mein Aankhon Ko Padh Leta Hoon
Jazbato Ko Samjh Leta Hoon
Dil Mein Kya Chhupa Hai Sabke
Mein Isharo Mein Samjh Leta Hoon...
Kyu Mein Kru Kisi Ko Pareshan Apni Wajah Se..
Jo Na Samjhe Mujhe Apna, Kyu Unhe Apna Samjh Leta Hoon..
Yahi Hai Meri Zindagi Ki Abhilasha
Khush Rho Aap Sada Bus
Yahi Khuda Se Guzarish Kar Leta Hoon.. |
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2011, 05:46:45 PM » |
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rishi dear....
bahot mastwali haqiqat btaya aapne.
aapki bholepan aur saadgi se zazbat bayan karne ki ada hume behad pasand hai.
shayd kuch hi der pahle aapne ye cqteate ki hai.
daad he ji.
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2011, 06:05:36 PM » |
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rishi dear....
bahot mastwali haqiqat btaya aapne.
aapki bholepan aur saadgi se zazbat bayan karne ki ada hume behad pasand hai.
shayd kuch hi der pahle aapne ye cqteate ki hai.
daad he ji.
Shukriya Nirala Bhai Aapke Comment Se Mujhe Apna Pan Aur Likhne Ki Himmat Milti Hai Bus Yuhi Aap Mera Humesha Sath Dete Rhna Bhai Haan Bhai Meine THodi Der Pahle Hi Facebook Pe Apne Ek Frnd Ko Msg Kiya THa |
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2011, 06:22:36 PM » |
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good poem Rishi ji.....
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2011, 06:34:34 PM » |
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good poem Rishi ji.....
Shukriya Anaam Bhai |
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2011, 06:40:55 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Rishi Ji...
Shad O Aabad Rahiye...
~Shihab~
Shukriya Shihab Bhai |
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2011, 06:54:14 PM » |
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rishi.........bht sidhe saral shabdon me apni baat kehna koi tumse sikhe........bht hi pyara likha hai...aur kyun wo bhi pata hai....
dil ko chhu gaye tumhare ye shabd ....yunhi dil se likhte raho ..aur sabko yunhi pyaar bantte raho
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2011, 06:57:52 PM » |
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rishi.........bht sidhe saral shabdon me apni baat kehna koi tumse sikhe........bht hi pyara likha hai...aur kyun wo bhi pata hai....
dil ko chhu gaye tumhare ye shabd ....yunhi dil se likhte raho ..aur sabko yunhi pyaar bantte raho
Bahut bahut shukriya Anamika JI.. Mein Aisa Hi Hoon Per Na Jane Log Mujhse Kyu Khafa Ho Jate Hai.. Mein Kabhi Kisi Ke Liye Galat Nahi Sochta Per Kyu Log Mujhse Nafrat Krte Hain.. But Leave It... Mujhe Koi Farq Nahi Padta Isliye Meine Ye Sab Likh Diya.. Once Again Hausla Afjai Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya |
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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2011, 07:07:28 PM » |
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tujhe wahi milega dost jiske tum haqqdaar ho
na karna wo kaam jiska koi aur talabgaar ho
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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2011, 07:09:45 PM » |
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tujhe wahi milega dost jiske tum haqqdaar ho
na karna wo kaam jiska koi aur talabgaar ho
Nirala Ji Bahut Khub Per Ek baat Kahu Bhai Mein Kisi Pe Haq Nahi Jatata Bus Sabko Apna Samjh Beithta Hu Bus Yahi Bhool Kar Leta Hoon Kaun Apna Hai Kaun Beigana yahi Pehchan Nahi Pata Bhai |
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«Reply #10 on: March 25, 2011, 07:14:54 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2011, 07:18:27 PM » |
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Bahut khoob ehsaas likhe hai .. rishi Ji !! dil ki gehraai se nikle hue ... accha laga .. apne se shabdoN ko padhkar ...
dil se daad hazir hai ... 
aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... ! Bahut Bahut Shukriya Naresh Ji.. Aap Bus Yuhi Mera Saath Dete Rhna Mein Yuhi Aata Rhunga Promise Naresh Ji Accha Lagta Hai Jab Aapka Comment Milta Hai To Thnx Once Again |
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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2011, 07:21:10 PM » |
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ye tumhari achai h
ise kabi mat chorna infact aap chor hi nhi skte.
aap shayd jante nhi ki kuch log luttne ke liye bnte hain.
arre janab meri soch aisi he ki koi mujhe dukh dekar khus h to me ye soch ke khus ho jata hu k uske chehre ki khusi ka karan mai hu.
har chij me khusi chipi hai chotu...
dhoond lo mil jayegi bot aasan h
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«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2011, 07:27:07 PM » |
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ye tumhari achai h
ise kabi mat chorna infact aap chor hi nhi skte.
aap shayd jante nhi ki kuch log luttne ke liye bnte hain.
arre janab meri soch aisi he ki koi mujhe dukh dekar khus h to me ye soch ke khus ho jata hu k uske chehre ki khusi ka karan mai hu.
har chij me khusi chipi hai chotu...
dhoond lo mil jayegi bot aasan h
Mein Bhi Yahi Sochta Hoon Bhai... Aur Sabki Khushi Ke Chhkar mein khud ki hassi bhul jata hu bus |
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«Reply #14 on: March 25, 2011, 07:40:47 PM » |
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sabko apna maano ye bot achi baat hai...
lekin unn sab se bhi apnapan ki ummeed lagao ye achi baat nhi hai.
ummed tutne par dukh hota h. khud k siwa kisi par aas nai lagane ka. aur jo khud khus nai rahoge to dusro ko khus kaise karoge babu.
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