Kyun Chalna Hi Hai Un Raahon Main.....!!

by Talat on July 20, 2009, 05:51:14 PM
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Shayad ek muddat ke baad Shayri-e-Dard main kuch likha hai........
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2009, 05:58:09 PM »
wah wah wah Talat Ji.. wah, bahut hi khoob , wah ...


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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2009, 05:59:39 PM »
bahut umda... Both Thumbs Up
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2009, 06:12:01 PM »
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!!

Bahut Dard Hai iss Nazm Mein..Har Lafz Dil Ko Chuu Sa Gaya..

Excellent!!! Isse Kehte Hai" Poetry at It's Best!!!

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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2009, 06:19:45 PM »
You just raised the bar to a whole new level wav
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2009, 06:23:19 PM »
Talat!!! Aapki Itni kitni Khoobsurat nazm Ko padhne Ke Baad,Ek Koshish Main Bhi Karna Chaunga..Umeed Karta Hoon Aapko aur sabko Pasand Aaye...

Ab Shaamil Hai Hum Bhi Unn Deewano Mein,
Jo Mehfil Ko sajaate Chale gaye, Kuch Anjaano Mein....

Aap Qaid Hi Kar Lete Humein To Dil Ko Sukoon Mil Jaata!!!
Hum Bhi Keh Dete, Ke Haan,Shaamil Hai Hum Bhi Tere Gulaamo Mein...

Kyon Waqt Ko Yuh Barbaad Kiye Jaate Hai Hum!!!
Kya Rakha Hai Dil Ke Inn Armaano Mein...

Kabhi Humesha Kareeb Rehne Wale Bhi Ajnabi Ban Jaate Hai!!!!
Sochta Hoon, Aakhir Kyon Nahi Hoon Main Shaamil, Tere Inn Mehmaano Mein...

"Khwaish" To Bas Ek Pathar Ki Tarah Hai!!!!!
Kaaash!!! Hum Bhi Shaamil Hote Duniya Ke Insaano Mein....
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2009, 09:58:31 PM »
Wah wah Celmira ji and Khwaish ji,mindblwing.bahut khoobsurt aur kitna dard hai aap dono ke sher mein.excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2009, 05:29:39 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Bahut Umda Talat Dear, Bahut hi jajbaati alfaaz chune aapne..Wah Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Aur Khwaish Ji kya kahe aapse aap to har dost ko apne lafzo ka saath dete hai, kya khoob reply diya aapne bahut aacha laga pad ke .. Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2009, 11:05:05 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 20, 2009, 05:51:14 PM

Shayad ek muddat ke baad Shayri-e-Dard main kuch likha hai........


kya baat hai celmira ji.....

batak gayi thee aise raahon main,
gum ke siva kuch na dekha in nighaon ne.

sharminda kar diya ,is kader dil ko mere,
ki apni hi nazron se girgaye hum.

jante hai ki ho jaaye gey barbaad hum,
fir bhi chal padte hai ,in raahon main.

dil yeh bhi kaheta hai,
zakham hi zakham mitle ho jahan,
fir kyu chalna hai un raahon main.


khwaish ji.. ..aapne bhi bhut badiya likha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2009, 12:00:43 PM »
BHUT KHOOB CELMIRA JI Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2009, 05:39:11 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 20, 2009, 05:51:14 PM

Shayad ek muddat ke baad Shayri-e-Dard main kuch likha hai........




waah waah kya baat hai hamesha ki hi tarhaa.n alfaazo.n ka jaadu bhut khoobsurat paishkash talat daad hazir hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2009, 07:20:51 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 20, 2009, 05:58:09 PM
wah wah wah Talat Ji.. wah, bahut hi khoob , wah ...


Jasbir Singh

Tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka Jasbir Ji...Thanks so much.
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2009, 08:00:13 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 20, 2009, 05:59:39 PM
bahut umda... Both Thumbs Up

Thanks so much Broken Ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2009, 08:35:14 PM »
bahut khoob celmira ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2009, 11:28:55 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on July 20, 2009, 06:12:01 PM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!!

Bahut Dard Hai iss Nazm Mein..Har Lafz Dil Ko Chuu Sa Gaya..

Excellent!!! Isse Kehte Hai" Poetry at It's Best!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Khwaish Dost.....Aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi....Bohot boohot shukriya Dost iss khoobsurat taaref ka.  icon_flower
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