Kyun Chalna Hi Hai Un Raahon Main.....!!

by Talat on July 20, 2009, 05:51:14 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 23, 2009, 11:56:39 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on July 21, 2009, 08:35:14 PM
bahut khoob celmira ji Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Sheba Ji
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«Reply #31 on: July 23, 2009, 11:57:22 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on July 22, 2009, 02:17:29 PM
Wow Di.. Its really Good .. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne.. bahoot Khoob!

Thanks so much Divs Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: July 23, 2009, 12:06:06 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on July 22, 2009, 05:02:05 PM
As usual very very very beautiful...

Applause

Thanks so much Sweetie
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«Reply #33 on: July 23, 2009, 12:06:40 PM »
Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 05:25:00 PM
Bahut bahut khoob dear Talat  Thumbs UP

Thanks so much my dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: July 23, 2009, 12:07:35 PM »
Quote from: HumTum on July 22, 2009, 02:18:46 PM
waah waah  Celmira Ji ... kya baat hai .. Aaseey shamil huye hai GunehgaroN mein.. .... bahut khoob....Daad hazir hai.




Palko pe ashk tham gaye is tarhaa
Jaise musafiroN ke iraadey badal gaye

Dard bhi reh reh ke lauteN hai is tarhaa
Jab se haalat ke takaazey badal gaye

Har ek khushi bus cheen gayi hum se
Jab se apnoN ke sahaareN badal gaye


HumTum




Bohot bohot Shukriya...aur aapne bhi bohot khoob likha hai Hum Tum

Aisa To Nahin Ki Ghum Bohot Hain
Haan, Ye Aankhain Nam Bohot Hain

Dil Ke Naasoor Ka Sabab Na Poocho
Apno Ke Hum Par Karam Bohot Hain

Kabhi Wafa Bhi Wo Pehchanenge
Dil Ko Aise Bharam Bohot Hain
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«Reply #35 on: July 23, 2009, 07:03:20 PM »
Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Talat di...Applause Applause

Khwahish jee aapne toh chaar chand laga diye...MashAllah behad dil choo ne wale alfaaz likhe hai...Applause Applause

Bahaut khoob Hum Tum jee aur Cara jee...Applause
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«Reply #36 on: July 24, 2009, 03:05:07 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shallyji,Madhuji,Caraji,Kaashji...

Thankyou Soo Much Roja & Rahim....

Aap Sab Ne Waqt Nikala Aur Iss Kalam ko Padha,Teh dil se Shukriya Aap Sab Ka.. notworthy
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«Reply #37 on: July 24, 2009, 03:06:46 AM »
Bahut Bhaut khoob HumTum Ji Aur Cara Ji..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #38 on: July 24, 2009, 03:18:35 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 22, 2009, 04:49:35 PM
Bohot pasand aayi aap ki ye koshish Khwaish Dost..aur bohot khoob likha hai aapne, humesha ki tarah...Bohot Khoob Dost Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Koi Paas Rehne Waala Door Ho Jaata Hai
Khud Apna Saaya Bhi Kahin Kho Jaata Hai

Bikhra To Diye Hain Guzre Hue Lamhe Humne
Koi Chupke Se Maala Phir Ye Piro Jaata Hai

Dil Main Jab Bhi Uthti Hai Lehar Dard Ki,
Jaagte Hain Jab Saara Jag So Jaata Hai

Socha To Tha Ye Aankh Nam Na Hogi Kabhi,
Kuch To Hai Magar Jo Palken Bhigo Jata Hai

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!!!Aapko Yeh koshish pasand Aayi Jaankar,Bahut ACha Laga..

Aur Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jawaab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Paas Rehne Wale Bhi Aksar Door Ho Jaate Hai,
Rishte Tab Hi Tooth The Hai Jab Hum Magroor Ho Jaate Hai...

Koi Bhi Nahi Rukhta Yahan Kisi Ke Liye!!!
Kuch Waqt Guzarne Par Zindagi Ke Har Failse Humein Manzoor Ho Jaate Hai...

Dard Ki Inteha Sirf Dard Sehne Wale Hi Jaane!!!
Waqt Ki Kasauti Par, Har Khwaab Toot Kar Chakna-Choor Ho Jaate Hai....

Socha To Humne Bhi Hai Ke Ab Aankhon Ko Aur Nam Naa karnege "Khwaish"
Par Dard Itna Ubhar Aata Hai Ke Hum Majboor Ho Jaate Hai..
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«Reply #39 on: July 24, 2009, 09:21:30 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on July 23, 2009, 07:03:20 PM
Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Talat di...Applause Applause


Bohot shukriya Rahim aapko pasand aaya...Thank a lot..
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«Reply #40 on: July 24, 2009, 09:32:03 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2009, 03:18:35 AM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!!!Aapko Yeh koshish pasand Aayi Jaankar,Bahut ACha Laga..

Aur Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jawaab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Paas Rehne Wale Bhi Aksar Door Ho Jaate Hai,
Rishte Tab Hi Tooth The Hai Jab Hum Magroor Ho Jaate Hai...

Koi Bhi Nahi Rukhta Yahan Kisi Ke Liye!!!
Kuch Waqt Guzarne Par Zindagi Ke Har Failse Humein Manzoor Ho Jaate Hai...

Dard Ki Inteha Sirf Dard Sehne Wale Hi Jaane!!!
Waqt Ki Kasauti Par, Har Khwaab Toot Kar Chakna-Choor Ho Jaate Hai....

Socha To Humne Bhi Hai Ke Ab Aankhon Ko Aur Nam Naa karnege "Khwaish"
Par Dard Itna Ubhar Aata Hai Ke Hum Majboor Ho Jaate Hai..


Bohot Khoob Dost....Kitni gehri baat likh di aapne, "Rishte Tab Hi Tooth The Hai Jab Hum Magroor Ho Jaate Hai" ... Bohot Khoob Khwaish  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Rishton Main Khudgharzi Gar Aa Jaaye,
Wo Rishta Kaise Parvaan Charh Paaye

Dil Main Behta Ho Jo Aag ka Dariya,
Har Ehsaas Ko Wo Raakh Kar Jaaye

Yaqeen Dil Ka Phir Usse Uth Jaata Hai,
Dard Ko Samajh Kar Bhi Jo Dard De Jaaye

Ho Mubarak Unhe Mehfilon Ki Raunaq, Hum To
Apne Ghar Ke Andheron Main Hain Laut Aaye !!
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«Reply #41 on: July 24, 2009, 10:23:01 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Talat di aur Khwahish jee...Ek se barr kar ek peshkash...Likte rahiye yunhi... Applause
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«Reply #42 on: July 25, 2009, 05:09:44 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 20, 2009, 05:51:14 PM

Shayad ek muddat ke baad Shayri-e-Dard main kuch likha hai........


bahut achche do lya klhoob chali hai aapki kalam dard kii lehar kis kadar jhulsa gayi hai dil ko maloom deta hai
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«Reply #43 on: July 30, 2009, 08:21:29 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on July 24, 2009, 10:23:01 PM
Bahaut bahaut khoob Talat di aur Khwahish jee...Ek se barr kar ek peshkash...Likte rahiye yunhi... Applause

Thanks so much Rahim
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«Reply #44 on: August 03, 2009, 12:55:14 PM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on July 25, 2009, 05:09:44 AM
bahut achche do lya klhoob chali hai aapki kalam dard kii lehar kis kadar jhulsa gayi hai dil ko maloom deta hai

Thanks a lot Salil ..bohot bohot shukriya
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