*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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<>*kyun hai *<> Meri zindagi to teri amanat thi hi
Ye meri maut pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Meri muskurahut to tere naam thi hi
Mere aasuon pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Ye dhadkane to gaati thi har nazm teri
MerI kalam pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Main to likh chuki naam tere dil mera
Magar jism o jaan bhi tere naam kyun hai
Tere lafzon ki rangat kho chuki kab ki
Fr bhi *KasaK* yahan tera naam kyun hai ...!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2012, 06:08:25 PM » |
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<>*kyun hai *<> Meri zindagi to teri amanat thi hi
Ye meri maut pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Meri muskurahut to tere naam thi hi
Mere aasuon pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Ye dhadkane to gaati thi har nazm teri
MerI kalam pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Main to likh chuki naam tere dil mera
Magar jism o jaan bhi tere naam kyun hai
Tere lafzon ki rangat kho chuki kab ki
Fr bhi *KasaK* yahan tera naam kyun hai ...!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2012, 06:53:09 PM » |
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~Hriday~
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2012, 07:23:24 PM » |
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hmmmm chori chori chupke chupke..... massstt likhaa hai aapne..... ek dum massstttt... par saddy saddy kyun? pyaar pyaar kyun nahi? ?meri muskaan ko tere hothon pe sajaa ke
tere aaansuon ko main apne naam likh dun
aaye maut agar main badh jaaun aage aur
apni zindagi ko main tere naam likh dun
chheen loon geet dard ke tere hothon se
geet mohabbat ke main tere naam likh dun
ruk jaaye kisi pal teri saansen agar
apni dhadkano ko main tere naam likh dun
tere naam ke siwaa keemat nahi mere geeton ki
har ek geet apni main tere naam likh dun
likhaa thaa kabhi 'Kasak' naam is dil me maine
aaj fir ek baar 'Hriday' pe wo naam likh dun...
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2012, 12:43:41 AM » |
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bahut khoob  |
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 02:44:43 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 02:54:04 AM » |
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lovely creation
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 03:24:10 AM » |
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very nice
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 04:06:38 AM » |
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waah waah bahut shandar
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2012, 05:51:08 AM » |
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<>*kyun hai *<> Meri zindagi to teri amanat thi hi
Ye meri maut pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Meri muskurahut to tere naam thi hi
Mere aasuon pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Ye dhadkane to gaati thi har nazm teri
MerI kalam pe bhi tera naam kyun hai
Main to likh chuki naam tere dil mera
Magar jism o jaan bhi tere naam kyun hai
Tere lafzon ki rangat kho chuki kab ki
Fr bhi *KasaK* yahan tera naam kyun hai ...!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2012, 06:05:19 AM » |
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zabardast anamika ji ..  |
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2012, 09:10:47 AM » |
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bade mushkil sawal hain kasak ji,:) any way nice ,........
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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2012, 02:30:16 PM » |
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kya baat hai ana ju bahut hi umda hai....
Hriday sahab ne bhi kamal ker diya
chor ker tere shahar ko door aashiya banaya hai
phir bhi dil me tere milne ke armaan kyun hai
tumne hu bulaya tha mahfil me hume mateen
ab yaha se nikal jane ka farmaaan kyun hai
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2013, 01:04:28 PM » |
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thnx admin ji
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on eTI community..
