::Kyun mujhe dekh tumhari raah badal jaati hai::

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«Reply #15 on: July 17, 2005, 01:12:38 PM »
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wah wah nidhi bohot acha likha hai!!! creator ji aur tushar...gud gud guys!!!!!!!!!

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Thanx sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: July 17, 2005, 01:14:09 PM »
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"Chahe na kabhi mujhse pyaar karna,
 na kabhi ek pal ko bhi deedar karna,
 na kehna tum mujhse kabhi kuch,
 na mere har sawaal pe muh pherna,
 na kabhi mujhe apni muskaam dena,
 na kabhi mere dil ko chaen dena,
 tumhari khushi agar mere dard me hai,
 to har pal tum bas khush rehna,
 na main kabhi bhool sakungi tumhe,
 ye jaante ho tum achchi tarah,
 sab jaante ho tum,sab samajhte ho,
 phir kyun mujhe nahi apnaate ho,
 kya kami hai mujhme ik baar bata do,
 mere pyaar ko aise na thukraa do,
 bohat pyar karti hun main tumse,
 har dua me tujhe maanga hai rabse,
 jaante sab ho tum,kahoon to kya,
 kis baat pe ho tum mujhse khafa,
 ek baar mujhse kuch to kaho,
 ye khamoshiyan sahi nahi jaati hain,
 kya hai tumhaare dil me batao to mujhe,
 kyun mujhe dekh tumhari raah badal jaati hai."


wah Nidhs.............bahut achha likha............


Thank u Dolly Usual Smile .
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«Reply #17 on: July 17, 2005, 01:35:03 PM »
Bohot achcha likha hai Nidhi..... very nice Usual Smile and nice work Amit...n Tushar .. !!!!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 17, 2005, 01:53:48 PM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Nidhi..... very nice Usual Smile and nice work Amit...n Tushar .. !!!!!
thanx Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: July 17, 2005, 05:30:15 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Chahe na kabhi mujhse pyaar karna,
 na kabhi ek pal ko bhi deedar karna,
 na kehna tum mujhse kabhi kuch,
 na mere har sawaal pe muh pherna,
 na kabhi mujhe apni muskaam dena,
 na kabhi mere dil ko chaen dena,
 tumhari khushi agar mere dard me hai,
 to har pal tum bas khush rehna,
 na main kabhi bhool sakungi tumhe,
 ye jaante ho tum achchi tarah,
 sab jaante ho tum,sab samajhte ho,
 phir kyun mujhe nahi apnaate ho,
 kya kami hai mujhme ik baar bata do,
 mere pyaar ko aise na thukraa do,
 bohat pyar karti hun main tumse,
 har dua me tujhe maanga hai rabse,
 jaante sab ho tum,kahoon to kya,
 kis baat pe ho tum mujhse khafa,
 ek baar mujhse kuch to kaho,
 ye khamoshiyan sahi nahi jaati hain,
 kya hai tumhaare dil me batao to mujhe,
 kyun mujhe dekh tumhari raah badal jaati hai."



What a excellent work ...
Its simply the best ...
Sorry for late reply ...
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«Reply #20 on: July 17, 2005, 05:35:15 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Chahe na kabhi mujhse pyaar karna,
 na kabhi ek pal ko bhi deedar karna,
 na kehna tum mujhse kabhi kuch,
 na mere har sawaal pe muh pherna,
 na kabhi mujhe apni muskaam dena,
 na kabhi mere dil ko chaen dena,
 tumhari khushi agar mere dard me hai,
 to har pal tum bas khush rehna,
 na main kabhi bhool sakungi tumhe,
 ye jaante ho tum achchi tarah,
 sab jaante ho tum,sab samajhte ho,
 phir kyun mujhe nahi apnaate ho,
 kya kami hai mujhme ik baar bata do,
 mere pyaar ko aise na thukraa do,
 bohat pyar karti hun main tumse,
 har dua me tujhe maanga hai rabse,
 jaante sab ho tum,kahoon to kya,
 kis baat pe ho tum mujhse khafa,
 ek baar mujhse kuch to kaho,
 ye khamoshiyan sahi nahi jaati hain,
 kya hai tumhaare dil me batao to mujhe,
 kyun mujhe dekh tumhari raah badal jaati hai."



What a excellent work ...
Its simply the best ...
Sorry for late reply ...
Aaj hi post kiya hai,u r not late.

Thank u soo much Usual Smile for such encouraging words.
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«Reply #21 on: July 17, 2005, 05:37:49 PM »
Karni hai hasrate nakaam se jal jaate hai,
Hum chiraago ki tarah shaam se jal jaate hai,
Shama jis aag mein jalti hai,
Hum usi aag mein gumnaam se jal jaate hai,
Jab bhi aata hai tere naam ke saath mera naam,
Na jane kyu log mere naam se jal jaate hai ...
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2005, 08:42:08 AM »
"Hai judaa jo tere naam se mera naam,
  to duniya ise kabhi mitaa nahi sakti,
  jo dil me basi tehreerein hain........,
  unhe zindagi bhi jhuthla nahi sakti,
  tujhe chaha hai,tujhe chahaungi,
  ye baat teri aatma bhi chupa nahi sakti."
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«Reply #23 on: July 18, 2005, 08:53:32 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Chahe na kabhi mujhse pyaar karna,
 na kabhi ek pal ko bhi deedar karna,
 na kehna tum mujhse kabhi kuch,
 na mere har sawaal pe muh pherna,
 na kabhi mujhe apni muskaam dena,
 na kabhi mere dil ko chaen dena,
 tumhari khushi agar mere dard me hai,
 to har pal tum bas khush rehna,
 na main kabhi bhool sakungi tumhe,
 ye jaante ho tum achchi tarah,
 sab jaante ho tum,sab samajhte ho,
 phir kyun mujhe nahi apnaate ho,
 kya kami hai mujhme ik baar bata do,
 mere pyaar ko aise na thukraa do,
 bohat pyar karti hun main tumse,
 har dua me tujhe maanga hai rabse,
 jaante sab ho tum,kahoon to kya,
 kis baat pe ho tum mujhse khafa,
 ek baar mujhse kuch to kaho,
 ye khamoshiyan sahi nahi jaati hain,
 kya hai tumhaare dil me batao to mujhe,
 kyun mujhe dekh tumhari raah badal jaati hai."


waah waah nidhi ji .. bhoot khoob !!!

mujhe wo koi shaatir baazigar sa lagta hai
Dil ke haal batane mein thora dar sa lagta hai
bhikri pari hai wafao ki lashein harsuu
shamshan mujhe kyuun mere ghar sa lagta hai
meri aank se bah gaye kitne nayab gauhar
unke saamne kooh-i-noor bhi abtar sa lagta hai
unki yaad se dil aur rooh tarap uthti hai
har roz uske bin mujhe roz-e-mahshar sa lagta hai !!
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«Reply #24 on: July 18, 2005, 09:02:30 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Chahe na kabhi mujhse pyaar karna,
 na kabhi ek pal ko bhi deedar karna,
 na kehna tum mujhse kabhi kuch,
 na mere har sawaal pe muh pherna,
 na kabhi mujhe apni muskaam dena,
 na kabhi mere dil ko chaen dena,
 tumhari khushi agar mere dard me hai,
 to har pal tum bas khush rehna,
 na main kabhi bhool sakungi tumhe,
 ye jaante ho tum achchi tarah,
 sab jaante ho tum,sab samajhte ho,
 phir kyun mujhe nahi apnaate ho,
 kya kami hai mujhme ik baar bata do,
 mere pyaar ko aise na thukraa do,
 bohat pyar karti hun main tumse,
 har dua me tujhe maanga hai rabse,
 jaante sab ho tum,kahoon to kya,
 kis baat pe ho tum mujhse khafa,
 ek baar mujhse kuch to kaho,
 ye khamoshiyan sahi nahi jaati hain,
 kya hai tumhaare dil me batao to mujhe,
 kyun mujhe dekh tumhari raah badal jaati hai."


waah waah nidhi ji .. bhoot khoob !!!

mujhe wo koi shaatir baazigar sa lagta hai
Dil ke haal batane mein thora dar sa lagta hai
bhikri pari hai wafao ki lashein harsuu
shamshan mujhe kyuun mere ghar sa lagta hai
meri aank se bah gaye kitne nayab gauhar
unke saamne kooh-i-noor bhi abtar sa lagta hai
unki yaad se dil aur rooh tarap uthti hai
har roz uske bin mujhe roz-e-mahshar sa lagta hai !!
thanx humtum and very well said Usual Smile

"Wo khwab samajhta raha mujhe aur meri zindagi jal gayi,
 wo muskaan samajhta raha mujhe,aur main ansoo ban gayi,
 maine pyaar kiya usse,jaanta hai wo,phir kyun nasamajh banta hai,
 kaise samjhaun main isko,pyaar hota ek rishtaa hai."
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«Reply #25 on: July 18, 2005, 09:18:09 AM »
Shukriya Nidhi ji ...  kya khoob likha hai !!

fal-safey ishq mein pesh aaye savaalon kii tarah
ham pareshaan hi rahey apne khayaalon kii tarah
shiisha agar baithe rahe zikr-e-masiihaa lekar
aur ham toot gaye kaanch ke pyaalon kii tarah!!
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«Reply #26 on: July 18, 2005, 09:23:11 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Shukriya Nidhi ji ...  kya khoob likha hai !!

fal-safey ishq mein pesh aaye savaalon kii tarah
ham pareshaan hi rahey apne khayaalon kii tarah
shiisha agar baithe rahe zikr-e-masiihaa lekar
aur ham toot gaye kaanch ke pyaalon kii tarah!!
thanx humtum and again very nice.

"Pohanchaai usne dil ko mere thhes aise,
 kaanch ka pyaala haath se chodna ho jaise,
 dil-e-nadaan uska kahoon ya apna kahoon,
 sarhadon pe mulaaqaat karta hai wo aise."
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«Reply #27 on: July 18, 2005, 09:30:59 AM »
Shukriya Nidhi ji .... bhoot khoob likha hai !!


sametne hain mujhe zindagi bhar ke toote rishte
yeh mere paas do lamhon ka hi samaan kyun hai
woh chala gaya tha ya phir hum hi us-e chhod aaye
kya hua tha humein yaad bhi karna kyun hai !!
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«Reply #28 on: July 18, 2005, 09:38:09 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Shukriya Nidhi ji .... bhoot khoob likha hai !!


sametne hain mujhe zindagi bhar ke toote rishte
yeh mere paas do lamhon ka hi samaan kyun hai
woh chala gaya tha ya phir hum hi us-e chhod aaye
kya hua tha humein yaad bhi karna kyun hai !!
thanx humtum and again very nice.

"bhool sakenge na wo guzre zamane ham kabhi,
  intezaar thha,tere pyaar ka,hai wahi intezar aaj bhi,
  jo tu ek baar mujhe yaad kar lega is janam me,
  poori ho jaayegi meri ye zindagiiiii....."
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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2005, 09:43:55 AM »
kya baat hai Nidhi ji humtum ji .....and Creator ji very nice all of u........

sametne main rishton ko main bathati gai
Meri mahobaat meri umar ki tarah badhti gai
na jane kya khumaar tha uske sir pe
ki meri mahobaat uske dil se nikalti gai
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