Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun...

by brokenbyluv on March 18, 2010, 08:39:40 PM
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Kyun ye zamane wale zakhmo ko silne nhi dete,
kyun ye zamane wale labo ko khilne nhi dete,
iss zamane ne bhi kabhi chaht ki hogi kisi ki..
kyun ye zamane wale diwano ko milne nhi dete......


AKHIR KYUN... sad11 sad11
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2010, 09:43:22 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2010, 09:49:50 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2010, 03:01:54 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2010, 06:57:21 AM »
Good one Geet Ji

Kya jawaaab duun tere is kyun ka
Kyun aap bhi is jamane mein shaamil ho
Aur main bhi hoon isi jamane ka
Ab jawaab aap hi khud de dein is ka
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2010, 07:36:56 AM »
Bahut Khoob Geetji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jisse Chaaho usse Paalo,
Zindagi Itni Asaan Nahi..

Aisa Koi Shaks Mujhe Bhi Bata Do,
Jiske Dil Mein Baaki Koi Armaan Nahi..

Haan,Uss Shaks Ko paana Tab Hi mumkin Hai
Jab uska Saath Apne Naseeb mein Likha Ho,
Woh Naseeb mein Naa Likho Ho Agar "Geet",
To Naseeb Se Badhkar Insaan Ko Iss Duniya mein Kuch Haasil Nahi...

Mohabbat Ek Aisi kashti Hai Jo Tufaano Ko seh bhi Jaye To kya???
Kashtiyan Beech samundar Mein Doob Hi jaati Hai
Jab Paas Koi saahil Nahi...
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2010, 12:42:30 PM »
Bahaut acha sawal itni masoomiyat aur khubsoorati se puch lia apne Geet jee.. :Clap:

Bahaut khoob Rajesh jee aur Khwahish jee.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2010, 12:44:09 PM »
Wah wah BBL bahut achhi creation. Nice poem. Well done.
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2010, 01:31:54 PM »
Bohot khoob BBL ji...and very nice reply Rajesh Ji

Khwaish dost, aapne bohot khoobsurat jawab diya hai ....
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2010, 02:23:29 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 19, 2010, 12:42:30 PM
Bahaut acha sawal itni masoomiyat aur khubsoorati se puch lia apne Geet jee.. :Clap:

Bahaut khoob Rajesh jee aur Khwahish jee.. Applause Applause


Quote from: Celmira on March 19, 2010, 01:31:54 PM
Bohot khoob BBL ji...and very nice reply Rajesh Ji

Khwaish dost, aapne bohot khoobsurat jawab diya hai ....

Bahut bahut Shukriya Bhai rahim Aur Talat dost!!!

Aapne Padha AUr Pasand Farmaya,Teh Dil se Shukriya Aapka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 19, 2010, 02:49:34 PM »
Bahut accha swaal kiya bbl ji.... Applause Applause Applause

Rajesh ji aapne bhi khoob likha...... Applause Applause Applause

Khwaish ji bahut pyara jwaab diya aapne...... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 19, 2010, 03:07:13 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet nd Khwaish ji and Rajesh ji !

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !
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«Reply #12 on: March 19, 2010, 04:46:30 PM »
tahe dil se aapka shukriya celmira ji,riyaz ji.sophiji,s.b ji,rahiim ji,nikhar ji,rajesh ji n khwaish ji...rajesh ji aur khwaish ji bahut umda jawab diye hai apne......


Main kahan zamane se terra hath mang rahi hu,
main tou sukun ki ek saugat mang rahi hu,
kya itna bhi tu mujhe nhi de sakta merre ajnabi..
main tou sirrf khuabo mein terra sath mang rahi hu......
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2010, 05:31:45 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 18, 2010, 08:39:40 PM
Kyun ye zamane wale zakhmo ko silne nhi dete,
kyun ye zamane wale labo ko khilne nhi dete,
iss zamane ne bhi kabhi chaht ki hogi kisi ki..
kyun ye zamane wale diwano ko milne nhi dete......


AKHIR KYUN... sad11 sad11


oh oh oh.. bahut hi khoob, wah wah

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«Reply #14 on: March 19, 2010, 05:32:54 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 19, 2010, 07:36:56 AM
Bahut Khoob Geetji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jisse Chaaho usse Paalo,
Zindagi Itni Asaan Nahi..

Aisa Koi Shaks Mujhe Bhi Bata Do,
Jiske Dil Mein Baaki Koi Armaan Nahi..

Haan,Uss Shaks Ko paana Tab Hi mumkin Hai
Jab uska Saath Apne Naseeb mein Likha Ho,
Woh Naseeb mein Naa Likho Ho Agar "Geet",
To Naseeb Se Badhkar Insaan Ko Iss Duniya mein Kuch Haasil Nahi...

Mohabbat Ek Aisi kashti Hai Jo Tufaano Ko seh bhi Jaye To kya???
Kashtiyan Beech samundar Mein Doob Hi jaati Hai
Jab Paas Koi saahil Nahi...


wah khawish ji , bahut hi khoob jawaab dia aap ney


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