Lagta hai

by klaskar on April 24, 2010, 09:40:03 PM
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kal  tak   mera  dil  to bas  mera tha,
ab  uska  bhi  rukh teri  or lagta hai,

in  aankhon  me itni  baarish  hai aaj,
aur  dil me  baadal ghanghor lagta hai,

kal tak  bharosa tha  chahat pe humein,
ab to chahat bhi humein chor lagta hai,

kal   tak  sangeet  jeewan   tha  mera,
ab  to  ghazal   bhi  shor  lagta  hai,

meri  saanso  ka  bandhan  tujhse  tha,
ab  jaise  koi tuta hua  dor lagta hai,

tere  hone  se asaan  zindagi thi meri,
ab  to jeene  me  bhi  zor  lagta  hai,

maang lu khuda se tujhe main apne liye,
par  ab  to wo  bhi  teri or lagta hai....
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 09:44:18 PM »
Bahut khoob Kapil

Ab to zindagi se bhi darr lagta hai
Us ki bina sab kucch soona lagta hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 09:50:19 PM »
shukriya Rajesh ji... aapne bhi khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2010, 09:44:18 PM
Bahut khoob Kapil

Ab to zindagi se bhi darr lagta hai
Us ki bina sab kucch soona lagta hai
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 09:54:03 PM »
Shukriya Kapil
Aap hi logon ki prerna hai
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2010, 10:09:48 PM »
Wonderful creation Kapil ji,bahut khoob,beautiful lines by Rajesh ji.excellent
heart touching poem. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 10:24:44 PM »
Thanx Madhu Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 10:25:20 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji.... !!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 24, 2010, 10:09:48 PM
Wonderful creation Kapil ji,bahut khoob,beautiful lines by Rajesh ji.excellent
heart touching poem. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2010, 11:06:33 PM »
Wah WAh kya baat hai KApil ji ........
Gud Creation.......

Reaaly Lyk it !!!!!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 11:48:28 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 24, 2010, 09:40:03 PM
kal  tak   mera  dil  to bas  mera tha,
ab  uska  bhi  rukh teri  or lagta hai,

in  aankhon  me itni  baarish  hai aaj,
aur  dil me  baadal ghanghor lagta hai,

kal tak  bharosa tha  chahat pe humein,
ab to chahat bhi humein chor lagta hai,

kal   tak  sangeet  jeewan   tha  mera,
ab  to  ghazal   bhi  shor  lagta  hai,

meri  saanso  ka  bandhan  tujhse  tha,
ab  jaise  koi tuta hua  dor lagta hai,

tere  hone  se asaan  zindagi thi meri,
ab  to jeene  me  bhi  zor  lagta  hai,

maang lu khuda se tujhe main apne liye,
par  ab  to wo  bhi  teri or lagta hai....

kya likkha hai...!

maang lu khuda se tujhe main apne liye,
par wo bhi tujhe panne ki hasrat rakhta hai...!
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«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2010, 12:41:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji.... thanx a lot...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 24, 2010, 11:06:33 PM
Wah WAh kya baat hai KApil ji ........
Gud Creation.......

Reaaly Lyk it !!!!!!!!

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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2010, 12:42:47 AM »
Shuriya Chitra ji... aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat lines add kiye hain... Shukriya...!!!

Quote from: chitra on April 24, 2010, 11:48:28 PM
kya likkha hai...!

maang lu khuda se tujhe main apne liye,
par wo bhi tujhe panne ki hasrat rakhta hai...!
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2010, 06:24:14 AM »
Wah kya baat hai          Klaskar ji.....

Kal tak toh thi tu tamanaa meri
ab kisi aur ki tu tamanaa lagta hai
kya maangu khuda se tujhko
mujhko bahot dar lagta hai.........
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2010, 07:50:50 AM »
Bahut khoob Chitra ji,beautiful lines, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Cara ji aapne bhi kamaal ke likha, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2010, 10:20:22 AM »
shukriya cara ji ... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai....!!!!

Quote from: cara on April 25, 2010, 06:24:14 AM
Wah kya baat hai          Klaskar ji.....

Kal tak toh thi tu tamanaa meri
ab kisi aur ki tu tamanaa lagta hai
kya maangu khuda se tujhko
mujhko bahot dar lagta hai.........
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2010, 10:45:36 AM »
Quote from: cara on April 25, 2010, 06:24:14 AM
Wah kya baat hai          Klaskar ji.....

Kal tak toh thi tu tamanaa meri
ab kisi aur ki tu tamanaa lagta hai
kya maangu khuda se tujhko
mujhko bahot dar lagta hai.........


Good response Cara Ji
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