~*~ LAHOO SE LIKHI GAZAL ~*~

by _Vicky_ on April 10, 2006, 05:57:19 PM
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DARD PEE-PEEKAR JEE RAHA HOON MAIN,
          APNE HAATON ZAKHM SEE RAHA HOON MAIN...

AB TO BISTAR UTH-TE NAHI BANTA HAI,
          EK BOTAL SE GHAM PEE RAHA HOON MAIN...

MARNA CHAHA BHI, LOGON NE MARNE NA DIYA,
          ZINDA LAASH KO APNI DHO RAHA HOON MAIN.....

RONA CHAHA, SHARM SE RO BHI NA SAKA,
          RAAT TANHAAI ME ASHQ PEE RAHA HOON MAIN....

PADEGA JO BHI "AASHIQ", KASAM SE RO DEGA,
          APNI GAZAL LAHOO SE LIKH RAHA HOON MAIN.....

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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2006, 01:57:29 AM »
bahoot khoob Vicky Akela!!

dard ke sath jeena hai
ashaqo ko hi pina hai
mar kar bhi shayad chain na mile
her roj ek nai mout marna hai

ro laty hai tanhaai mai
sabke samne to bas jeena hai

kahegi ek din yah khamoshi bahoot kuch
apni sirf apni juban ko humne seena hai
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2006, 11:47:45 AM »
shukriya aur bahut khoob POOJA JI.........

Haal-e-dil yun unhen sunaya gaya, aankh hi to zuban banaya gaya,
zindgi ki udas raaton ko aap ki yaad se sajaya gaya.....

ishq ki wo bhi ek manzil thi, har kadam par fareb khaya gaya,
laakh toofan samet kar ya rab isliye ek dil banaya gaya......
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2006, 12:58:13 PM »
Quote from: "vicky AKELA"


DARD PEE-PEEKAR JEE RAHA HOON MAIN,
          APNE HAATON ZAKHM SEE RAHA HOON MAIN...

AB TO BISTAR UTH-TE NAHI BANTA HAI,
          EK BOTAL SE GHAM PEE RAHA HOON MAIN...

MARNA CHAHA BHI, LOGON NE MARNE NA DIYA,
          ZINDA LAASH KO APNI DHO RAHA HOON MAIN.....

RONA CHAHA, SHARM SE RO BHI NA SAKA,
          RAAT TANHAAI ME ASHQ PEE RAHA HOON MAIN....

PADEGA JO BHI "AASHIQ", KASAM SE RO DEGA,
          APNI GAZAL LAHOO SE LIKH RAHA HOON MAIN.....


bahut khoob vicky ji....

pooja ji aap ko jawaab nahi hamesha ki tarah...
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2006, 01:05:12 PM »
Marham jo bann nahi sakte wahi gum de jaate hain,
Na ho woh mehfil mein badnaam isliye hum hoth see jaate hain,
Koi bata de unhe dil ki lagi kisko kehte hain,
Saanson se judey sansein tab kahin do dil miltey hain...

gesu's koshish!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2006, 01:34:56 PM »
shukriya GESU JI..........
aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne........nice
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2006, 01:38:43 PM »
Quote from: "Gesu"
Marham jo bann nahi sakte wahi gum de jaate hain,
Na ho woh mehfil mein badnaam isliye hum hoth see jaate hain,
Koi bata de unhe dil ki lagi kisko kehte hain,
Saanson se judey sansein tab kahin do dil miltey hain...

gesu's koshish!!!!!


Yun hi muft main tum mujhe zakhm diye jate ho,
kam se kam in zakhom ki kuch keemat to lete jao....

ek din hoton se choo kar, tum hi lagaogi marham,
aaj bhale hi kitne zakhm, tum mujhe deti jao......
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2006, 03:06:26 PM »
bohot khoob vicky ji !!!
keep it up!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2006, 05:54:58 AM »
shukriya ROSHNI JI....
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2006, 06:44:07 PM »
Ek do ka zikra kya, hazaron shikayeten hain tumse,
kya kahen apni nahi, ab parai hai tu.....

nashe me ya khwabon, ya tanhaiyon me milte ho,
saalon se haqiqat me, na di dikhai tu.........

maykashi me aur bhi, badkar yaad aai tu,
mere pyale me banke, sharab aaye tu...........
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2006, 07:50:54 PM »
Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
Ek do ka zikra kya, hazaron shikayeten hain tumse,
kya kahen apni nahi, ab parai hai tu.....

nashe me ya khwabon, ya tanhaiyon me milte ho,
saalon se haqiqat me, na di dikhai tu.........

maykashi me aur bhi, badkar yaad aai tu,
mere pyale me banke, sharab aaye tu...........


MashaALLAH..bahut khoob..Vicky
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2006, 10:04:59 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya ANJUM JI........
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hi
«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2006, 08:20:33 PM »
bahut khoob vicky ji terrific pain well expressed in ur poem
keep it up
nice work
regards and love
manu
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2006, 07:19:54 AM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Vicky
sharab ke payale mai tum
mere nashe ki madhoshi mai tum
khayalo mai tum
badhawa tanhaai mai tum
zindagi jaise simat kar rah gai tum mai
mere din raat. her pal, her sans mai bas ek tum!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2006, 10:31:14 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya MANU JI aur POOJA JI...

POOJA JI aaapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai... nice one
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