~*~Lahren~*~ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

marhoom bahayaat

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«Reply #15 on: July 11, 2009, 09:57:38 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 06:05:44 AM

Waah Bahoot Khoon Shivam ji...

Bahoot Khoob Cera ji

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja Di.

Aksar Pukarta haui mujhe mera beeta kal
Kehta hai aa laut kar mere kareeb aa ja
Chod de ye ansoon bahana mujhe yaad kar
aa fir pass aakar apna buja Deepak jala ja

Kehti hun usse main apni saans thaam kar
toot chuki hun main ab, chala ja door chala ja
Kho chuki ab tera pyar, khud ka vishwaas mein
Yuun Baar baar aakar mere kareeb bebas na kiye ja

BHAUT KHOOB SOPHI JI


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marhoom bahayaat

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«Reply #16 on: July 11, 2009, 09:59:42 AM »

Quote from: cara on July 10, 2009, 12:24:02 PM

kya baat hai pankshivam ji....

SANSON KI LAHRENO MEIN ,JAB BHI TERA NAAM CHALTA HAI,
PHIR WAHI TUJE PAANE KA ARMAAN,MACHALTA HAI.

GOOD LINES CARA JI


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pankshivam

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«Reply #17 on: July 11, 2009, 05:11:57 PM »

Quote from: cara on July 10, 2009, 12:24:02 PM

kya baat hai pankshivam ji....

SANSON KI LAHRENO MEIN ,JAB BHI TERA NAAM CHALTA HAI,
PHIR WAHI TUJE PAANE KA ARMAAN,MACHALTA HAI.

Shukriya Caraji
bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne
Lahren meri sanson ki,chaltin rahin bs tera naam lekar...
Na aaye tum na koi aahat aayi, na ye fija aayi tumhara paigam lekar...
~Pank~


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pankshivam

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«Reply #18 on: July 11, 2009, 05:13:37 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 10, 2009, 04:47:49 PM

Very Nice Pank Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thanks Sarveshji


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #19 on: July 11, 2009, 05:14:48 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on July 10, 2009, 11:10:40 AM

Waqt ki laharon me zindgani chalti hai...
Dhadkano me chupchap teri kahani chalti hai...

Aankhon ke paimane chhlakte hain kabhi...
Khwabon ke sath jab yaadon ki nishani chalti hai...

Bikhar ke gum ho jate hai ashk sirhane me kahin...
Hotho pe hota hai tera naam,aur dhire dhire sanso ki ravani chalti hai...

~Pank~

wah wah wah PANK Ji, bahut hi lajawaab .... bahut accha laga aaj yaha aa key ... was just missing such sweet beautiful poems from you.... keep it up....

Jasbir Singh


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pankshivam

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«Reply #20 on: July 11, 2009, 05:23:23 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 10, 2009, 05:01:12 PM

bahoot khoob pank nice lines cara ji

kabhi khawab to kabhi haqiqat ne jagaya hai
zindagi ki dhoop chaya ne bahoot sikhaya hai

Her armaan ek lehar ban kar lahlahaya hai
kabhi bandha, kabhi bahaya, kuch is tarah jeevan beetaya hai!!

Thanks Poojaji

Zindagi lahron ki tarah chalti jati hai...
Khushiyon me hasti hai toh gamon me ashk bahati hai...
Dekar ilzam use ruthati hai kabhi,
To lekar naam usi ka khud hi maan jati hai...
~Pank~


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pankshivam

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«Reply #21 on: July 11, 2009, 05:25:13 PM »

Quote from: Deepati on July 11, 2009, 05:53:41 AM

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai, Pank Ji! Applause

Shukriya Deepatiji


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pankshivam

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«Reply #22 on: July 11, 2009, 06:25:00 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 06:05:44 AM

Shukriya Sophiji
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne
Chala jayega ye intezar ka lamha...
Fir bhi teri sadayen na aayengi...
Hoga na tujhe fir bhi ehsas koi...
Jab meri yaaden tere ashkon me muskurayengi...
Bhul jana mujhe dekar ilzam koi...
Na hogi kahin aahat bs meri yaaden rah jayengi...
~pank~


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pankshivam

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«Reply #23 on: July 11, 2009, 06:27:25 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on July 11, 2009, 06:15:13 AM

bahut achche pank bhai .
\cara ji aur pooja di aap dono ne bhi bahut achcha likha hai
sophi dear kamaal ka reply hai

saahil ko chhu jaaye lehrein aur oonmein na halchal ho
toh lehron ka kasoor hi hoga jo saahil ko bhigoya nahin

Shukriya Sahil Bhai
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne


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pankshivam

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«Reply #24 on: July 11, 2009, 06:29:26 PM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 11, 2009, 09:56:10 AM

BAHUT KHOOB PANK JI Applause

Shukriya Bayaatji


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pankshivam

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«Reply #25 on: July 11, 2009, 06:30:33 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 11, 2009, 05:14:48 PM

wah wah wah PANK Ji, bahut hi lajawaab .... bahut accha laga aaj yaha aa key ... was just missing such sweet beautiful poems from you.... keep it up....

Jasbir Singh

Shukriya Jasji


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Deepati

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«Reply #26 on: July 11, 2009, 06:37:36 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 06:05:44 AM

Aksar Pukarta haui mujhe mera beeta kal
Kehta hai aa laut kar mere kareeb aa ja
Chod de ye ansoon bahana mujhe yaad kar
aa fir pass aakar apna buja Deepak jala ja

Kehti hun usse main apni saans thaam kar
toot chuki hun main ab, chala ja door chala ja
Kho chuki ab tera pyar, khud ka vishwaas mein
Yuun Baar baar aakar mere kareeb bebas na kiye ja

Bahut khoob, Sophi Ji! Applause


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Deepati

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«Reply #27 on: July 11, 2009, 06:39:04 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on July 11, 2009, 06:15:13 AM

Very nice lines, Saahil Ji! Applause


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Deepati

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«Reply #28 on: July 11, 2009, 06:41:48 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on July 11, 2009, 05:23:23 PM

Quote from: pankshivam on July 11, 2009, 06:25:00 PM

Wah Wah Pank Ji! Bahut khoob! Yuhin likhte raho! Applause


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pankshivam

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«Reply #29 on: July 11, 2009, 06:49:03 PM »

Quote from: Deepati on July 11, 2009, 06:41:48 PM

Wah Wah Pank Ji! Bahut khoob! Yuhin likhte raho! Applause

Thanks Deepatiji


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