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<>Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 02, 2010, 01:21:19 PM

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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 02:58:21 PM »

Tariff k sab shabd maun ho gaye hain Kasak-di......
freeze ho gaye hain....
bolte hain ab humko permanent kar do......
Anamika-di ki tou har rachna Superb hoti hai....
Jitni suder rachna hai utna hi sunder presentation...... Clapping Smiley

In hi haatho se banaayee-mitayee meine anginat lakeerein
Par haar gayee mein haath par khudi in chand lakeeron se

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<>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>


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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 03:01:29 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Kasak Ji
Pa.dh kar hum aatam vhibhor ho gaye


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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2010, 01:58:29 PM »


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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 04:35:15 PM »

Oye hoye Anamika di, bahaut acha likha hai..Wakei bahaut dard bhara likha hai..Dil choo liya...akhri line bahaut achi lagi..
Jisne ek uff tak nahin ki, wakei bahaut mohobat bhari hai uske dil main..sirf akhri do lines ko parr kar yeh keh raha hoon...
aur dua karunga yeh aag buj jaye..Ameen..!
Khush rahiye..! Applause

ek shaer yaad agaya Faraz Saheb ka..dil ki sachayi bayan karta hai...:

"Haath zakhmi hue toh kuch apni hi khata thi Faraz,
Lakeeron ko mitana chaha tumhe paane kay liye..."


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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 04:36:45 PM »

Ohh by the way, Loved the way you presented your poem..the background and everything.. Tooooooooooo good..! Applause


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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2010, 04:49:06 PM »

wah wah wah kasak ji.. wah wah

jasbir singh
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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 04:40:23 AM »

nice one kasak. very touching

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 02, 2010, 01:21:19 PM

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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2010, 04:51:26 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 02, 2010, 02:58:21 PM

In hi haatho se banaayee-mitayee meine anginat lakeerein
Par haar gayee mein haath par khudi in chand lakeeron se

thnxxxx koyal....tum to kuch jyada hi tareef karne lagi...


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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2010, 04:52:36 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 02, 2010, 03:01:29 PM

Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Kasak Ji
Pa.dh kar hum aatam vhibhor ho gaye

aapke reply se hum bhi khush khush ho gaye rajesh ji....
bht shukriya pasand karne k liye


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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2010, 04:53:06 AM »

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 03, 2010, 01:58:29 PM

thnx thk ji


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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2010, 04:55:20 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 03, 2010, 04:35:15 PM

ek shaer yaad agaya Faraz Saheb ka..dil ki sachayi bayan karta hai...:

"Haath zakhmi hue toh kuch apni hi khata thi Faraz,
Lakeeron ko mitana chaha tumhe paane kay liye..."

aahaaaa...2 line me bht kuch keh gaye....
aapne ise itna pasand kiya saraha uske liye bht bht shukriya ji


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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2010, 04:56:26 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 03, 2010, 04:49:06 PM

wah wah wah kasak ji.. wah wah

jasbir singh
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thnx JS ji....thnx a lot for appreciating my work


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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2010, 07:22:02 AM »

bahut bahut Khoob Anamika Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Kuch Insaan Ki Bebasi,Kuch Shikayaten Se bharpoor jazbaat Nazar aaye iss kavita mein..

Bahut Ache.


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Re: <>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2010, 07:47:35 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 09, 2010, 07:22:02 AM

bahut bahut Khoob Anamika Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Kuch Insaan Ki Bebasi,Kuch Shikayaten Se bharpoor jazbaat Nazar aaye iss kavita mein..

Bahut Ache.

shukriya khwaish ji k aapne ise pasadn kiya nd mehsus kiya