lambi umar

by vikas2210 on February 17, 2007, 07:45:35 AM
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doston kuch man mayus hua tha unki yaad mai.. jeene ki chah nahi rahi thi baaki kuch mann mai aaya to aap sab se share kar liya.... umeed hai pasan aayega..... aaple jawab ke intezaar mai.......




Meri lambi umar ki dua na karna doston
Ke maine khuda se abhi maut mangi hai

Guzar gai hai saari zindgi intezaar mai
Ke umar mari lambhi to nahi doston…

Sahej ke rakha hai dil ko kaanto ki sej pe
Zakhmo mai namak-e ashk bharta hu doston

Kafan na na odhana mujhe aye mere doston
Ke unka aanchal odhne ki kasam khai ha doston

Dekhna aayenge zarur meri kabar pe ek baar zarur
Ke maine khud hi sajaai hai apni kabar doston….
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2007, 09:46:15 AM »
Very Emotional Writing Vikas... Very nice one..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2007, 10:17:39 AM »

Bahut lambii dagar yeh zindagaanii hai...
Khushii aur Gum bharii ek kahanii hai...

Kaanton sey bachaa kar rakhiye dil ko,
Bahaarein aur bhi kaii abhii aanii hai...

Yun kuredete ho kyon tum zakhmon ko,
Chot dil ki toh hoti bahut ruhaanii hai...

Hai kafan ka intezaar bhala kyon tum ko,
Abhii Duniyaa kadmon mey jhukaanii hai...

Maayuus se baithe ho kyon, samjho toh,
Zimeddaariyaan bahut abhii nibhaanii hai....

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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2007, 10:37:41 AM »
nice one Shikha and thanks a lot dear....

na jeeya jata hai na maut hi aati hai
jab bhi aati hai teri yaad bahut aati hai.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2007, 11:46:30 AM »
Thanks Vikas.... aur Bahut hi khoob... Usual Smile



Kisiiki yaadon ko gale se laga kar rakha,
Kisii ke liye dil ko humne jala kar rakha...

Yeh duniya aur yeh duniyadaari kya hai,
Humne toh khud ko bhi bhulaa kar rakha...

Aansu beshakk behh chale aankhon sey,
Magar unko nazaron par baitha kar rakha...

Dil sey chahte hai Woh bhi humko, doston,  
Iss khayaal se khud ko behkaa kar rakha... Usual Smile
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vikas2210
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2007, 03:20:31 AM »
woo very nice shikha...... and thanks.....


agar bharne the gum-e-intezaar ke aansu
to sapne meri aankho mai sajaye kyo the
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2007, 11:23:50 AM »
Very nice Vikas....



Kyon sajate hai aankhon mey hum sapne,
Kyon Haqiqat sey hum ghabraa jaate hai...
Jo patthar lekar ghoomte hai haathon mey,
Aksar Unhii logon sey hum takraa jaate hai....
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2007, 05:02:34 PM »
Nice vikas ji and shikha ji.........!!!!!!!!
bhaut bhaidiya.......!!!!!!
really very nice...!!!!!!!!!!


Ab kuch raha hi nahi aur likhne k liye,
kya bataun alfaaz hi nahi rahe apne gummo ko,
ab bayan karne k liye,
ek aap hi sahra the jeene k liye,
aur aapne bhi saath chod diya gairo k
liye.........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2007, 09:52:05 PM »
Very nice Vikas, Shikha and Badnaam !!
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2007, 02:01:36 AM »
Bohat hi acha likha hai Vikas & Shikha...
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2007, 07:52:13 PM »
bahot  khoob Vikas........ Shikha.....  Gaurav......
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2007, 04:51:22 AM »
Waheed ji.........Iam not Gaurav.....!!!!!!!
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