Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha..!!..Miru

by Miraj. on August 03, 2013, 10:52:23 AM
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Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.

Tum Aati Rahi,Kabhi Jaati Rahi,
Aankhen Teri Muskurata Raha.

Ek Saaj Thi Bani,Tu Laaj Thi Bani,
Chahat Teri Dil Jalata Raha.

Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.

Tu Kho Si Gayi,Hum Toot Se Gaye,
Bite Pal Bhi Hume Satata Raha.

Anlikhi Si Tu Koyi Kahani Lagi,
Likh Likh Jise Hum Mitata Raha.

Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.

Kahta Tha Dil Tum Meri Hi To Ho,
Dil Ki Wo Sari Baten Mai Sunta Raha.

Tu Aas Thi Meri,Kabhi Pass Thi Meri,
Khamokha Bebajah Khab Bunta Raha.

Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.



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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2013, 04:40:32 PM »
Quote from: Miraj. on August 03, 2013, 10:52:23 AM
Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.

Tum Aati Rahi,Kabhi Jaati Rahi,
Aankhen Teri Muskurata Raha.


ANKHEIN MUSKURATA NAHI ,,,MUSKURATI RAHI.. IS APPROPRIATE
Ek Saaj Thi Bani,Tu Laaj Thi Bani,
Chahat Teri Dil Jalata Raha.

CHAHAT TERI DIL NAHI,,,TERA DIL SAHI HOTA



Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.

AGAIN ZINDAGI AZMATA NAHI ,,AZMATI HAI.



Tu Kho Si Gayi,Hum Toot Se Gaye,
Bite Pal Bhi Hume Satata Raha.
BITA HUA PAL


Anlikhi Si Tu Koyi Kahani Lagi,
Likh Likh Jise Hum Mitata Raha.

Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.

Kahta Tha Dil Tum Meri Hi To Ho,
Dil Ki Wo Sari Baten Mai Sunta Raha.

Tu Aas Thi Meri,Kabhi Pass Thi Meri,
Khamokha Bebajah Khab Bunta Raha.
BEWAJAH


Zindagi Bhi Hume Aajmata Raha,
Lamha Bita Huaa Dil Dukhata Raha.



IITian Miraj..!! love9 tearyeyed love9

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