lamhe kaha gaye !!

by Fatima.. on May 12, 2009, 04:08:21 PM
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this is by me hope you all like it ....thanx

"
lamhe kaha gaye khushi ke
abb toa mehfilo mein bhi gum hi nazar aata hain
kuch toa haste huye pal mile chahat ke
toa kuch tute huye lamhe bhi mile mohabbat ke
"
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2009, 04:21:46 PM »
Fatima

Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause

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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 04:36:41 PM »
Bahut khoob Fatima.
Welcome to Yoindia Family Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 05:43:40 PM »
Bohat khoob Fatima...

Dukh jo na mile, ehmiyat sukh ki samjhega kaun

Jo mehfilo me sirf khushi ki baat ho, gam kisi ka batega kaun..

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 06:32:00 PM »
Quote from: Fatima.. on May 12, 2009, 04:08:21 PM
this is by me hope you all like it ....thanx

"
lamhe kaha gaye khushi ke
abb toa mehfilo mein bhi gum hi nazar aata hain
kuch toa haste huye pal mile chahat ke
toa kuch tute huye lamhe bhi mile mohabbat ke
"

Bohot Khoob Fatima...Keep writing Usual Smile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 09:37:51 PM »
very very nice fatima ji.
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Sager4u
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 12:26:15 AM »
Kya baat hai fatima! Bahut koob likh rahi ho, accha laga,very nice.........keep it up.
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2009, 05:12:25 AM »
Quote from: Fatima.. on May 12, 2009, 04:08:21 PM
this is by me hope you all like it ....thanx

"
lamhe kaha gaye khushi ke
abb toa mehfilo mein bhi gum hi nazar aata hain
kuch toa haste huye pal mile chahat ke
toa kuch tute huye lamhe bhi mile mohabbat ke
"


BAHAUT ACHCHEY ...FATIMA SAHIBAA..!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 03:24:42 PM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai FATIMA Ji.. Lajawab Peshkash hai.. !! Applause Applause

Aaj aapko Pahali baar Padha hai.. aur Padh kar Bahut Khushi Hui ki aap Behad Khubsoorat likhti Hain... Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2009, 03:27:54 PM »
Quote from: Fatima.. on May 12, 2009, 04:08:21 PM
this is by me hope you all like it ....thanx

"
lamhe kaha gaye khushi ke
abb toa mehfilo mein bhi gum hi nazar aata hain
kuch toa haste huye pal mile chahat ke
toa kuch tute huye lamhe bhi mile mohabbat ke
"

Wah dear Fatima bahut accha likha hai tumne.  Thumbs UP
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Fatima..
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2009, 07:57:52 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on May 12, 2009, 04:21:46 PM
Fatima

Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP



Quote from: {Angel} on May 12, 2009, 04:36:41 PM
Bahut khoob Fatima.
Welcome to Yoindia Family Usual Smile



Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 12, 2009, 05:43:40 PM
Bohat khoob Fatima...

Dukh jo na mile, ehmiyat sukh ki samjhega kaun

Jo mehfilo me sirf khushi ki baat ho, gam kisi ka batega kaun..

-Sajid Ghayel-



Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2009, 06:32:00 PM
Bohot Khoob Fatima...Keep writing Usual Smile



Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2009, 09:37:51 PM
very very nice fatima ji.



Quote from: Sager4u on May 13, 2009, 12:26:15 AM
Kya baat hai fatima! Bahut koob likh rahi ho, accha laga,very nice.........keep it up.



Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 13, 2009, 05:12:25 AM

BAHAUT ACHCHEY ...FATIMA SAHIBAA..!!!



Quote from: Mann on May 13, 2009, 03:24:42 PM
Wah Kya Baat Hai FATIMA Ji.. Lajawab Peshkash hai.. !! Applause Applause

Aaj aapko Pahali baar Padha hai.. aur Padh kar Bahut Khushi Hui ki aap Behad Khubsoorat likhti Hain... Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**



Quote from: Roja on May 13, 2009, 03:27:54 PM
Wah dear Fatima bahut accha likha hai tumne.  Thumbs UP

SHUKRIYA .. THANX A TONS ALL FOR SUPPORTIN!!!! WORDS AND REPLIES
THANK YOU
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2009, 08:04:09 AM »
Bohat Achche Fathima Ji,.


Kaash Khabar Hoti Mujhe Ke Tujhe Meri Chahat Nahi,.
Main Tanhaaiyon Mein Hi Ghira Hota,.
Kabhi Mehfilein Sajaane Ke Khwaab Na Dekhta,.

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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2009, 08:08:34 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on May 14, 2009, 08:04:09 AM
Bohat Achche Fathima Ji,.


Kaash Khabar Hoti Mujhe Ke Tujhe Meri Chahat Nahi,.
Main Tanhaaiyon Mein Hi Ghira Hota,.
Kabhi Mehfilein Sajaane Ke Khwaab Na Dekhta,.

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shukriya happy3 ....well words Applause

kyu nahi jaati tanhai inn khuskh aankhon se yeh na samjh paaye
ger toa ger sahi .. hume apne hi na samjh paaye
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«Reply #13 on: May 14, 2009, 08:14:31 AM »
Thank U,.



Mere Khayaalon Mein Tha Basera Uska,.
Wo Meri Raat Thi, Main Raha Adhera Uska,.
 
Jaane Kiski Nazar Lagi Hume, Hum Judaa Hogaye,.
Maine Paai Raat Ki Siyaahi, Tha Roshan Sawera Uska,.

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«Reply #14 on: May 14, 2009, 08:19:17 AM »
nice words Applause happy3
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