!!!..Lamhe waqt saath le gaya..!!!

by nashwani on October 11, 2013, 12:33:12 AM
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Ret ke gharonde me halchal hui yun to kai baar,,
Wo lehar phir na aayi jisne gharonda toda na ho..

Jab jab jhuki palke.N unki, main jhuka na saka,,
Vo lamhe waqt sath le gaya, main chura na saka..

Dekha unko unki roshni se khud ko bachaye hue,,
Par chand ke us saaye se, khud ko bacha na saka..

Mizaaz apna bhi kabhi bada rangeen tha yaaro.N,,
Bas mila tha unse jabse, khud ko phir paa na saka..

Jalti shamaa me jalaa main wo parwaana hun jo,,
Karta raha afsos, ki khud ko kyu aur jala na saka..

Faili thi vo khusbu har oor, mujhe bhi chhu gayi,,
Gham is bat ka raha ki qaid kar sang laa na saka..

'Deewane' ne gunah-e-ishq bhi kuch aisa kia yaro.N ki,,
Khud pe fakr hi hua sada, kabhi pachhta na saka..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2013, 12:38:01 AM »
Quote from: nashwani on October 11, 2013, 12:33:12 AM
Ret ke gharonde me halchal hui yun to kai baar,,
Wo lehar phir na aayi jisne gharonda toda na ho..

Jab jab jhuki palke.N unki, main jhuka na saka,,
Vo lamhe waqt sath le gaya, main chura na saka..

Dekha unko unki roshni se khud ko bachaye hue,,
Par chand ke us saaye se, khud ko bacha na saka..

Mizaaz apna bhi kabhi bada rangeen tha yaaro.N,,
Bas mila tha unse jabse, khud ko phir paa na saka..

Jalti shamaa me jalaa main wo parwaana hun jo,,
Karta raha afsos, ki khud ko kyu aur jala na saka..

Faili thi vo khusbu har oor, mujhe bhi chhu gayi,,
Gham is bat ka raha ki qaid kar sang laa na saka..

"Deewane" ne gunah-e-ishq bhi kuch aisa kia yaro.N ki,,
Khud pe fakr hi hua sada, kabhi pachhta na saka..!!! Ñ
waah bohat khoob nashwani ji ,sab assaa.r dil choo lene wale
bohat c daad ,..............
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2013, 12:40:19 AM »
bahut khoob nashwani ji.
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2013, 01:35:18 AM »
Waah waah nashwani ji bohut khoob
Lajwaab likha hai ..itna mat pchhtao
Ek RAU lejao tasalli ke liye.

Waah kaa baat h birjuwa
Bohut hi achha likha hai

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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2013, 01:38:49 AM »

Nashwaani Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke behad umdaa aur behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai janab...
Bade hi lajawaab ashaar huye haiN sabhi... Har ashaar qabil e daad hai... Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2013, 02:25:34 AM »
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH BAHUT KHUB BEHAD KHUBSURAT UMDA QALAAM BHAI...HAZARON DILIII DAAD O MUBARABAAD

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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2013, 02:37:02 AM »
Quote from: nashwani on October 11, 2013, 12:33:12 AM
Ret ke gharonde me halchal hui yun to kai baar,,
Wo lehar phir na aayi jisne gharonda toda na ho..

Jab jab jhuki palke.N unki, main jhuka na saka,,
Vo lamhe waqt sath le gaya, main chura na saka..

Dekha unko unki roshni se khud ko bachaye hue,,
Par chand ke us saaye se, khud ko bacha na saka..

Mizaaz apna bhi kabhi bada rangeen tha yaaro.N,,
Bas mila tha unse jabse, khud ko phir paa na saka..

Jalti shamaa me jalaa main wo parwaana hun jo,,
Karta raha afsos, ki khud ko kyu aur jala na saka..

Faili thi vo khusbu har oor, mujhe bhi chhu gayi,,
Gham is bat ka raha ki qaid kar sang laa na saka..

'Deewane' ne gunah-e-ishq bhi kuch aisa kia yaro.N ki,,
Khud pe fakr hi hua sada, kabhi pachhta na saka..!!! Ñ
Waah,Kya Bat Hai Bhai Ashwani Jee,
Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2013, 04:04:30 AM »
Quote from: nashwani on October 11, 2013, 12:33:12 AM
Ret ke gharonde me halchal hui yun to kai baar,,
Wo lehar phir na aayi jisne gharonda toda na ho..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jab jab jhuki palke.N unki, main jhuka na saka,,
Vo lamhe waqt sath le gaya, main chura na saka..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dekha unko unki roshni se khud ko bachaye hue,,
Par chand ke us saaye se, khud ko bacha na saka..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Mizaaz apna bhi kabhi bada rangeen tha yaaro.N,,
Bas mila tha unse jabse, khud ko phir paa na saka..
 Clapping Smiley Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Jalti shamaa me jalaa main wo parwaana hun jo,,
Karta raha afsos, ki khud ko kyu aur jala na saka..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Faili thi vo khusbu har oor, mujhe bhi chhu gayi,,
Gham is bat ka raha ki qaid kar sang laa na saka..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
'Deewane' ne gunah-e-ishq bhi kuch aisa kia yaro.N ki,,
Khud pe fakr hi hua sada, kabhi pachhta na saka..!!! Ñ
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bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2013, 04:15:32 AM »
jaanlewaa ! sach mein kyaa likhaa hai aapne, maar hi daalaa ek dum ! bahut khoob janaab, bahut umdaa !!!

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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2013, 08:37:27 AM »
waah waah bahut sunder
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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2013, 09:11:11 AM »
wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 11, 2013, 11:41:15 AM »
Faili thi vo khusbu har oor, mujhe bhi chhu gayi,,
Gham is bat ka raha ki qaid kar sang laa na saka..

bahut khoob Nashwaniji.
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«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2013, 06:02:06 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on October 11, 2013, 12:38:01 AM
waah bohat khoob nashwani ji ,sab assaa.r dil choo lene wale
bohat c daad ,..............

Laaiba jee pasand karne ka bahut shukriya..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2013, 06:03:02 PM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 11, 2013, 12:40:19 AM
bahut khoob nashwani ji.
daaaaaaaad [/size][/b]

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Apka bahut bahut shukriya suresh jee..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2013, 06:03:59 PM »
Quote from: sahal on October 11, 2013, 01:35:18 AM
Waah waah nashwani ji bohut khoob
Lajwaab likha hai ..itna mat pchhtao
Ek RAU lejao tasalli ke liye.

Waah kaa baat h birjuwa
Bohut hi achha likha hai

Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank u nattu kaka..bahute hausla afzai kar diye aap to..
YUn hi aage sath dete rahiye sahal bhai..happy9
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