~Lamhon ko Guzarte Dekha~

by pankshivam on January 12, 2010, 09:45:52 PM
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2010, 11:36:52 PM »


BAHUT KHOOB PANK JI
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pankshivam
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2010, 04:58:35 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB PANK JI
Thankyou !
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arifuddin
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2010, 05:56:33 AM »
 notworthy Applause do lamho me hum ne b yaha bohat kuch dekha  Clapping Smiley
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2010, 05:59:56 AM »
Bahut achha likha hai Pank Ji. Very nice creation.
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cara
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2010, 06:08:31 AM »
KYA BAAT HAI    PANKSHIVAM JI....

WO HAMKO BHOOLGAYE HAM BHI UNKO BHOOLNA CHAHA
JAB BHI UNKO DOOSRE KI BHAHON MEIN DEKHA
UNKE SAATH BEETHE  APNI AANKHON MEIN
HAR LAMHON KO GUZARTE DEKHA....
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pankshivam
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2010, 06:42:52 AM »
Thankyou ! Riyaz Ji, Arifuddin Ji, Cara Bro.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2010, 07:43:33 AM »
Good Job Pank Bhai
Thanks Bro
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diya786
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2010, 10:20:08 AM »
bahut bahut umda likha hai Pank ji
har line kamaal hai......
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2010, 12:00:16 PM »
bahut bahut umda likha hai Pank ji
har line kamaal hai......
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Kashish ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2010, 01:09:37 PM »
Badi achhi rachna hai aapki Pankji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har roj maine phulon ko khilte aur murjhate dekha
Dil mai lakho echhayon ko bante aur bigadte dekha

Bigdee takdeeron ko humne pal main bannte dekha
Raajaa ko rank aur  Rank ko raajaa bannte dekha

Samay ki chapeit main achhe achho ko aate dekha
Aansoo bhari aankhon se lamhon ko Gujarte Dekha


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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2010, 02:05:23 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Shivam.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai

Good Effort Koyal !
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pankshivam
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2010, 05:17:43 PM »
Badi achhi rachna hai aapki Pankji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har roj maine phulon ko khilte aur murjhate dekha
Dil mai lakho echhayon ko bante aur bigadte dekha

Bigdee takdeeron ko humne pal main bannte dekha
Raajaa ko rank aur  Rank ko raajaa bannte dekha

Samay ki chapeit main achhe achho ko aate dekha
Aansoo bhari aankhon se lamhon ko Gujarte Dekha

Thanks Koyalji
Aapne Bhi Khoob Likha
 Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2010, 05:35:01 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Shivam.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai

Good Effort Koyal !
Shukriya Sophiji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2010, 06:26:02 PM »
Wow bahut bahut khoob Pank ji,mindblowing creation,really touched,lovely lines by Cara ji n Koyal ji.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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