Lately...... But I Have !*! Barsaat Ke Baadal - 2 !*!

by Just_Hate_Love on August 12, 2006, 06:05:04 PM
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Aasmaan pe kaale baadal chhaye hue hai,
Paani ko apne seene se bahaye hue hai,

Kab zameen ki pyaas bujhegi kab wo barsega,
Is aas mein dharti apne gumo ko bhulaye hue hai,

Kab uthegi dariya mein phir se leher pata nahi,
Kaanto ka maaloom nahi par phool murjhaye hue hai,

Hawa bikher na de baadalo ko aasmaan se isliye,
Hawa ko hum in haathon mein dabaye hue hai,

Indra-dhanush bhi tayyar hai nikalne ko,
Apne jism pe rango ko wo lagaye hue hai,

Ro de aaj tu bhi aye baadal baha de un ashqo ko,
Jo tune meri aankhon se churaye hue hai,

Aayenge bujhane barsaat ke baadal meri aag ko 'Naazmi'
Paani barse is bahane hum apne aap ko jalaye hue hai ...
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2006, 09:39:57 AM »
bahut khoob JHL ji ..........
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2006, 10:39:30 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Aasmaan pe kaale baadal chhaye hue hai,
Paani ko apne seene se bahaye hue hai,

Kab zameen ki pyaas bujhegi kab wo barsega,
Is aas mein dharti apne gumo ko bhulaye hue hai,

Kab uthegi dariya mein phir se leher pata nahi,
Kaanto ka maaloom nahi par phool murjhaye hue hai,

Hawa bikher na de baadalo ko aasmaan se isliye,
Hawa ko hum in haathon mein dabaye hue hai,

Indra-dhanush bhi tayyar hai nikalne ko,
Apne jism pe rango ko wo lagaye hue hai,

Ro de aaj tu bhi aye baadal baha de un ashqo ko,
Jo tune meri aankhon se churaye hue hai,

Aayenge bujhane barsaat ke baadal meri aag ko 'Naazmi'
Paani barse is bahane hum apne aap ko jalaye hue hai ...


Wah Mashalaaah JHL ji
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2006, 03:56:29 AM »
Very Nice JHL...
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2006, 05:50:36 AM »
wah bahoot khoob JHL JI!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2006, 03:08:58 PM »
Thanks a lot everyone here for appreciation ...
But its very strange that no-one has written any post here ...
Anyways ...

Pal hi aisa tha ki hum inkaar na kar paaye,
Zamane ke darr se ikraar na kar paaye,
Na thi jinke bina ye zindagi munasib,
Chhod diya saath unhone aur hum sawaal na kar paaye ...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2006, 06:00:54 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Aasmaan pe kaale baadal chhaye hue hai,
Paani ko apne seene se bahaye hue hai,

Kab zameen ki pyaas bujhegi kab wo barsega,
Is aas mein dharti apne gumo ko bhulaye hue hai,

Kab uthegi dariya mein phir se leher pata nahi,
Kaanto ka maaloom nahi par phool murjhaye hue hai,

Hawa bikher na de baadalo ko aasmaan se isliye,
Hawa ko hum in haathon mein dabaye hue hai,

Indra-dhanush bhi tayyar hai nikalne ko,
Apne jism pe rango ko wo lagaye hue hai,

Ro de aaj tu bhi aye baadal baha de un ashqo ko,
Jo tune meri aankhon se churaye hue hai,

Aayenge bujhane barsaat ke baadal meri aag ko 'Naazmi'
Paani barse is bahane hum apne aap ko jalaye hue hai ...


bahot  khoob  JHL...............   wonderful
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2006, 05:46:01 PM »
Sukriya Waheedbhai for appreciation ...

Aapne kuchh nahi likha Huh?
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2006, 06:07:54 AM »
bahoot hi acha likhahai JHL JI!!

Bin sawal ke juda ho gaye
wo chal diye, hum ro gaye
wo khushi se kisi aor ke ho gaye
hum tanhaio ke sath ho gaye
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2006, 05:49:57 PM »
Uski judaai se zindagi jaise aanjaan ho gayi hai,
Mayusiyon se ghir ke hairaan ho gayi hai,
Mohabbat to kar li usne par wo nibha na saki,
Aaj uski bewafaai hi uski pehchaan ho gayi hai ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2006, 07:06:32 AM »
wah kay abaat hai, last line bahoot hi achi likhi hai apne....

apni is pahhaan per hairaan hai wo
kahta hai ki nahi bewafa k anaam do
waqat ke sath khayal badal jaaya karte hai
insaan to kaya bhagwaan badal jaaya karte hai
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2006, 01:08:40 PM »
very very nice JHL..bahut hi pyara likha hai aap sabne...keep writing friends..
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2006, 04:59:32 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja and Nikki for appreciation ...
Good one Pooja ...
Keep it up ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2006, 05:02:29 PM »
Mohabbat ne har kisiko yaha badla hai,
Insaan aur khuda kya mohabbat sab karte hai,
Dil toot jaata hai jab wo bewafa nikalta hai,
Par use phir paane ke liye naye naye kartab karte hai ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2006, 07:57:25 AM »
SAHI KAHA JHL JI...

mana uske dil mai koi armaan nahi
magar is dil ko kahin karaar nahi
her pal paane ka khayal karta hai
din-raat na jaane kaya jaal bunta hai

shayad kisi roj usko bhi khayal aa jaaye
na jaane kab kon sa jaal kaam aa jaaye
phir dil kahta hai, payaar jabardasi karwaya nahi jaata
kisi bhi jaal se behka kar, sucha payaar paya nahi jaata
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