<>*Le chalti hun main*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 08, 2011, 05:42:32 PM
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<>*Le chalti hun main*<>


Ruthi hun khud se ya fir bht khush hun main
Kyun apni khadi ki hui uljhano me uljhi hun main

Bechain hun iss kadar k bas khatm kar dun khudko
Apni hi saanson se kyun ab to ubb chuki hun main

Ghutan se bhare hain din, dum ghotti hain raatein
Lagta hai apni hi kabr me janmon se qaidi hun main

Chiirke niklega suraj kabhi inn gahan andheron se
Bas isi umeed me kiranon ka intezar karti hun main

Khanjar se lagte hain ab to bol bhi unke mere dil me
Jab kisi apne se apni hi bematlab tareef sunti hun main

Kab kahtm hogi ye zindagi kab band hongi aankhein
Kyun iss baat ki tamanna har baar karti rehti hun main

Aa thaam mera hath main karun mukt tujhe yahan se
Chal kasak aaj tujhe maut k aagosh me le chalti hun main……
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manjum
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 03:52:33 AM »
kya kahaen kasakji... ek ek sher dard main duba hua hai... dard ka ehsas bahut gahra hai.... bahut khub..

 Applause Applause Applause

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Anshumali
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 05:10:52 AM »
<>*Le chalti hun main*<>


Ruthi hun khud se ya fir bht khush hun main
Kyun apni khadi ki hui uljhano me uljhi hun main

Bechain hun iss kadar k bas khatm kar dun khudko
Apni hi saanson se kyun ab to ubb chuki hun main

Ghutan se bhare hain din, dum ghotti hain raatein
Lagta hai apni hi kabr me janmon se qaidi hun main

Chiirke niklega suraj kabhi inn gahan andheron se
Bas isi umeed me kiranon ka intezar karti hun main

Khanjar se lagte hain ab to bol bhi unke mere dil me
Jab kisi apne se apni hi bematlab tareef sunti hun main

Kab kahtm hogi ye zindagi kab band hongi aankhein
Kyun iss baat ki tamanna har baar karti rehti hun main

Aa thaam mera hath main karun mukt tujhe yahan se
Chal kasak aaj tujhe maut k aagosh me le chalti hun main……

Iss Koshish MeN Itnaa Saaraa Dard Simat aayaa hai .. KI Padhke Mann Kii Zameen Nam ho gaii .. Kasak Ji ! bahut khoobi se ehsaasoN ko lafz diye hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai .. yunhi likhti rahiye ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 07:00:28 AM »
"Aa thaam mera hath main karun mukt tujhe yahan se
Chal kasak aaj tujhe maut k aagosh me le chalti hun main……"

hmm.....ok lets do it........i m already halfway.....anamika ji sath chalne ka mood ho to bolo ? apna to tkt apko pata hi he kafi time pahle hi pakaa ho chuka he......waiting for reply

i didnt expect these kinds of lines from u ........

anyways good poetry with sady feelings........
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2011, 09:48:29 AM »
Bahut Khub Anamika JI bahut sunder Likha Hai Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2011, 09:52:10 AM »
Acha hai kasak ji...

Khanjar se lagte hain ab to bol bhi unke mere dil me
Jab kisi apne se apni hi bematlab tareef sunti hun main

ye do lines khas pasand aayi mujhe..

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_Vicky_
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 06:40:26 AM »
Bahut Khoooooooooob Anamika Ji.. Har ek Jumla Jaise Dil-e-Haal Bayan kar raha ho.. Dard Bhari aapki Yeh Peshkash Bahut Umda Rahi.. Daaad kubool karen.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2011, 06:41:53 AM »
nice wordings Kasak!!
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shiba
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 02:28:25 AM »
Bohat Khoob Kasak Ji
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