Leh chala...

by Anushka on May 29, 2006, 09:20:04 PM
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nikki
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«Reply #15 on: June 01, 2006, 09:30:45 PM »
very nice Anushka n Jaanasheen ji...
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Anushka
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«Reply #16 on: June 01, 2006, 09:33:25 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
very nice Anushka n Jaanasheen ji...

Thks nikkiji aap bhi kuch likhay.. aapki kafi shayaries pedhi hai and they are just mind blowing.  :D
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nikki
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«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2006, 09:38:10 PM »
thank u so much dear...i will try aap jaisa likh sakon..

woh mujhse rooth kar na jaane kahan chup gaya hai
meri dhadkane usse talashti hain
mera to jahan lut gaya hai
aaj jee bhar ke royi hun uski yaad mein
mera to vaad-e-wafa se yaqeen uth gaya hai
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Anushka
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«Reply #18 on: June 01, 2006, 09:56:08 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thank you so much dear...i will try aap jaisa likh sakon..

woh mujhse rooth kar na jaane kahan chup gaya hai
meri dhadkane usse talashti hain
mera to jahan lut gaya hai
aaj jee bhar ke royi hun uski yaad mein
mera to vaad-e-wafa se yaqeen uth gaya hai


Nikkijiiiii aap hamay sherminda kerahay hai.... hum to bahut hi  junior hai likhnay meh semajlo kay abhi abhi kelam pekedkar sikha hai.....

chelo isi bahanay ek aur hojai....
Ek kacha dhaga hai hamara rishta..
Ek ehsas hai hamara rishta..
Ek zimadari hai hamara rishta..
kuch to hai apkey pas jo hum is kachay dhagay meh bhanday jatay hai..
Janay kaun ghedi ti jab apney hamaray liyeh dua ki..
Vo kaunsa pal hoga jab aap royi thi..
Janay anjanay meh yeh bhatkay hua ko rasta mila..
Ab teer to chel chuka hai...
Khasti bhi nikal geyi hai..kinaray say,
tufan bhi ayehgaa ..
Par hum to vohi par hai bandhay huay usi dhagay sy
Jo aap bandh geye dil o ruh mei..
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nikki
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«Reply #19 on: June 01, 2006, 10:25:30 PM »
arree likhne ki koi umar nahi hoti..aur koi jiyada likhne se acha likhne wala nahi ban jaata...

too good again...abhi i m leaving..kal kuch aur add karuni..oke
goodnight
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Shikha12
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«Reply #20 on: June 02, 2006, 06:04:49 AM »
Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Shukriya Nidhi Ji And Shikha Sis,..

Aye Dost Jhoot Aam Tha Duniya Mein Is Kadar..,,
Tune Bhi sach Kaha To Fasaana Laga Mujhe,..
Aaj Dekh Kho Raha Hoon Main Use,..
Wo Jise Paane Mein Zamaana Laga Mujhe,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-
Marvellous work Janasheen Bhai.....
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JImmy1987
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«Reply #21 on: June 02, 2006, 07:32:57 AM »
the msg was great in that sher anushka i m new here that means to this site but seein everyones spirit lagta hai.......

deedar-e-yaar ki chahat me jal jaate ho,
tum apne parwano ki deewangi ki aag me jal jaate ho,
kya karoge kos ke apni is taqdeer ko,
ke bin jalai yaadon ki aag me jal jaate ho...

keep up the spirit always........
jimmy :D
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nikki
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«Reply #22 on: June 02, 2006, 08:25:30 AM »
too good all of u...n welcome Jimmy ji....aate hi kamaal kar diya aapne to..

woh mujhe jala ke sochta hai khushi mil jayegi
magar nadaan hai nahi samajha pa raha
agar main udaas rahungi to
hassi uske chehre pe bhi kahan ayegi
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Anushka
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«Reply #23 on: June 03, 2006, 03:07:54 AM »
Quote from: "JImmy1987"
the msg was great in that sher anushka i m new here that means to this site but seein everyones spirit lagta hai.......

deedar-e-yaar ki chahat me jal jaate ho,
tum apne parwano ki deewangi ki aag me jal jaate ho,
kya karoge kos ke apni is taqdeer ko,
ke bin jalai yaadon ki aag me jal jaate ho...

keep up the spirit always........
jimmy :D


THANK YOU SO MUCH JIMMYJI  KAMAL KERDIYA APANAY........  AND WELCOME TO YOINDIA...
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Anushka
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«Reply #24 on: June 03, 2006, 03:17:26 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
too good all of you...n welcome Jimmy ji....aate hi kamaal kar diya aapne to..

woh mujhe jala ke sochta hai khushi mil jayegi
magar nadaan hai nahi samajha pa raha
agar main udaas rahungi to
hassi uske chehre pe bhi kahan ayegi


WAH NIKKIJI KYA KAMAL KERDIYA..... LOVELY ABSOLUTELY LOVELY...

Chhedo mainay b apkey lab-o-rukhsaar ke qisse gayeh gulshan meh,
Apke husn ko nikharaa gulshan mei,
Barso seh youu hii dil jamaa hua hai apki Khaatir,
Sau phool khilaayee humnay apkey khaatir..
Mail likhtaa raha roz apkey liye,
mai padhtaa raha apki nishani,
Ubharaa bhii agar dil meh koi jazbee
Is Khauf se chup thaa ke koi gelati hontho say na hojai...
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JImmy1987
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«Reply #25 on: June 07, 2006, 08:23:09 AM »
shukriya aap logo ka jo aap logo ne is nae shayar ko saraha... aaj ek aur naya sher apke samne rakh raha hun pasand aae to sarahiega..........

zindagi kyun itne mod dikhati hai,
humein kabhi khushi to kabhi gham dikhati hai,
sochta hun kya chahti hai ye zindagi humse,
kyu un palon ka aaina baar-baar dikhati hai.......

shukriya aapka,
jimmy glasses2
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Anushka
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«Reply #26 on: June 07, 2006, 08:53:07 AM »
Quote from: "JImmy1987"
shukriya aap logo ka jo aap logo ne is nae shayar ko saraha... aaj ek aur naya sher apke samne rakh raha hun pasand aae to sarahiega..........

zindagi kyun itne mod dikhati hai,
humein kabhi khushi to kabhi gham dikhati hai,
sochta hun kya chahti hai ye zindagi humse,
kyu un palon ka aaina baar-baar dikhati hai.......

shukriya aapka,
jimmy glasses2



Fir seh ek aur kamal.... Jimmyji.... great ..bahut acha laga..
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #27 on: June 07, 2006, 07:50:16 PM »
Quote from: "JImmy1987"
shukriya aap logo ka jo aap logo ne is nae shayar ko saraha... aaj ek aur naya sher apke samne rakh raha hun pasand aae to sarahiega..........

zindagi kyun itne mod dikhati hai,
humein kabhi khushi to kabhi gham dikhati hai,
sochta hun kya chahti hai ye zindagi humse,
kyu un palon ka aaina baar-baar dikhati hai.......

shukriya aapka,
jimmy glasses2


nice one jimmy ji!

Humse pucho kya hota hai pal pal bitana,
bahut mushkil hota hai dil ko samjhana.
khus naseb ho jo jindagi hamesa aayina dekhati hain
purani ki nadanio dekha kar sikh naya batlati hain
aur paigaam zindagii ne diyaa maut kaa mujhe
marane ke intazaar main jiinaa paraa aabtak mujhe
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mrkotians
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«Reply #28 on: June 07, 2006, 09:55:56 PM »
nice one jimmy...

dil diya tha tumhe aitbar ki hadh paar karke,
jaan de diya mere pyar ki hadh paar karke,
marr kar bhi aankhen reh gayi khuli,
tere intezar ki hadh paar karke.
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JImmy1987
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«Reply #29 on: June 09, 2006, 10:26:32 AM »
is nae shayar ko apne apne dil me jagah di uske lie bohut bohut shukriya mujhe nahi pata ki sirf shukriya se kaam chalega ya nahi, so jyada to kuch nahi keh sakta but haan itna zaroor keh sakta hun apki dosti dekh kar ke..............

bewafa ki bewafai ka lufs alag hai,
pyaar ke bagair zeher ka lufs alag hai,
dushman apni mar ko takat samajhta hai,
doston ki chahat ka lufs alag hai.........

apka tahe dil se shukriya karta hun.....
keep up all ur spirits.
jimmy Usual Smile
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