~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
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Dear Frnds,

yahaan aap sab dard me likh sakte hai, ye thread sabke liye hai koi bhi aaye aur 2 lines me apna dard bayaa.n kar de..i knw sabka koi na koi gamm,dard jaroor hoga, to chaliye likh daale apne dard 2 line ke lafzo me..

mein shuruaat karti hoo.n aap sab saath dijiyega..shukriya..

Dard me jaa.n kuch iss kadar doobe jaa rahi hai,
Meri har chahat har aas toote jaa rahi hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2009, 11:20:12 AM »
Nice one shally sis!

Dard se apna rishta kuch yun jud gaya hai,
Ke khushiyon se naseeba mera gamo ki raho me mud gaya hai!
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2009, 11:20:27 AM »
Good Start Shally,.
Nice One,.

Lafzon Mein Apne Dard Ko Peerona Achcha Nahi Lagta,.
Jo Guzaara Hai Maine, Wo Khissa Dil Mein Hi Rehne De,.
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2009, 11:29:17 AM »
Bahut Khoob Salma Dear & Azeem Ji, Shukriya saath dene ke liye..

Lafzo me na utar paayega wo jamana guzra hua,
Chal tujhe dard ki unn galiyo.n ko aankhon se dikha doo.n!!

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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2009, 11:37:40 AM »
Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji..

Mere dardo ne mujhe iss kadar dard diya,
Ki mein apne hi dushmano ka hamdard ban gaya!!..

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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2009, 11:45:27 AM »
Shukriya Aur bahut khoob kaash ji..

Zakham mere kabhi dikhe hi na mere yaar ko,
Wo aksar mujhe apni khushiyan hi dikhata raha..

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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2009, 11:48:52 AM »


Sab Ko Raha Takkaluf Mere Mehfil Mein Aane Se,.
Isliye Main Bhi Tanha Raha Kai Zamaane SE,.
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2009, 11:51:15 AM »
Tujhe hamne hi nahi mehfilo.n ne bhi yaad kiya,
Kahaan hai wo hasta hua chehra har kisi ne sawal kiya..

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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2009, 12:02:07 PM »
Ek Muddat Baad Jo Unka Saamna Hua,.
Wo Dekhkar Bhi Hume Anjaan Hi Bane Rahe,.
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2009, 12:04:42 PM »
Muddat baad jo aaya wo mere samne,
Dil ne usse lipat jaane ki zidd kar daali..

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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2009, 12:07:58 PM »

Dil To Munaafiq Hai Chaal Badalta Rehta Hai,.
Kabhi Kasam Khaai Thi Isne Use Bhulaa Dene Ki,.

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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2009, 12:12:27 PM »
Kasme roz khata hai dil mera ki use bhool jaunga,
Kambhakht use to nahi haan magar kasam ko roz bula deta hai..

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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2009, 12:14:39 PM »
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]Dil Ki Baat Sunkar Maine, Dil Bhi Gawaa Diya,.
Chain-o-Sukoon To Pehle Hi Usne Loot Rakha Tha,.

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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2009, 12:18:15 PM »
Dil-e-nadan ne bahut kuch gawaya,
Na use paa saka ye na hi khud ko tootne se bachaya..

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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2009, 12:25:20 PM »
Dil Ki Kismat Hai Tootkar Bikhar Jaana,.
Aur Kismat Ke Likhe Ko Kaun Taal Sakta Hai,.
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