~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #120 on: July 29, 2009, 07:27:40 AM »
Beautiful lines,Cara ji, shally ji,Mann ji, Anaam ji,Sammual ji,aap sabhi e bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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punam
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«Reply #121 on: July 29, 2009, 09:15:30 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 28, 2009, 08:23:50 AM
Bahut Khooooooob Cara Ji Applause


Yeh Zakm Na Bharne Payen, Yehi Koshish Subah-o-Sham Hai,
Kyunki Har Lahoo Ke Qatre Pe Likha, Mehboob Ka Naam Hai....!!!


**~** Mann **~**


wah mann ji kya baat hai...

lahoo ka mole na samjhe kyun us se pyar hai
zakhm pe zakhm kha ke kyun aaj bhi uski aas hai....
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punam
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«Reply #122 on: July 29, 2009, 09:27:58 AM »
Quote from: cara on July 29, 2009, 06:08:58 AM
KYA BAAT HAI.......
TO PATHAR DIL HAI,TERE ASHQ KYA NIKLEYGE,
YAKIN HAI, TU TAB BHI NAHIN ROHENGI,JAB DUNIYA SE HAM NIKLEYGE.

bahut khoob...

Saha saha Ke Zakhm Hum, Patthar Dil Kahalaate Hain,
Zamaana Humen Bewafa Kahata hai,Aur aansoo Hum se Bewafaai Kar Jaate Hain..

 
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«Reply #123 on: July 29, 2009, 09:32:38 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shally, Cara ji & Madhuwesh Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

aap Sabhi Ne bhi Kamaal Likha Hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #124 on: July 29, 2009, 09:35:56 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 29, 2009, 09:15:30 AM
wah mann ji kya baat hai...

lahoo ka mole na samjhe kyun us se pyar hai
zakhm pe zakhm kha ke kyun aaj bhi uski aas hai....

Shukriya Punam.. aur aapne bhi Lajawab Likha Hai.. Bahut Khooob.. Applause


Usi Ki Mohabbat Ki Khatir, Zakhmon Ko Hara Rakhta Hoon,
Suna Hai Use Mere Aansoo Dekh, Sukoon Bahut Milta Hai...!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #125 on: July 29, 2009, 10:16:35 AM »
Very beautifrul lines Punam ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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k.shael
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«Reply #126 on: July 29, 2009, 11:59:49 AM »
Quote from: cara on July 29, 2009, 06:08:58 AM
KYA BAAT HAI.......
TO PATHAR DIL HAI,TERE ASHQ KYA NIKLEYGE,
YAKIN HAI, TU TAB BHI NAHIN ROHENGI,JAB DUNIYA SE HAM NIKLEYGE.

Shukriya Cara Ji & Bahut Khoob..

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #127 on: July 29, 2009, 12:02:41 PM »
Quote from: ANAAM on July 29, 2009, 07:10:52 AM
Shallyji aapne likha "ye thread sabke liye hai koi bhi aaye aur 2 lines me apna dard bayaa.n kar de"
Tou kya baki k threads mai reservation chalta hai...?Har koi wahan likh nahi sakta kya..? Bataiye jaroor kyoki hum yahan par nay hain aur ...kabhi galat thread mai n likh baithen.(ye bhi dard hai...)

Ek dard he hai jisne rishta nebhaya hai
Auro ne tou hamaare pyar ko thukraya hai


Aisa kuch nahi hai Anaam Ji, Aap baki sab thread me bhi likh sakte ho, mera kehne ka matlab tha ki koi bhi jo apne dil ka dard batna chahta ho wo aaye aur 2 line me dard bayaa.n kar de, hope u understand wht i say,,

Shukriya

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #128 on: July 29, 2009, 12:03:31 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 29, 2009, 07:27:40 AM
Beautiful lines,Cara ji, shally ji,Mann ji, Anaam ji,Sammual ji,aap sabhi e bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent

Shukriya Madhu Dear.

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #129 on: July 29, 2009, 12:05:52 PM »
Bahut Cara Ji, Kaash Ji, Mann Ji, Anaam Ji, Poonam didi, Bahut hi aacha likha hai aap sabne,.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shukriya iss thread ko aage bhadane ke liye.. notworthy  notworthy  Thumbs UP

Shally.
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«Reply #130 on: July 30, 2009, 12:28:37 PM »
Shukriya Shally.. Applause


Aahista Phenko Patthar, Dil Toot Na Jaye,
Nishaani Hai Ishq Ki, Humse Rooth Na Jaye...!!


**~** Mann **~**
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cara
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«Reply #131 on: July 30, 2009, 12:42:06 PM »
KYA BAAT HA
Quote from: Mann on July 30, 2009, 12:28:37 PM
Shukriya Shally.. Applause


Aahista Phenko Patthar, Dil Toot Na Jaye,
Nishaani Hai Ishq Ki, Humse Rooth Na Jaye...!!


**~** Mann **~**

KYA BAAT HAI.......

ROOTHI BAITI HAI,PATHAR- DIL BANKAR AB TAK,
SAAWAN MAIN BHI BANA DIYA HAI,HUMKO PATHJAR AB TAK.
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«Reply #132 on: July 30, 2009, 01:02:57 PM »
Nice One Cara Ji... Applause


Sawan Ki Har Raat, Dil Mera Toot Jaata Hai,
Jab Khayalon Me, wo Bewafa Nazar Aata Hai....!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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cara
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«Reply #133 on: July 30, 2009, 02:03:37 PM »
Quote from: Mann on July 30, 2009, 01:02:57 PM
Nice One Cara Ji... Applause


Sawan Ki Har Raat, Dil Mera Toot Jaata Hai,
Jab Khayalon Me, wo Bewafa Nazar Aata Hai....!!!


**~** Mann **~**
kya baat hai.......

kaheti hai aaj mehfil saji hai,tuje main apne dil se milati hun,
aur pyar ka amrit pilaati hun.
dokhe baaz,dard bhi deti aur dawa bhi batati hai,
apne yaar se milati hai aur sharaab bhi pilaati hai.
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rktiwari_elex
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«Reply #134 on: August 01, 2009, 05:24:30 AM »
mai teri duniya se dur bahut dur chala jauga,
ye wada to nahi kar sakta ki tujhe bhul jauga, magar aaj ke bad tujhe yaad nahi aauga
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