~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
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«Reply #135 on: August 01, 2009, 09:06:11 AM »
Bahut Khoob Mann Ji, Cara Ji & R K Tiwari Ji.. Sach me bahut hi khoob dard bhare lafz likhe hai aap sabne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

U hi saath likhte rahiyega..

Mein apne sath tere diye gamm le ja raha hoo.n,
Aur tere liye apni yadoon ki sugaat chode ja raha hoo.n

Shally.
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«Reply #136 on: August 02, 2009, 05:43:18 PM »
Shukriya Cara Ji, Yash Bhai & Shally Dear.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Cara Ji, Shally, Rktiwari Ji & Yash Bhai.. aap Sabhi Ne Kamaal Likha Hai.. Applause Applause


Marna Hi Padhta hai Mohabbat Me, Sar-e-Aam Mere Yaaron,
Kabhi Khaamoshi Se, To Kabhi Ghut-Ghut Ke Dam Nikalta Hai...!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #137 on: August 03, 2009, 05:50:30 AM »
Quote from: Mann on August 02, 2009, 05:43:18 PM
Shukriya Cara Ji, Yash Bhai & Shally Dear.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Cara Ji, Shally, Rktiwari Ji & Yash Bhai.. aap Sabhi Ne Kamaal Likha Hai.. Applause Applause


Marna Hi Padhta hai Mohabbat Me, Sar-e-Aam Mere Yaaron,
Kabhi Khaamoshi Se, To Kabhi Ghut-Ghut Ke Dam Nikalta Hai...!!


**~** Mann **~**



KYA BAAT HAI.......

BIN MOHABBAT MAIN BHI, TOH MARNA SABKO HAI YAARON,
TOH FIR KYUN HAM MOHABAAT MAIN,THOKAR KHAKE MAREN YAARON.
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«Reply #138 on: August 03, 2009, 10:35:04 AM »
Bahut khoob Cara ji,Mann ji,Shally ji ,Kaash ji,beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #139 on: August 03, 2009, 01:57:10 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on August 03, 2009, 10:27:00 AM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot acha likha hai Cara ji,Mann ji

Dard se darna itna kyun,dard se ghabrana kaisa
isi se to khushi ka raasta milna isse bhaagna kaisa
KYA BAAT HAI......
WOH MARD KAHAN HOTA HAI, JO DARD MAIN ROTA HAIN,
WOH DARD KAHAN HOTA HAI,JO MARD MAIN, NAHIN HOTA HAIN.

MOHABBAT KE DARD MAIN TOH MARD JEETA HAI,
ISILIYE TOH US GUM MAIN HAR DUM PEETA HAIN.
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«Reply #140 on: August 04, 2009, 03:06:33 AM »
Shukriya Yash Bhai, Madhu Ji & Cara Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Yash Ji & Cara ji.. apne Bhi Kamaal likha hai Doston.. Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #141 on: August 04, 2009, 03:14:19 AM »
Upar Wale ke Raham se, Sab Kuch Hai Mere Paas,
Dard Bhi Khoob Hain, Aur Gum Bhi Beshumaar Hain....!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #142 on: August 04, 2009, 05:33:59 AM »
Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji, Cara Ji, Mann Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley & Thanx a lott Madhu dear for appreciating our work!!..


Jaane kyun kabhi kabhi dard bahut tadpata hai,
Aansoo bhi thamte nahi hai aur roya bhi nahi jaata hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #143 on: August 04, 2009, 07:33:15 AM »
Thanx & Nice One Shally.. Applause


Roti Hui Vaadiyaan Hai, Chillaati Hui Hawaayen Hain,
Meri Laash Pe Maatam Manaane, Bas Yehi To Aaye Hain...!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #144 on: August 04, 2009, 08:04:27 AM »
Shukriya Mann Ji & Bahut Khoob,

Kyun matam manata hai uss bedard ke jaane ka,
Kabhi aasmaan ko bhi rote dekha hai jab chand nahi hota..

Shally.
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«Reply #145 on: August 04, 2009, 08:12:17 AM »
Bohat Achcha Silsila Chal Raha Hai, Mashallah Thread Bohat Aage Nikal Gayi Hai,.
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«Reply #146 on: August 04, 2009, 08:13:43 AM »
Shukriya Azeem Ji, Aacha lagta agar aap bhi apne lafzo se nawazte iss thread ko..

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«Reply #147 on: August 04, 2009, 08:17:25 AM »


Dil Jahaan Se Uth Gaya, Wahaan Dil Ki Baat Kya Karein,.
Mere Dard Ko Mere Dost, Tum Mere Tak Hi Rehne Do,.

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«Reply #148 on: August 04, 2009, 08:26:16 AM »
Dardwalo se dard bantne me kyun hichkichate ho,
Maloom hai hame upar se hanste ho aur dil ko rulate ho.

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«Reply #149 on: August 04, 2009, 08:33:48 AM »


Ye Adaa Dil Waalon Ki Hai, Mittkar Bhi Rang Bharjaate Hain,.
Maine Bhi Rang Bharke Yahaan, Apne Nishaan Mitaaye Hain,.


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