~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 17, 2009, 12:33:25 PM »
Kaash ki ham judayi ko taal paate..
Tujhe na sahi teri yadon ko hi dil me sambhal paate..

Shally.
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«Reply #16 on: July 17, 2009, 12:35:13 PM »
Ab Aksar Is Baat Ka Pachtaawa Hai,.
Ke Unse Dil Kyun Lagaaya, Jinhe Iski Kadar Na Thi,.
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«Reply #17 on: July 17, 2009, 12:38:18 PM »
Kadar meri na sahi meri mohabbat ki wo karte,
Wo ek baar keh to dete ham pal-pal uske intzaar me marte..

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«Reply #18 on: July 17, 2009, 12:43:18 PM »

Jis Cheez Ke Milne Ki Umeed Nahi, Uska Intezaar Kya Karte,.
Hume To Nafratein Mayyasar Thi, Aap Tanha Pyaar Kya Karte,.

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«Reply #19 on: July 17, 2009, 12:46:06 PM »
Tanha hi mohabbat mili, tanha hi zindagi,
Tanha hi gamm mile aur tanha hi bandagi..

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«Reply #20 on: July 17, 2009, 12:48:24 PM »
Wah Shally ji and Azeem bhai,very touching and beautiful lines, icon_thumleft  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:aise hi likhte rahena.
excellent. love4
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«Reply #21 on: July 17, 2009, 12:53:13 PM »
Shukriya Madhuwesh Sis,.
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«Reply #22 on: July 17, 2009, 05:03:26 PM »
Achchha hua ki dard ne chauka diya mujhe
Kuchh neend aa chali thi shab-e-intazar me

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«Reply #23 on: July 17, 2009, 05:32:58 PM »
Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Thread Open Ki Hai Shally.. 2 Line Me Dard Bayan Karna Hai Yahan Matlab, Chaliye main bhi apna Dard ab Yehi Bayan kiya karunga.. tongue3 tongue3.. Usual Smile Nice Thread..!! Applause

Shally, Salma, Azeem Bhai & Sarvesh ji aap sab ne Bahut Hi Umda likha hai Doston.. Applause Applause



Meri Taqdeer Ki yaaron, Yeh Ajeeb Daastaan Hai,
Mera Dil Hai Jiske Paas, Wo Kisi Aur Ki Jaan Hai.....!!



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«Reply #24 on: July 17, 2009, 05:58:25 PM »
 Applause Applause Applausebahoot khoob shally, Salma, Lil bro and Sarvesh ji... bahoot acha likha hai app sab ne.

dard ne dikha diya dunia ka asal chehra
warna jee rahe the, ek nakli si dunia main hum
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«Reply #25 on: July 17, 2009, 07:28:45 PM »
Bahut khoob Shally, Salma, Chote Bhai, Sarvesh Ji , Mann Ji aur Pooja Ji bahoot achchhi mehfil sajaai app sab ne.
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«Reply #26 on: July 17, 2009, 07:32:00 PM »
Dard bharii daastaa,n sunaye kis ko
Yahan to sab dard liye phirte.n hain
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«Reply #27 on: July 18, 2009, 04:55:01 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 17, 2009, 12:48:24 PM
Wah Shally ji and Azeem bhai,very touching and beautiful lines, icon_thumleft  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:aise hi likhte rahena.
excellent. love4

Shukriya MAdhu dear sabko sarhne ke liye, aacha lagta agar aap bhi kuch likhti sath deti to..

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«Reply #28 on: July 18, 2009, 04:59:59 AM »
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 17, 2009, 05:03:26 PM
Achchha hua ki dard ne chauka diya mujhe
Kuchh neend aa chali thi shab-e-intazar me

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Bahut Khoob Sharing Hai Sarvesh Ji..

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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2009, 05:04:25 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 17, 2009, 05:32:58 PM
Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Thread Open Ki Hai Shally.. 2 Line Me Dard Bayan Karna Hai Yahan Matlab, Chaliye main bhi apna Dard ab Yehi Bayan kiya karunga.. tongue3 tongue3.. Usual Smile Nice Thread..!! Applause

Shally, Salma, Azeem Bhai & Sarvesh ji aap sab ne Bahut Hi Umda likha hai Doston.. Applause Applause



Meri Taqdeer Ki yaaron, Yeh Ajeeb Daastaan Hai,
Mera Dil Hai Jiske Paas, Wo Kisi Aur Ki Jaan Hai.....!!



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Shukriya Mann Ji, Aacha laga aapko yahaan dekhkar, hame pata hai aap dard me behad kam likhte hai phir bhi hamari khushi ke karan aapne yahaan likha!!!..aacha laga..!! aur bahut khoob likha aapne,,

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