~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

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«Reply #240 on: April 07, 2010, 12:34:27 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tamanna ji... aap maafi q maang rahe hain... jab kuch dil se nikalta hai to use roka nahi karte... poora likh diya karte hain... agar aap gunehgaar hain to chaliye hum bhi chaar line likh k aapke gunaah ke bhaagidaar ban jaate hain....

na ho udaas agar koi tere gham pe hasta hai,
kalam k chalne ko zamana pagalpan samajhta hai,
aasun bhare alfaaz to khaamosh hote hain,
dil k likhe ko to bas dil samajhta hai...


Good thread shally ji. Main bhi koshish karti hoon par do ki 4 lines ho jay to maaf kar dijiyega,sher ban jane pe use katne ka dil nahi chahta.

           Kaise karoon bayaan,k ab bayaan nahi hota,
           jitna bhi main likhti hoon, wo pura nahi hota,
           badh jata fir utna hi,k jitna likha nahi hota,
           nikaal sakta gar dard koi seene se is tarah,
           to mehfil me fir shayar koi raha nahi hota.[/color

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