~~Likhiye 2 lines jo dil ka dard bayaa.n karde"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 17, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
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salil2002
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«Reply #75 on: July 18, 2009, 06:38:03 AM »
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 18, 2009, 06:30:09 AM
Wah wah Shally Ji and Sophi Ji
Dard ke baad ab Maut per aa gaye to suniye

AE MAUT THAHAR JA ZARA DO PAL KO WAHIN PER
BATLA TO DOON DUNIYA KO KI MAIN KIS LIYE MARA

SARVESH RASTOGI
bahut achche sarvesh bhai

maut aayi is tarah jaise meri mehboob ho
julfon k saaye tale mujhko neend aa gayi
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salil2002
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«Reply #76 on: July 18, 2009, 06:38:47 AM »
meri khushi toh har waqt tujhse rubaru rahi
tune hi pehchana nahin meri khushi kisme rahi

Quote from: k.shael on July 18, 2009, 06:33:41 AM
Very Nice dear..

Kya khoob ishq nibhate rahe tum,
Karke bewafyi khud, kasoorwaar hame thehrate rahe tum..

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #77 on: July 18, 2009, 06:43:04 AM »
Very Nice written all of u..

Meri khushi ki hai kise parwah iss duniya me,
Mein to bass gamo ko dekhkar apna leta hoo.n..

Shally.
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salil2002
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«Reply #78 on: July 18, 2009, 06:46:09 AM »
raat aayi is tarah , kii phir savera na hua
od kar soye thay jo chadar woh humne taan li
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k.shael
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«Reply #79 on: July 18, 2009, 06:49:19 AM »
Jab mar jao.n mein to ek kaam karna,
Apni koi melli si chadar mere naam karna..

Shally.
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punam
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«Reply #80 on: July 18, 2009, 06:49:32 AM »
sabne bahut khoob likha....jitna bhi yehan post sab padhi bahut acha likhe sab ne...

dil se khela woh dillagi samjah kar
bich rah me chhod gaya sapne dikha kar..
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salil2002
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«Reply #81 on: July 18, 2009, 06:52:56 AM »
bahut achche punam sis and shally dear

maut se yeh gujarish rahi meri kii tujhse milne de
do lamhe tere saath mere hans k gujarne de
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punam
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«Reply #82 on: July 18, 2009, 07:12:27 AM »
shukriya saahil bro...bahut khoob likha aap ne..

bwafa kahoon kisse koun daga diya
woh chhod gaye maut pass ane na diya..
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #83 on: July 18, 2009, 07:15:16 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on July 18, 2009, 06:46:09 AM
raat aayi is tarah , kii phir savera na hua
od kar soye thay jo chadar woh humne taan li

Wah wah Saahil Ji
Hila ke rakh diya aapke is sher ne
Bahut bahut khooooob, kya kahane
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k.shael
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«Reply #84 on: July 18, 2009, 08:09:05 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 18, 2009, 06:49:32 AM
sabne bahut khoob likha....jitna bhi yehan post sab padhi bahut acha likhe sab ne...

dil se khela woh dillagi samjah kar
bich rah me chhod gaya sapne dikha kar..

Shukriya didi, aapko yahaan dekhkar bahut aacha laga..aur bahut aacha likha hai aapne..u hi likhti rahiyega..iss thread par

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #85 on: July 18, 2009, 08:11:04 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on July 18, 2009, 06:52:56 AM
bahut achche punam sis and shally dear

maut se yeh gujarish rahi meri kii tujhse milne de
do lamhe tere saath mere hans k gujarne de

Shukriya aur bahut khoob Salil..

Hans ke gujare jo lamhe tere saath, wo kahiin kho gaye,
Tu to bana hi nahi tha kabhi hamara, aur ham to sirf tere ho gaye..

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #86 on: July 18, 2009, 08:12:02 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 18, 2009, 07:12:27 AM
shukriya saahil bro...bahut khoob likha aap ne..

bwafa kahoon kisse koun daga diya
woh chhod gaye maut pass ane na diya..




Bahut khoob didi,

Shally.
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Sammual
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«Reply #87 on: July 18, 2009, 08:44:49 AM »
Bahut Khoob Guyz. Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aap SubNe.
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k.shael
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«Reply #88 on: July 18, 2009, 08:47:38 AM »
Quote from: Sammual on July 18, 2009, 08:44:49 AM
Bahut Khoob Guyz. Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aap SubNe.



Sammual ji aap bhi to saath dete Huh?

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #89 on: July 18, 2009, 11:08:11 AM »
Dard mere ko mere andar hi rehne de,
Jo bhi hai haal mera mujhe usi mein rehne de,

Shally.
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