Lipat Lipat Ke Tanhaii Se Hum Roye.....................

by waheed_rose2004 on April 01, 2005, 01:28:05 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 16, 2005, 07:21:18 AM »
wow waheed,superb,sonu ne bhi bohaaaaat accha likha.Good both of u.
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«Reply #31 on: April 16, 2005, 07:41:06 AM »
hmmmmmmmmm.........ur  welcome....nidhi.........:lol:
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«Reply #32 on: April 16, 2005, 08:28:05 AM »
yeaa taklo meyrye lambey bal hai samjhey na tumahri thra jhaler vaala saer nahi hai samjhey na ...

keo kesi ney tumahri zanjeer tumahrey he galey mey daldi hai keya laughing4":))laughing4 beyhchara waheed
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«Reply #33 on: April 16, 2005, 08:45:50 AM »
"Tanhaiyon se lipat-lipat ke ham roye......,
 arsaa beet gaya,raaton ko ham na soye..,
 unki "yadein" bhi nahi jinhe yaad kar sakoon,
 unki tasveer ke sahare sar rakh kar,
 unka naam larajte labon pe le lekar,
 apni hi zindagi je juda ham hoye."
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«Reply #34 on: April 16, 2005, 09:04:04 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Tanhaiyon se lipat-lipat ke ham roye......,
 arsaa beet gaya,raaton ko ham na soye..,
 unki "yadein" bhi nahi jinhe yaad kar sakoon,
 unki tasveer ke sahare sar rakh kar,
 unka naam larajte labon pe le lekar,
 apni hi zindagi je juda ham hoye."


wah!!!!!!!!  nidhi..........jawaab  nahi  tumhara ...... bahot  accha  laga  padhkar..........

 tongue3  tongue3

Yehi Duniya Ki Marzi Hai To Aao Ser Jhukayein Hum
Yehi Behtar Hai Wo Guzra Zamaana Bhool Jayein Hum...............
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«Reply #35 on: April 16, 2005, 09:09:02 AM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Tanhaiyon se lipat-lipat ke ham roye......,
 arsaa beet gaya,raaton ko ham na soye..,
 unki "yadein" bhi nahi jinhe yaad kar sakoon,
 unki tasveer ke sahare sar rakh kar,
 unka naam larajte labon pe le lekar,
 apni hi zindagi je juda ham hoye."


wah!!!!!!!!  nidhi..........jawaab  nahi  tumhara ...... bahot  accha  laga  padhkar..........

 tongue3  tongue3

Yehi Duniya Ki Marzi Hai To Aao Ser Jhukayein Hum
Yehi Behtar Hai Wo Guzra Zamaana Bhool Jayein Hum...............
Than waheed and thanx for the wonderful reply also,well said. Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: April 16, 2005, 09:15:00 AM »
nzron s hum na khaye hain buhat dhoke
jo bhi  masoom mila wohi qatal nikla
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«Reply #37 on: April 16, 2005, 09:19:43 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Tanhaiyon se lipat-lipat ke ham roye......,
 arsaa beet gaya,raaton ko ham na soye..,
 unki "yadein" bhi nahi jinhe yaad kar sakoon,
 unki tasveer ke sahare sar rakh kar,
 unka naam larajte labon pe le lekar,
 apni hi zindagi je juda ham hoye."


wah!!!!!!!!  nidhi..........jawaab  nahi  tumhara ...... bahot  accha  laga  padhkar..........

 tongue3  tongue3

Yehi Duniya Ki Marzi Hai To Aao Ser Jhukayein Hum
Yehi Behtar Hai Wo Guzra Zamaana Bhool Jayein Hum...............
Than waheed and thanx for the wonderful reply also,well said. Usual Smile


ur  welcome  nidhi.........................:lol:  thanx  nahin  bolte  :wink:
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«Reply #38 on: April 17, 2005, 02:35:33 AM »
:::::bahoot khoob nidhi ji, ::::::

:::::acha likha hai takloo(jhaler key sir valey ), :::

:::::very nice naveed ji ::::
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«Reply #39 on: April 17, 2005, 03:15:45 AM »
nidhi tu kia kamaal ki cheez hai yaar............................................. .............................................
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«Reply #40 on: April 17, 2005, 11:49:34 AM »
Every one has written superb here ...
Keep writing all ...


Nigahe aapki pahechaan hai hamari,
Muskuraahat aapki shaan hai hamari,
Rakhna hifaazat apne aap ko,
Kyunki saanse aapki hai jaan hamari ...
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«Reply #41 on: April 17, 2005, 01:01:35 PM »
Thanx sonu,naveed and JHL,good work JHL.

"Masoom nigahon me unki is kadar ham khoye,
 toote khwab leke tanhaiyon me roye..........,
 jo wo saath de dete hamara to zindagi ban jaati,
 bas ek unhe chod saari duniya wale hamari kahani sun sun ke roye."
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«Reply #42 on: April 17, 2005, 01:02:59 PM »
You are most welcome Nidhi ...
And thanks too ...
Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne bhi ...
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«Reply #43 on: April 18, 2005, 04:34:45 AM »
your welcome nidhi ji..
 
masoom to atey jatey hai,
masoomu ka keya hia vo to rang badeltey rehtey hai,
khab to tutey bikhartey hai or phir saver jatey hai ,
beyvafa to uska naam hai jo majhdar mey ahker sath chood jatey hai,
duniya ka keya hia her kahani per ro jati hai,
pal do pal key ahsoo yadey humey satati hai,
bus ek unhey chood ker meyri kaber per sari duniya ati jati hai.

shukriya jhl ji good work keep it up good work:)
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«Reply #44 on: April 18, 2005, 09:50:34 AM »
u com com  nidhi

bas ek unhe chod saari duniya wale hamari kahani sun sun ke
roye thay teri bewafi k qise meri jaan sun sun  k !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Thanx sonu,naveed and JHL,good work JHL.

"Masoom nigahon me unki is kadar ham khoye,
 toote khwab leke tanhaiyon me roye..........,
 jo wo saath de dete hamara to zindagi ban jaati,
 bas ek unhe chod saari duniya wale hamari kahani sun sun ke roye."
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